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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 45)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

Toh Anu's idea was correct, Panchi and Sid are playing hide and seek. Anu - good job, keep it up.
LOLLOLLOL Anu's the most intelligent girl ever! Smile 
 
Haseena ne bada rob rakha hai dono bachoan par. Dono hi dar gaye, vaise I can't imagine in reality, both of them getting anything but scared. ROFL Abhay will look so cute, hiding behind the sofa. 
ROFL Awww!! He'll look so so sooo darn cute! Embarrassed

 
Loh Piya ne bhi peena shuru kar diya - rooh afzah.ROFL Vampires ki sangat mein rahegi toh yahi hoga. Aur yaar please please mujhe batayo na yeh Lavyadei hai kaun. You promised that you will tell me. I was thinking she is just going to sing the item number - beedi jalai le badan se Pia, ...
ROFLROFL I will...slowly slowly. ROFL

Aunty kisko bola ROFLROFL, badi image conscious hai LD. Pia, diya, kiya, jiya - good rhyming. 

LOLThank you! Wink
 
Aur yeh Abhay ka actual orientation hai kya. Kyun bechare Chand ko pareshaan kar rahi ho. Poor thing... din raat uske dimaage mein kaise kaise khayalaat aate rehte hain.
LOLLOLLOL Actual orientation...*blushes*

Mujhe pata hai Haseena ko kya hua. Woh zabardasti rest tonic le rahi hai - Adi ke karan ROFLROFL
ROFL Poor mommy-in-law...has to work so much na..tabhi.

Poor Sid, bin maa baap ka bachcha - mujhe uspe bahut taras aa raha hai.
Awww! Yeah..

 
Bhookh fir bhookh - Mein na kehti thi ki tere characters ko bhookh bahut lagti haiROFLROFL
LOLLOLLOL Uska bhi ek reason hai..Wink

 
Who was that? Sid?
Who? What? I think I'll have to revise. LOL

Excellent yaar. I know you are very busy these days because of your exams. But still you are taking time and updating the crossroads, that's really nice of you. Thanks a lot.Wink 
 
ROFLROFL *No comments* ROFLROFL
 

 
 
Originally posted by sugaryanu

ROFLROFLROFL 

You know at first i didnt like LD much but in this update...she was FUN!!! ROFL 
LOLLOLLOL LD...hmm...super annoying na? Wink
 
The whole Pia, LD, Chand, Abhay, Sid convo was hilarious! Enjoyed it! Big smileROFL 
 LOL Thankoo!
 
When will i get some Birdie wings? Ouch 
Sid kahin akele akele na kha jaye! :P
LOLLOLLOL Woh toh you only ask him na. Wink
 
Thanks for such fun updates!! Embarrassed
And you are updating so fast these days! Gooody!
but concentrate on studies too! Best of luck! :)
LOLLOLLOL Kiya na concentrate. ROFL
 
 
Originally posted by shaggyscooby

OMG Abhay and Sid fighting for ChaandROFL and hiding behind lamp and sofa.
It was awesome
 
LOLLOL Thank you.

 

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Adi,
 
I just logged in today after a whole month. lol. Haven't been active lately, I have been studying like crazy for my exams and I have one big one coming up. But, just took a little break today and decided to catch to your "FF Crossroads" updates. They were hilarious as always. Love the twists of Reva, Kabir, and Abhay. LOL Poor Chand! LOL
 
Keep rocking.
 
 
Payyal!!!!
 
Sorry I couldn't reply earlier - became very busy with the 'bade waale' exams. LOL Hope yours went well.
 
Thanks for the encouraging comment. Tc! SmileSmile
 
 

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
HugHello Friends!Hug
 
First of all, an apology for updating so late - had exams going on - they started in March and ended just now!Ouch Have to prepare for my entrance exam now, so still going to be a bit busy.
 
