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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 42)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Pooja--

ROFLROFLROFL

ROFLROFL

Kya dream sequence tha......ShockedLOL
 *looks around in a room*
My mind just blew away....koi please dhund ke do.....Wacko

Rofling update.....ur gonna give a jaw ache Adi....WinkTongue

 
ROFLROFL
 
 
Thank you Pooja. Hope you'll find your brain.....someday.. Wink

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

Originally posted by amail1601


LOLLOLLOL They are Trangad - they can do anything. ROFL
>>That's trueLOL
Wink
 
ROFLROFL Yahaan bhi 150 pages confusion mein hi niklenge. ROFLROFL
>>Aur fir hogi CrossRoads Part II ROFLROFL
ROFLROFL Haila!!! Nahinnnn!! Khatam karo is story ko!! ROFL

Nopes. Faint karna bhi toh zaroori hai, warna vampires ko rest kahaan. *sighs*
>> I know. Kitni caring ho tum in Vampires ke liye ROFLROFL
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Yep. My family na. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
LOLLOL But woh Abhay doesn't know na. Wink
>> haan chupke chupke use kar lengeROFLROFL
ROFL Sure!Wink
 
LOLLOL Nahin nahin. Yeh toh bechaare ped ki hi shadow thi. LOL
>>ped ki shadow. fir Pia ko kya hua? bahut confusion hai yaar ROFLROFL
Lol.....Chaand dream sequence mein ped ke neeche khada tha aur AbhIr ko dekh raha tha. Vampire hai, black pasand hai toh shadow mein khada ho gaya. LOL 
Pia real mein Raichand Mansion mein thi, aur uske paas Chaand behosh pada tha and sapne dekh raha tha.

ROFL Specially Chaand ko...he loves his Abhay. Embarrassed
>>Ab Chand bhi?ROFLROFL
Hawwwwwww!!! He's Daddy!! Tongue
 
Um....Sid lekar gaya na use Raichand Mansion. Tabhi toh Abhay mila wahaan.
>>Nahi par fir woh hands grabbing her shoulder? and woh scream - maine socha shadow ne usse gayab kar liya. Fir woh Chand. **smacks her head** Dono sequence parallel chal rahi thin.

Chand ne dream sequence mein Pia ka shoulder pakada -ab samajhiROFLROFL
 
Lol...Lemme explain (Dushyant style). Hua yeh, Abhay ghar waapas aaya toh Chaand AbhIr ki kiss dekh kar behosh pada tha, aur use sapna aa raha tha about AbhIr romancing, and sapne mein usne khud ko bhi dekha.
 
Abhay andar gaya toh Sid Pia ke saath aaya hua tha. Jitni der mein unki interaction hui, Chaand ka sapna khatam ho gaya, aur behoshi mein hi usne haath-pair chalaane shuru kar diye. Karte karte Pia ke paas pahuncha toh uske shoulder Chaand ke haath mein aa gaya. Tabhi woh chillaayi. Tongue
 
Shoulder toh real mein hi pakda tha.
 
 
 

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
hei,
ye kaisa update yaar?u paired up abhay n kabir in  chaand's dreams..not at all fair..even in dreams this was not supposed to happen..wat re?
haseena too asking for pair of jeans..LMAO..kya ho raha hai yahan pe?jeans pe tna interest..n haseena fainting..very funny..was chaand dreaming pia was there?

wat sort of exams r u writing that goes on for 2 more months?

ok when u get time update it..

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

Originally posted by --Pooja--

ROFLROFLROFL

ROFLROFL

Kya dream sequence tha......ShockedLOL
 *looks around in a room*
My mind just blew away....koi please dhund ke do.....Wacko

Rofling update.....ur gonna give a jaw ache Adi....WinkTongue

 
ROFLROFL
 
 
Thank you Pooja. Hope you'll find your brain.....someday.. Wink
I live in tat hope...LOLLOL

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei,
ye kaisa update yaar?u paired up abhay n kabir in  chaand's dreams..not at all fair..even in dreams this was not supposed to happen..wat re?
LOLLOL How do you know what was supposed to happen? Chaand hai...he can think anything. ROFL

haseena too asking for pair of jeans..LMAO..kya ho raha hai yahan pe?jeans pe tna interest..n haseena fainting..very funny..was chaand dreaming pia was there?
Nopes. Pia was actually there. Remember Abhay asked her why she was there? He was wide awake. LOL

wat sort of exams r u writing that goes on for 2 more months?
University exams. Multi-faculty course.

ok when u get time update it..
Thanks. LOL

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
Part 27
 
 
 
Fog envelops the jungle, wreathing misty shapes amongst the branches of the trees. Behind a huge, ancient tree stands Panchhi, her eyes closed, her mouth moving continuously as she counts...
 
Panchhi: Nine hundred ninety-eight. Nine hundred ninty-nine. One
thousand. One thousand one. One thousand two........................
 
 
[She continues.]
 
 
*
 
Misha is still unconscious. And she dreams too. It's normal for her though - humans do sleep and dream.
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Starts~~~
 
 
Misha is walking along a corridor in the college with Pia, when a guy collides with her. Misha stops to yell at him, but he walks on. She cannot see his face, but his hairstyle interests her. She looks at the way he walks - all his masculine strength on display. Her jaw drops. Her hair stands up. Her eyes open wide. And her bag falls on to the floor. A wind starts blowing, and blows her heart away.
 
