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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 44)

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

superb updateClapClap

Thank you!! Smile
 
why is panchi counting in the jungle?ConfusedLOL

are sid and panchi playing hide and seekConfusedLOL

You and Anu are my most intelligent readers....or maybe you both do mind reading too!! ShockedWinkLOL
 
misha's dream sequence was also goodLOL(bimbos dancing in the backgroundROFLROFL loved the song suites her perfectlyLOL)
Thank you! Smile Poor bimbos..show waale ignore toh I thought I'll give them some work to do. Wink
 

abhay and sid's conversation was too goodROFLROFLROFL

LOLLOL Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Wink
 
love the sasur and bahurani sceneLOL
 
LOL Thank you.

thanks for the pmWink

You're welcome. Smile
 
update soonLOL

Yup...as soon as I'm allowed to. Wink 

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 28
 
 
In the jungle.....
 
Panchhi: One thousand nine hundred and ninety six. One thousand nine hundred and ninety seven......
 
 
*
 
At the Raichand Mansion.....
 
 
Abhay and Sid go still as soon as they hear Haseena's shout.
 
They stare at her.
 
They stare at each other.
 
They stare at her.
 
They run.
 
Abhay hides behind the sofa.
 
Sid runs behind a lamp.
 
Chaand comes in with Pia. Both smile at each other and raise their glasses of Roohafza in a toast.
 
Haseena faints.
 
Lavyadei (LD) wakes up.
 
LD (croaking): I...am...thirssssssty......beedi...jala.....ke.......
 
Pia: Haw aunty! You shouldn't smoke! Tabhi aapki aawaaz bhi aisi hai.
 
LD (suddenly normal): Aunty kis ko boli be beedi jala ke?
 
Pia (shocked): Hawww! Maine kuch nahin kiya! Kyunki mera naam hai Pia!
 
LD: Piya? Tune kya piya?
 
Pia (happily): Roohafza. Uncle ne diya.
 
LD (choking): Haaye Chandu..yeh tumne kya kiya?
 
Abhay (singing): Pia Pia o Pia Pia..... [He sees Chaand looking at him curiously and changes track hurriedly.] Subah shaam kahe mera jiya.....chain se baithoonga na jab tak khoon tera na maine piya! [He offers Chaand a grin. Chaand looks taken aback. He doesn't say anything though, and turns away uneasily.]
 
Chaand (angrily): I don't need to explain my actions to anyone. Meri Haseena ko kya hua?
 
Abhay: Dad woh...
 
LD (gasping): Yahaan main pyaas se marr rahi hoon aur mera khayaal toh kisi ko aa nahin raha.
 
Abhay: Aap ko kya hua ab? *turning towards Chaand* Dad?
 
Chaand (looking away guiltily): What?
 
Abhay: Kahin aapne......
 
Chaand: I don't know. Meri Haseena ko theek karo.
 
Abhay (coming closer to Chaand and whispering): Dad! Did you give her that dye?
 
Chaand: Yes.
 
Abhay (happily): Oh dad! You are brilliant!
 
Chaand: Thank you Abhay!
 
Sid (watching them curiously): So....what's cookin'?
 
Abhay: Oh..nothing.
 
Chaand: Nothing at all!
 
[They wink at each other.]
 
Sid: Hmmm...father-sonny talks hmm? (a li'l bit of jealousy showing through) Main bhi beta hoon. Tell me too.
 
Chaand: Uh...woh..
 
Abhay: Yeh mere dad hain. Tumhaare nahin.
 
Sid: Oh puh-leeeez!
 
Chaand: Yes. Tumhaari is bhookh ne tumhe humse door kar diya hai.
 
Sid: Oh dad! (He sees that Chaand is not moved.) Bhookh se yaad aaya, a li'l birdie is waiting for me. Buh-bye.!!
 
[He runs away. Chaand sighs sadly. Abhay puts his arm around Chaand's shoulders. After a few moments, they work on reviving Haseena.]
 
 
*
 
In the jungle...
 
Panchhi: One thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine. Two thousand. *opens her eyes* I'm coming to get ya!
 
[She goes searching for Sid. She sees some movement behind a tree. She moves forward to see what it is when a hand covers her mouth.]
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
great........
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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
Toh Anu's idea was correct, Panchi and Sid are playing hide and seek. Anu - good job, keep it up.
 
Haseena ne bada rob rakha hai dono bachoan par. Dono hi dar gaye, vaise I can't imagine in reality, both of them getting anything but scared. ROFL Abhay will look so cute, hiding behind the sofa. 

Loh Piya ne bhi peena shuru kar diya - rooh afzah.ROFL Vampires ki sangat mein rahegi toh yahi hoga. Aur yaar please please mujhe batayo na yeh Lavyadei hai kaun. You promised that you will tell me. I was thinking she is just going to sing the item number - beedi jalai le badan se Pia, ...

Aunty kisko bola ROFLROFL, badi image conscious hai LD. Pia, diya, kiya, jiya - good rhyming. 
Aur yeh Abhay ka actual orientation hai kya. Kyun bechare Chand ko pareshaan kar rahi ho. Poor thing... din raat uske dimaage mein kaise kaise khayalaat aate rehte hain.

Mujhe pata hai Haseena ko kya hua. Woh zabardasti rest tonic le rahi hai - Adi ke karan ROFLROFL

Poor Sid, bin maa baap ka bachcha - mujhe uspe bahut taras aa raha hai.

Bhookh fir bhookh - Mein na kehti thi ki tere characters ko bhookh bahut lagti haiROFLROFL

Who was that? Sid?

Excellent yaar. I know you are very busy these days because of your exams. But still you are taking time and updating the crossroads, that's really nice of you. Thanks a lot.Wink 
 

 



Edited by Ritzie - 14 April 2011 at 6:00pm

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

great........
 
Thank you. Smile
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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged

ROFLROFLROFL 

You know at first i didnt like LD much but in this update...she was FUN!!! ROFL 
 
The whole Pia, LD, Chand, Abhay, Sid convo was hilarious! Enjoyed it! Big smileROFL 
 
When will i get some Birdie wings? Ouch 
Sid kahin akele akele na kha jaye! :P
 
Thanks for such fun updates!! Embarrassed
And you are updating so fast these days! Gooody!
but concentrate on studies too! Best of luck! :)


Edited by sugaryanu - 15 April 2011 at 9:45am
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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
OMG Abhay and Sid fighting for ChaandROFL and hiding behind lamp and sofa.
It was awesome
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Adi,
 
I just logged in today after a whole month. lol. Haven't been active lately, I have been studying like crazy for my exams and I have one big one coming up. But, just took a little break today and decided to catch to your "FF Crossroads" updates. They were hilarious as always. Love the twists of Reva, Kabir, and Abhay. LOL Poor Chand! LOL
 
Keep rocking.
 

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