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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Gosh I'll be back from my laptop.
Btw adi all the bestest for your enterance exams

love lekha.

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
Part 30
 
 
 
Chaand tries to back out of the room, but finds the door blocked by Haseena. He twists around to face her, and they stare into each other's eyes for a few moments. Haseena tilts her head to the right and snarls. Chaand matches her move by twisting his neck to the left...
 
Chaand (whispers): Haseenaaa...I love you.
 
Haseena (hissing): Oh Chaand...
 
Chaand: Haseenaaa...
 
Haseena (sternly): Chaand!
 
[Chaand jumps. Haseena's eyes turn blue.]
 
Tum us ladki ko yahaan nahin laaoge. No way!
 
Chaand (trying to back away): Par...Haseen...Abhay...
 
Haseena (hissing): Abhay does not know what is good for him! Baccha hai woh!
 
Chaand: But Haseena...then...woh...
 
[Haseena tilts her neck. Chaand gulps.]
 
Haseena: What woh?
 
Chaand: Pia nahin toh...it's...Kabir for Abhay...
 
[Haseena stares at him in puzzlement, until she realises what he is saying.]
 
Haseena (shocked): NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Chaand (in a small voice): I know.
 
Haseena: But...Chaand...you know na...we cannot change Pia. I cannot do this. I will not allow it. Please Chaand...kuch karo...do something!
 
Chaand: Ummm...Haseena?
 
Haseena: Haan?
 
Chaand: What do I know?
 
[Haseena stares at him. He gulps.]
 
 
*
 
 
Abhay is pacing in his room and thinking.
 
 
Red? Ewww! Woh dye...woh shirt...woh lipstick...I HATE red!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
I wonder Pia kya kar rahi hogi...
 
She looks good in red...delicious.
 
Delicious? No Abhay...jaanwar mat bano. You are the good vampire.
 
Kyun jaanwar banne par majboor kartihai woh mujhe?
 
Kyun meri kismat ko mujh par taras nahin aata?
 
Kyun?
 
Why?!
 
*sees a mosquito*
 
Abhay (fiercely): Door raho mujh se. Stay. Away. From. Me!
 
[Feeling satisfied finally, Abhay prepares to hit the sack.]
 
 
*
 
 
At Dobriyal House...
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Madhu?
 
Mrs. Dobriyal: Hmm?
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Arey suno na.
 
Mrs. Dobriyal: Kya hai Arnab?
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Kuch toh gadbad hai. Yeh Misha...Panchhi...kuch toh gadbad hai...
 
Mrs. Dobriyal: Kuch nahin hai...bas aaj tumne CID ka full episode dekha na, isiliye lag raha hai.
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Achha?
 
Mrs. Dobriyal: Chalo ab chup chaap so jaao.
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Nahin. Main zara yeh book padh loon.
 
Mrs. Dobriyal: Okay...goodnight.
 
[She goes away, leaving her husband immersed in his book by the fireplace. Suddenly, wind starts blowing, and a strong gust of wind flutters the pages of his book, and a photograph falls from his book into the fire. When he sees it, he gets the shock of his life!!]
 
 
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged

Firstly around of applause for me!! StarClapClapClap

Poocho kyun? Because finally after long im the...First!! So a YAY for that! lol.
 
And now clap for Adi!! ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
Whyyy? Because she updated soo fast! And that too a hilarious one yet again! ;)
 
Oh gosh i just love how you show Chaandeena convo and Chaand being scared of Haseena! I can so imagine that! ROFLROFLROFL
Esp the gulp and what can i do was ROFL!!
 
Aur Abhay! Uska kya kehna...mosquito ko bhi nahi choda! Stay away from me! ROFLROFLROFL
 
And yeh Mr.Dob bahut tv dekhte hain. And God! a new mystery? You are really good at that! Looking forward to know who Is in the pic! Wink
 
Happy you updated! Continue sooon! Big smile


Edited by sugaryanu - 25 May 2011 at 10:59am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
what a part adi loved itClapClapClapEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
poor chand i liked the way he said i love u to haseena to calm her down but his attempt went in vainCryLOLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
also liked the way he gulps when haseena scold himROFLROFLROFLROFL
as to abhay mosquito ko bhi nahi chodaROFLROFLROFL
he has to say  that line to someone only then can  he sleep in peace(if at all he can sleepLOLLOL)
loved that line from CID "kuch to gadbad hai"ROFLROFLROFL
wondering whose photo has arnab foundShockedConfusedLOL
thanks for the pmBig smile
awesome partClapClap
update soonWink

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Firstly around of applause for me!! StarClapClapClap

Poocho kyun? Because finally after long im the...First!! So a YAY for that! lol.
 
And now clap for Adi!! ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
Whyyy? Because she updated soo fast! And that too a hilarious one yet again! ;)
 
Oh gosh i just love how you show Chaandeena convo and Chaand being scared of Haseena! I can so imagine that! ROFLROFLROFL
Esp the gulp and what can i do was ROFL!!
 
Aur Abhay! Uska kya kehna...mosquito ko bhi nahi choda! Stay away from me! ROFLROFLROFL
 
And yeh Mr.Dob bahut tv dekhte hain. And God! a new mystery? You are really good at that! Looking forward to know who Is in the pic! Wink
 
Happy you updated! Continue sooon! Big smile
 
 
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations Anu!!! *gives her a sports drink*
 
LOLLOLLOL Glad you enjoyed this part.
 