And yeah, updates will continue to be "small", as a lot of readers complain, but they'll be regular, hopefully.LOL Those who don't like this format, umm, sorry, but I can't do anything about it.Ermm As it is, each part takes a lot of time to write - but in case you haven't noticed, they are all action-packed. So it's just that I prefer to say lots of stuff in just a few words.Wink
 
Anyway, on with the story!LOL
 
 
 
Part 29
 
 
 
Panchhi struggles, but the hand clamps down tighter. A voice hisses in her ear...
 
Voice: Door raho Siddharth se. He is not for you...
 
Panchhi struggles more, and suddenly she feels the hand releasing her. She spins around, only to see...nothing...
 
There is no one.
 
The forest is still, silent save for a sole cricket chirping away merrily.
 
Panchhi screams.
 
 
*
 
 
Abhay: Oh Dad! You are so cool!
 
Chaand (grinning): I am, aren't I?
 
Abhay: Yeah...but we must put her right before Mom wakes up. Aisa karo, you give her that green liquid from my cupboard. Tab tak main Pia ko chhod kar aata hoon uske hostel.
 
[Chaand looks at Pia, who is looking disappointed.]
 
Chaand: Umm...thodi der rehne do na ise yahin.
 
Abhay (looking at Pia sadly): No Dad. It is not safe.
 
Chaand: Hmmm...I understand. Samajhta hoon main.
 
Pia: Bye Uncle!
 
Chaand: Bye beta. May the Moon cool you.
 
Pia: Hain?
 
Abhay: Dad said 'bye'.
 
Pia: Oh..okayyy...
 
[Abhay takes her away before she can ask any more questions. When he comes back, Chaand has revived both the ladies, who have retired to thir rooms, and is sitting with a drink, staring into the flames as they dance around in the fireplace. He looks up as Abhay enters.]
 
Chaand: Ah...Abhayyy... We. Need. To. Talk.
 
[Abhay knows it then - he is in trouble.]
 
 
*
 
 
In the jungle, Panchhi is going on screaming when Sid reaches her. It takes him a few moments to calm her down. She turns to him, sobbing.
 
Sid (in a soothing voice): What's wrong, love? Why are you upset?
 
Panchhi (sobbing): Woh...Sid...main...count kar rahi thi toh ...
 
Sid: Toh?
 
Panchhi (crying a little less): Toh kisi ne...they said...tum...main.. *sobs again*
 
Sid: What, baby?
 
Panchhi: Oh Sid! Usne kaha tum se door rahoon! Tum...galat ho.
 
[Sid hugs her and pats her back until she stops crying.]
 
Sid (a little grimly) : Love, usne...galat nahin kaha ...but hey...if this is true love, we will sort it out!
 
Panchhi (looking up at him): Really?
 
Sid: Do you believe in the power of love? That it transcends the boundaries?
 
Panchhi: What boundaries?
 
Sid (exasperatedly): Arey koi bhi!
 
Panchhi: Umm..okay...yeah. I do.
 
Sid (smiling again): Bas then. Really.
 
Panchhi (whispering happily): Really.
 
[They hug. The cricket chirps happily.]
 
 
*
 
 
Abhay settles down in front of the fire for the 'discussion' with Chaand. Both are feeling very uncomfortable, and their discomfort shows in their stances. Finally, Chaand clears his throat and starts speaking.
 
Chaand: Look, Abhay... Tum ab bade ho gaye ho.
 
Abhay (muttering): Glad you noticed.
 
Chaand (ignoring him): Yeh talk...I mean...yeh baat karne ka...I think...er...time...uh...ho gaya...you know, hai.
 
Abhay (suspiciously): What talk?
 
Chaand (rapidly): You know...I have seen that you don't know how to neck... *Abhay looks at the floor, ashamed* and...you know...red lipstick...dye...shirt...Kabir...
 
Abhay (looking up, shocked): Dad!!!!!!!
 
Chaand: I know I know...humans mein aajkal legal hai...but hum vampires ke kuch rules hain. Rules ko chhodo. It is not wrong or unnatural...I mean, phir hum kya hain, right? Par Abhay, tum pehle Maithili ke saath...aur suddenly Kabir...
 
Abhay: But Dad!
 
