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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 42)

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
Part 27
 
 
 
Fog envelops the jungle, wreathing misty shapes amongst the branches of the trees. Behind a huge, ancient tree stands Panchhi, her eyes closed, her mouth moving continuously as she counts...
 
Panchhi: Nine hundred ninety-eight. Nine hundred ninty-nine. One
thousand. One thousand one. One thousand two........................
 
 
[She continues.]
 
 
*
 
Misha is still unconscious. And she dreams too. It's normal for her though - humans do sleep and dream.
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Starts~~~
 
 
Misha is walking along a corridor in the college with Pia, when a guy collides with her. Misha stops to yell at him, but he walks on. She cannot see his face, but his hairstyle interests her. She looks at the way he walks - all his masculine strength on display. Her jaw drops. Her hair stands up. Her eyes open wide. And her bag falls on to the floor. A wind starts blowing, and blows her heart away.
 
Minutes pass by as she watches him stride away.
 
Then Pia nudges her.
 
She doesn't feel it.
 
Pia pushes her.
 
She lets her.
 
Pia pulls her and shakes her.
 
She gets shaken.
 
A note from his file flies towards her.
 
She runs to catch it.
 
Holding it up to her nose, she breathes in deeply.
 
Pia yells.
 
Misha wants to know.
 
Misha: Kaun hai yeh, jisne dobaara mudke mujhe nahin dekha? *Pia shrugs* Who is he? Oh. My. Gosh!!
 
[T and Tracker's bimbos come dancing. Music plays...Song starts]
 
Misha (dreamily): Deewana hai dekho beqaraar woh...
 
Bimbos: Hoooo...
 
Pia (teasingly): Sambhaalo sambhaalo, na pyaar ho...
 
Bimbos: Hooo....
 
Panchhi: Apna bana ke dekho, dil na chura le woh...aisa kyun lage hai bolo na...
 
Misha: Jhum chik chik jhum tum bolo hai woh kaun jo...baar baar yeh dil khota hai dekh ke usko...
 
[The guy comes behind her and puts his arms around her. Misha smiles, but doesn't turn.]
 
Misha: Who are you?
 
Guy (putting his lips close to her ear): Pintoo.
 
Misha: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Ends~~~
 
 
Misha wakes up, screaming and sweating.
 
Misha (panting heavily): Oh...it was just a dream. (angrily) Tu aa yahaan Pintoo ke bacche...dekh loongi tujhe!
 
 
*
 
Panchhi (still in the jungle): One thousand eight hundred and seventy eight. One thousand eight hundred and seventy nine........
 
 
*
 
 
In the Raichand Haveli, Pia screams. Chaand feels scared.
 
Chaand (yelling): Bhoot!!! Chudail!!! Bachaaoooooo!!!!!!!
 
[Abhay tries to calm them down, but without success. Sid puts a hand on Abhay's shoulder and gestures to him to stand aside.]
 
Pia (suddenly calm): Mujhe bhookh lagi hai.
 
Chaand (calm too): Mujhe bhi. Do you want Roohafza, bahuraani?
 
Pia (puzzled): Uncle?
 
Abhay (blushing fiercely): GET OUT!! Jaao kitchen mein!! *pushes Chaand away*
 
Chaand: Toh dhakka toh mat maaro! (turning to Pia) Piaaaaaaaa....come!
 
[Pia and Chaand go into the kitchen.] 
 
Sid: So. Abhay. My dearest little brother.
 
Abhay (sharply): Aur kitne hain?
 
Sid: Jealous hmm? (Abhay looks away) Aww! Cutie! *pulls Abhay's cheeks* 
 
Abhay (pushing him away): Oh go away!! *smiles secretly*
 
Sid: Not like this little brother. Pehle mujhe meri bhabhi se toh milne do.
 
Abhay: Woh tumhaari bhabhi nahin hai!
 
Sid: Okay..tumhaari bhabhi then.
 
[Abhay lunges at him. Sid side-steps him and laughs. Haseena wakes up.]
 