Yes, a new mystery, and more to come...
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by mansim

what a part adi loved itClapClapClapEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
poor chand i liked the way he said i love u to haseena to calm her down but his attempt went in vainCryLOLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
also liked the way he gulps when haseena scold himROFLROFLROFLROFL
as to abhay mosquito ko bhi nahi chodaROFLROFLROFL
he has to say  that line to someone only then can  he sleep in peace(if at all he can sleepLOLLOL)
loved that line from CID "kuch to gadbad hai"ROFLROFLROFL
wondering whose photo has arnab foundShockedConfusedLOL
thanks for the pmBig smile
awesome partClapClap
update soonWink
 
 
LOLLOLLOLLOL Thank you Mansim!
 
Ah...well, goes to show na that husbands should not try to outsmart their wives...and I hope the story shows that Chaand and Haseena are as normal a couple as any. Wink
 
Hmm...Abhay kya, even I like to say that to moskies! ROFL
 
 
 
 
A li'l teaser for tonight... Wink
 
The photograph that Mr. Dobriyal found is of someone we know well...someone he knows well. A secret that he's on the brink of discovering.
 
What that mystery is, you will find out tonight!
 
Wink
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 28 May 2011 at 7:41am

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Good update Adi. Yeh Chand kitna darta hai.

Aur Abhay - mosquito ko bhi? Ha ha good use of humor.

Oh nooo ek aur mystery...

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

Good update Adi. Yeh Chand kitna darta hai.

Aur Abhay - mosquito ko bhi? Ha ha good use of humor.

Oh nooo ek aur mystery...
 
 
ROFL Mysteries go with the territory!!!!!!!
 
Thank you though.
 
Ready for the next update, I hope? Wink
 
 

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
Part 31
 
 
 
Haseena stares into the fire. Chaand contemplates running away, and edges backwards towards the door, but she looks up and snarls. He quickly rushes to her side and sits down with her. Haseena turns back to the fireplace.
 
Haseena: Jab tumne mujhe pehli baar dekha...
 
Chaand (smiling): Yeahhh...!!!
 
Haseena (glaring): Will you shut up? (softly) Jab tumne mujhe pehli baar dekha, I was a human... And a few days later, a coven of vampires attacked our city. Kisi ko nahin chhoda unhone... I hid in a cupboard, with my brother's smelly socks, but they found me. [There is complete silence in the room for a few moments.] They found it funny somehow...mera wahaan chhupna. Phir Lavyadei ke dad wahaan aaye. He convinced the others to leave me...to change me. I was to be their pet...
 
Chaand (confusedly): What's a pet?
 
Haseena (ignoring him): He took me home. Massiji was delighted. She had a new servant!
 
Chaand (hissing): Who. Is. This. Massiji?
 
Haseena (irritatedly) Uff Chaand! Pia jaise hote ja rahe ho tum! Massiji is Lavyadei's mother!
 
[Chaand's eyes turn blue, and he jumps under the covers. Haseena tries to see his face, but he doesn't let her. He shakes badly.]
 
Chaand: H-h-h-aseeenaaa! She scares me!
 
Haseena (sighing): She scared me too. I was alone. My parents were dead. And I had no one to protect me...like ...Piaaa... I was in hell...a hell worse than eternal life, because that eternal life was bound. I was not free... (smiling) until the day you came. *sighs* Phir bhi Chaand, I wish that I had a choice. And more than that, that someone had protected me, guided me. I still haven't learnt to control myself, Chaand. Aur Abhay ke aane se pehle...it was worse.
 
Abhay has suffered. I cannot bear his pain. If Pia suffers, Abhay will suffer too. [She turns to him pleadingly.] I can't do this to either of them Chaand.
 
Chaand: But Haseena...we will be with her. We will guide her. We will protect her. Kabir se toh better hai na.
 
Haseena: No! No no no! We cannot do this. It is too dangerous...too wrong...
 
Chaand: But we changed Abhay. You only told me to.
 
Haseena: That was different. He was dying. We saved him.
 
[She is interrupted by a sound from Abhay's room. Her eyes turn blue, and she rushes off to see what has happened. Chaand thinks.]
 
Chaand: Hmmm...to change Pia, she needs to be dying. (happily) Super cool!!!!!!!
 
 
*
 
 
Outside their room, LD, who has been eavesdropping, turns and smiles to herself.
 
LD: Pia? *smiles wickedly* Hmmm!!!!!
 
 
*
 
 
Mr. Dobriyal stares down at the picture in his hand. Then he yells for Misha, who comes running.
 
Misha (out of breath): Yes papa?
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Yeh kya hai?
 
Misha: What?
 
Mr. Dobriyal (thrusting the picture into Misha's hand): Yeh.
 
[Misha takes the paper and stares at it.]
 
Misha: Oh my God! Pia ke paas itni cool dress hai, aur humne aise hi uske Juliet waale costume pe itne paise kharch diye! I could have bought a few drinks with them!
 
Mr. Dobriyal: Lekin yeh ladka...Abhay... Why is she with him? Why is she.. *pulls a face* hugging him?
 
Misha (looks up at her father exasperatedly): Dad, that is what girls and boys in love do!
 
Mr. Dobriyal (shocked): In love? Kisse?
 
Misha (rolling her eyes): Duh!!!!
 
[Misha takes the picture and goes away. Mr. Dobriyal sits down to wonder who Pia and Abhay are in love with.]
 
 
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