Chaand: Abhay. Maana humne tumhein janam nahin diya. Maana ke I am not a good 'dad', human terms nein, but your well-being is still our responsibility. I want you to be happy.
 
Abhay: I understand Dad, but...
 
Chaand: Abhay. Let me finish. Jab tum Pia se mile, I thought...I was afraid, because of Maithili, but Abhay, it was...right somehow. Theek tha jo sab ho raha tha. Yeh Kabir kahaan se aaya?
 
Abhay: Dad...
 
Chaand (sighing): Is new generation ko itna mat follow karo Abhay ki tum khud ko bhool jaao. I like Pia. She will make a good vampire...
 
Abhay (angrily): NO!!!!
 
Chaand (startled): Abhay!
 
Abhay (pacing around the room): No Dad. I cannot. Pia...woh special hai. Woh...insaan hai. I cannot turn her into a monster.
 
Chaand (in a hurt tone): Monster?
 
Abhay: Yes Dad. A monster. A vampire. Ek khoon peeta...whatever jo Discovery Channel waale kehte hain Hindi mein.
 
Chaand: Yaar itni Hindi mujhe bhi nahin aati. Chhaddo. Tu bas itna bataa, Pia se shaadi karega ya nahin?
 
Abhay: No way! I belong to Kabir! Mera tann, mann, dhan, sab uska hai.
 
Chaand (laughing): Bestiii!!!!!!!
 
Abhay: Kyun?
 
Chaand: Humaare paas dhan hai hi nahin! We Raichands are bankrupt!!!!!
 
 
[He keeps laughing loudly, and goes up to his room. He enters the room, still laughing loudly. Haseena, who has been pacing in the room, turns.]
 
Haseena: Chaand.
 
Chaand (still laughing): Haan?
 
Haseena (hissing): We. Need. To. Talk.
 
[Chaand stops laughing. He gulps. He knows that he is in trouble.]
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
welcome backClapClap
and what a comeback with your ffEmbarrassedWink
loved itEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
it was hillarious ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
poor chand now he is in troubleCry ha ha haROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFL Hilarious.

Whose voice it was? Anu toh nahi ho sakti. She is not part of crossroads. Then who is it?

Chand ki misunderstandingROFLROFL

I just realised that Sid is good in CrossroadsLOL

Abhay - Woh jo Discovery channel wale hindi mein jehte hainROFLROFL

Chand hindi bhool gaya?ShockedROFLROFL Does he remember sanskrit then?ROFLROFL Chalo, he can get a good job as sanskrit teacherROFLROFL

Abhay ka tann mann dhann - Kabir? Shocked yeh kab hua? Ya fir Pia se shaadi nahi karni isliye? ROFLROFL

Bestiii - hamare pass dhann kahan haiROFLROFL



Thanks Adi for update. And yes, please keep your focus on your entrance exam. That is important.




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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Adiii!!!!Hug

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

Missed u n crossroads so much!!

and as always it Totally cracked me up,LOL

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Chaand: Bye beta.may the moon cool you

Piya: Hain??ROFLROFL

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Sid:Love transcends all boundaries

Pancchi: Which ones?

Sid:Arey koi bhi! ROFLROFL

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could totally imagine them saying that,
and the convo of Chaand Abhay too was damn funny...

Missing you guys sooo much,Cry

Adi,you really make my day by writing such awesome hilarious FF's

All d the best for your Ent exams,do well!!

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

welcome backClapClap
and what a comeback with your ffEmbarrassedWink
loved itEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
it was hillarious ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
poor chand now he is in troubleCry ha ha haROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink
 
 
Thank you Mansim. Glad you enjoyed it. SmileSmileSmileSmile
 

Originally posted by Ritzie

ROFLROFLROFL Hilarious.


Whose voice it was? Anu toh nahi ho sakti. She is not part of crossroads. Then who is it?
Guess who. Wink
Chand ki misunderstandingROFLROFL
LOL
I just realised that Sid is good in CrossroadsLOL

Abhay - Woh jo Discovery channel wale hindi mein jehte hainROFLROFL

Chand hindi bhool gaya?ShockedROFLROFL Does he remember sanskrit then?ROFLROFL Chalo, he can get a good job as sanskrit teacherROFLROFL
Lol...I doubt he remembers Sanskrit even.