Minutes pass by as she watches him stride away.
 
Then Pia nudges her.
 
She doesn't feel it.
 
Pia pushes her.
 
She lets her.
 
Pia pulls her and shakes her.
 
She gets shaken.
 
A note from his file flies towards her.
 
She runs to catch it.
 
Holding it up to her nose, she breathes in deeply.
 
Pia yells.
 
Misha wants to know.
 
Misha: Kaun hai yeh, jisne dobaara mudke mujhe nahin dekha? *Pia shrugs* Who is he? Oh. My. Gosh!!
 
[T and Tracker's bimbos come dancing. Music plays...Song starts]
 
Misha (dreamily): Deewana hai dekho beqaraar woh...
 
Bimbos: Hoooo...
 
Pia (teasingly): Sambhaalo sambhaalo, na pyaar ho...
 
Bimbos: Hooo....
 
Panchhi: Apna bana ke dekho, dil na chura le woh...aisa kyun lage hai bolo na...
 
Misha: Jhum chik chik jhum tum bolo hai woh kaun jo...baar baar yeh dil khota hai dekh ke usko...
 
[The guy comes behind her and puts his arms around her. Misha smiles, but doesn't turn.]
 
Misha: Who are you?
 
Guy (putting his lips close to her ear): Pintoo.
 
Misha: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Ends~~~
 
 
Misha wakes up, screaming and sweating.
 
Misha (panting heavily): Oh...it was just a dream. (angrily) Tu aa yahaan Pintoo ke bacche...dekh loongi tujhe!
 
 
*
 
Panchhi (still in the jungle): One thousand eight hundred and seventy eight. One thousand eight hundred and seventy nine........
 
 
*
 
 
In the Raichand Haveli, Pia screams. Chaand feels scared.
 
Chaand (yelling): Bhoot!!! Chudail!!! Bachaaoooooo!!!!!!!
 
[Abhay tries to calm them down, but without success. Sid puts a hand on Abhay's shoulder and gestures to him to stand aside.]
 
Pia (suddenly calm): Mujhe bhookh lagi hai.
 
Chaand (calm too): Mujhe bhi. Do you want Roohafza, bahuraani?
 
Pia (puzzled): Uncle?
 
Abhay (blushing fiercely): GET OUT!! Jaao kitchen mein!! *pushes Chaand away*
 
Chaand: Toh dhakka toh mat maaro! (turning to Pia) Piaaaaaaaa....come!
 
[Pia and Chaand go into the kitchen.] 
 
Sid: So. Abhay. My dearest little brother.
 
Abhay (sharply): Aur kitne hain?
 
Sid: Jealous hmm? (Abhay looks away) Aww! Cutie! *pulls Abhay's cheeks* 
 
Abhay (pushing him away): Oh go away!! *smiles secretly*
 
Sid: Not like this little brother. Pehle mujhe meri bhabhi se toh milne do.
 
Abhay: Woh tumhaari bhabhi nahin hai!
 
Sid: Okay..tumhaari bhabhi then.
 
[Abhay lunges at him. Sid side-steps him and laughs. Haseena wakes up.]
 
Haseena (angrily): STOP IT!!!!!
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Un-Reservveeddddddddddddd! :P
 
Paanchi counting in jungle!?!?! Is she and Sid playing hide and seek? WinkLOLLOLLOL
Or is she soon gonna be served on table complete with dressing!? ROFLROFL
Woh Sid always does that na takes girls to jungle to make dinner isliye wondering. :P
 
And another dream seqeunce!!! Are you watching too many bolly movies these day? LOLLOLLOL
Khiar jo bhi ho it was hilarious! Could imagine it happening! ROFL
Aur Mish got scared cuz of her dream or rather nightmare, well i dont blame her! even i will be scared after seeing Pintooo! ROFLROFL
 
And Awww! FIL and to-be-DIL ka peeyaaaar dekh kar i feel happy shappy! LOLLOL
Chaand and Pia part was best! ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Sid: Jealous hmm? (Abhay looks away) Aww! Cutie! *pulls Abhay's cheeks* 
 
Eeeks! i sooo want to see this in show too! ROFL
 
Great update! and continue soon like you did this time. It was fast but maza agaya! Keep it up! Big smile


Edited by sugaryanu - 13 April 2011 at 9:31am

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
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Awesome, as always. I told you your writings are very inviting.

What is this Panchi doing? May be I missed something. Why is she counting in jungle? Did Sid gave her the new job as there is less work in the office?ROFL

Misha dreams of Pintoo? ROFLROFL What a nightmare!!! Poor thing. Yaar thoda toh break do usse. ROFLROFL

I loved the song - this is actually one of my favourites. 

Pia - got her all the gaalis from Chand? I know you have been wanting to do that to her for last
couple of days. ROFLROFL

Aur yaar teri tarah tere characters ko bhi bhookh bahut lagti hai. ROFLROFL Aur haan, Pia ke Rooh Afzah peene ke din nazdee kaa rahein hain. ROFL Aur yeh kya, Chand calling Pia bahuraani? Haan Kabirrani se toh better hi hai ROFLROFL

Why did Abhay smiled when Sid called him cutie?

 Good oneROFLROFL


Edited by Ritzie - 13 April 2011 at 8:24am

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