Haseena (angrily): STOP IT!!!!!
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Un-Reservveeddddddddddddd! :P
 
Paanchi counting in jungle!?!?! Is she and Sid playing hide and seek? WinkLOLLOLLOL
Or is she soon gonna be served on table complete with dressing!? ROFLROFL
Woh Sid always does that na takes girls to jungle to make dinner isliye wondering. :P
 
And another dream seqeunce!!! Are you watching too many bolly movies these day? LOLLOLLOL
Khiar jo bhi ho it was hilarious! Could imagine it happening! ROFL
Aur Mish got scared cuz of her dream or rather nightmare, well i dont blame her! even i will be scared after seeing Pintooo! ROFLROFL
 
And Awww! FIL and to-be-DIL ka peeyaaaar dekh kar i feel happy shappy! LOLLOL
Chaand and Pia part was best! ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Sid: Jealous hmm? (Abhay looks away) Aww! Cutie! *pulls Abhay's cheeks* 
 
Eeeks! i sooo want to see this in show too! ROFL
 
Great update! and continue soon like you did this time. It was fast but maza agaya! Keep it up! Big smile


Edited by sugaryanu - 13 April 2011 at 9:31am

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
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Awesome, as always. I told you your writings are very inviting.

What is this Panchi doing? May be I missed something. Why is she counting in jungle? Did Sid gave her the new job as there is less work in the office?ROFL

Misha dreams of Pintoo? ROFLROFL What a nightmare!!! Poor thing. Yaar thoda toh break do usse. ROFLROFL

I loved the song - this is actually one of my favourites. 

Pia - got her all the gaalis from Chand? I know you have been wanting to do that to her for last
couple of days. ROFLROFL

Aur yaar teri tarah tere characters ko bhi bhookh bahut lagti hai. ROFLROFL Aur haan, Pia ke Rooh Afzah peene ke din nazdee kaa rahein hain. ROFL Aur yeh kya, Chand calling Pia bahuraani? Haan Kabirrani se toh better hi hai ROFLROFL

Why did Abhay smiled when Sid called him cutie?

 Good oneROFLROFL


Edited by Ritzie - 13 April 2011 at 8:24am

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
hei,
very small update..wat is panchi upto?y is she counting?learning to count r wat?abhay blushing..continue soon..
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
awesome........................
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
updated on pg 42
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Un-Reservveeddddddddddddd! :P
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Paanchi counting in jungle!?!?! Is she and Sid playing hide and seek? WinkLOLLOLLOL
Yep! Bang on target, as usual! Clap
Or is she soon gonna be served on table complete with dressing!? ROFLROFL
LOLLOLLOL Does Sid like kurtis?Wink
Woh Sid always does that na takes girls to jungle to make dinner isliye wondering. :P
LOLLOLLOL Birdie Wings abhi nahin. LOL
 
And another dream seqeunce!!! Are you watching too many bolly movies these day? LOLLOLLOL
Kahaan yaar...movies toh dikhti hi nahin. ROFL
Khiar jo bhi ho it was hilarious! Could imagine it happening! ROFL
Aur Mish got scared cuz of her dream or rather nightmare, well i dont blame her! even i will be scared after seeing Pintooo! ROFLROFL
ROFL
 
And Awww! FIL and to-be-DIL ka peeyaaaar dekh kar i feel happy shappy! LOLLOL
Chaand and Pia part was best! ROFLROFLROFLROFL
Thank you. LOLLOL
 
Sid: Jealous hmm? (Abhay looks away) Aww! Cutie! *pulls Abhay's cheeks* 
 
Eeeks! i sooo want to see this in show too! ROFL
LOLLOLLOL Me too!
 
Great update! and continue soon like you did this time. It was fast but maza agaya! Keep it up! Big smile
Thank you! Smile

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged

superb updateClapClap

why is panchi counting in the jungle?ConfusedLOL

are sid and panchi playing hide and seekConfusedLOL

misha's dream sequence was also goodLOL(bimbos dancing in the backgroundROFLROFL loved the song suites her perfectlyLOL)

abhay and sid's conversation was too goodROFLROFLROFL

love the sasur and bahurani sceneLOL

thanks for the pmWink

update soonLOL

 

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