 
Abhay ka tann mann dhann - Kabir? Shocked yeh kab hua? Ya fir Pia se shaadi nahi karni isliye? ROFLROFL
*ahem* Wink
Bestiii - hamare pass dhann kahan haiROFLROFL



Thanks Adi for update. And yes, please keep your focus on your entrance exam. That is important.


Thanks Ritzie. Working on that too. Smile

 
 
Originally posted by cutemug

Adiii!!!!Hug
Mugsie!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hug

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

Missed u n crossroads so much!!
Awww! Me too missed you!
and as always it Totally cracked me up,LOL
LOLLOLGlad it did!
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Chaand: Bye beta.may the moon cool you

Piya: Hain??ROFLROFL

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Sid:Love transcends all boundaries

Pancchi: Which ones?

Sid:Arey koi bhi! ROFLROFL

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could totally imagine them saying that,
and the convo of Chaand Abhay too was damn funny...
LOLLOL Thank you. Wink
Missing you guys sooo much,Cry

Adi,you really make my day by writing such awesome hilarious FF's

All d the best for your Ent exams,do well!!
 
Awww! Thanks soo much! Smile Hope your job's going well, and Mrudz is doing well too...oh I'll PM you - no chatting here now that we are in the FF section. Wink

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Un-Reserved!! ROFL
 
 
OMG!! I was SOOO MISSING this!!!!
 
What awesomlicious update!! I was laughing and laughing! ROFLROFL
 

Chaand: Bye beta. May the Moon cool you.

 
What was that all about?!?!? ROFLROFLROFL
 
And honestly i just luuurve the Chaand in your FF!! He is truly the 'Cool dad' as Abhay said! ROFL
 
And Kabir abhi tak hai! I mean woh confusion still going on!! Oh Goddd! ROFLROFL
 

Chaand (laughing): Bestiii!!!!!!!

 

Abhay: Kyun?

 

Chaand: Humaare paas dhan hai hi nahin! We Raichands are bankrupt!!!!!

 

Oh God!! I was laughing so hard at this!! Hilarious man! ROFLROFLROFL
 
And haye poor Sid! Ab kaun agaya? Sari hide and seek kharab kardi! ROFL
 
Luuurved the update yaar! Was sooo needed! Thanks for the good yoga session! ROFLROFLROFL


Edited by sugaryanu - 24 May 2011 at 6:33am

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Un-Reserved!! ROFL
 LOLLOLLOL
 
OMG!! I was SOOO MISSING this!!!!
 And we were missing YOU! Embarrassed
What awesomlicious update!! I was laughing and laughing! ROFLROFL
 LOLLOLLOL Thankoo. :D

Chaand: Bye beta. May the Moon cool you.

 
What was that all about?!?!? ROFLROFLROFL
That's Chaand trying to be 'cool'. ROFL
 
And honestly i just luuurve the Chaand in your FF!! He is truly the 'Cool dad' as Abhay said! ROFL
:D My Daddy-in-Law!!!!!! :D
 
And Kabir abhi tak hai! I mean woh confusion still going on!! Oh Goddd! ROFLROFL
 Confusion...us...them...janam janam ka saath hai. Wink

Chaand (laughing): Bestiii!!!!!!!

 

Abhay: Kyun?

 

Chaand: Humaare paas dhan hai hi nahin! We Raichands are bankrupt!!!!!

 

Oh God!! I was laughing so hard at this!! Hilarious man! ROFLROFLROFL
LOLLOL Thank you. Wink
 
And haye poor Sid! Ab kaun agaya? Sari hide and seek kharab kardi! ROFL
 ROFL You should be happy. Khelte toh na jaane kya hota... Wink
Luuurved the update yaar! Was sooo needed! Thanks for the good yoga session! ROFLROFLROFL
LOLLOLLOL I'm just very happy that you're back. Now I'm feeling like updating. Tongue

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