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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 40)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

ROFLOMG, OMG, Adi yeh kya tha. Tumne toh achche bhale romantic scene ko comedy bana dia. Ab toh mein jitni baar I love you kehte hue sunungi, Abhay-Pia ko, I will ROFL.ROFLROFL
MUHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Evil Smile 

 
Genes Vs Jeans Vs Skirt - good one ROFL
Thank you! LOL
 
Abhay needs a lift to go back? That's funny. Lagta hai energy drink ka asar khatam ho gaya, Pia ko uthane ke baad. ROFLROFL
Haan, woh ek din Vivian was saying na bahut weight gain kar liya hai Sukirti ne toh his back is hurting use uthaake. ROFLROFL
 
Aur yahan bhi guesses game? I was almost going to hop in.ROFL See? I trained you well. Wink And Abhay almost sounded like me - cluelessROFLROFL. Lol...na...you're good at that game. Smile

Yeh Abhay aur Kabir kitna understand karte hain ek doosre ko - Abhiya bhi nahi karte honge.ROFLROFL
Woh karte hote toh abhi tak show khatam ho gaya hota. ROFLROFL

 

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

OMG!! AP were halirious!! ROFL
LOLLOLLOL That's how I see all the AP scenes. ROFL
 
 
And woh Reva insaan hai ya bhoot?....aise ghayab hojati hai, hmm mujhe tu shaq ho raha hai. Geek
Hmm....mujhe bhi!Wink
 
And Abhay-Kabir! Oh God! What a convo and then....isi ki kaami thi...Kabir giving smoochy marks to Abhay, woh bhi itni khushi khushi! ROFLROFLROFLROFL
ROFLROFL Guys are always soo crazy!
 
Poor poor Chand! Sigh. Im sure is ke peeche LV ka haath hai. Grrr. Stern Smile Kiske peechhe?
Aur Abhay ki isshmile bhi disappear after going in!! Hawww! aisa kya kardiya!? :O Dekh lena. Wink
 
Hawlarious update yet again! Thumbs Up Thank you! Smile
I know you are busy in exams buts still im gonna say....Update Sooooon! :P LOLLOLLOL Will try to - breaks milein toh.
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged

that was a good partClap

OMG pia wants jeans he  he heLOL

abhay and kabir they are so understandingEmbarrassed dono ki batti ek sath jalti hai LOL

abhay ki energy kaise khatam ho gayiConfusedLOL

bechara chandLOL

by the way what did abhay seeShockedLOL

thanks for the pmSmile

 update soonWink

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei adi,
u hav updated after a long time..still busy?anyway funny update..pia saying door raho mujhse..wat is this?after that both saying i love n then door raho mujhse..
then comes genes mein hai n she asking for a pair of jeans n he replying u look lovely in skirt..wat is this yaar..finally abhay needs lipstick marks?he could asked pia to do that..she could have done that..
one thing is guaranteed in ur FF..no stress..laugh always..
continue soon..
 
Hey!Smile
Yeah...exams going on - will go on for another 2 months. Ouch
 
Lol....thanks for the compliments. :D

 

Originally posted by hazraluvarjun

wow

nice...
pm me next time
 
 
thanks. Smile
 
 
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaggyscooby

I love you but mujhse door rahoROFL
I want a pair of jeansROFL
And take my number so u can call me when Misha wakes up.Oh really is that the reasonLOL
Superb update made my day
 
LOLLOLLOL you know what AP and Kabir are like - aadat se majboor........ LOLWink
 
Thank you...your appreciation made MY day. Smile
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

that was a good partClap

Thank you! Embarrassed
 
OMG pia wants jeans he  he heLOL
Thak gayi bechaari skirts pehen ke. ROFL

abhay and kabir they are so understandingEmbarrassed dono ki batti ek sath jalti hai LOL

ROFL Perfect jodi. Ladki bhi toh same pasand ki!
 
abhay ki energy kaise khatam ho gayiConfusedLOL
Pia ko uthaake - weight badh gaya na uska. LOL

bechara chandLOL

ROFL
 
by the way what did abhay seeShockedLOL
You'll get to know soon!Wink

thanks for the pmSmile

You're welcome!Smile
 
 update soonWink
Yup..will try to!Smile
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 26
 
 
 
Angad and Tracker hop along the road, holding hands. Both feel too shy to speak their feelings aloud, but have a telepathic conversation instead....
 
Angad: Wow Ruhi! Tum kitni cute ho...aur aaj tum mere saath ho!
 
Tracker: Oh Angad! Tum kitneee cute ho. Maine aise hi tumhein apni list mein last number pe rakha.
 
Angad: Tumhaari list ke sab ladke stupid hain jo unhein tum pasand nahin aayi.
 
Tracker: Tum se koi pyaar kaise na kare?
 
[They both look at each other, smile, and skip along the road, still holding hands...]
 
*
 
Abhay: Pia! Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
 
Pia: Woh...tumhaara phone mere room mein reh gaya tha.
 
Abhay: Do aur jaao yahaan se. Mere ghar aane ke bahaane dhoondhna band karo.
 
Pia (getting ready to cry): Par...
 
Abhay: Hey wait a sec! Tum itni jaldi yahaan aayi kaise?
 
Sidhharth (coming up behind Abhay): Ise main laaya.
 
Pia (happily): Yeah. You know Abhay, iske paas bhi woh waali jeans hain.
 
Haseena (waking up): Jeans? Mujhe bhi chaahiye.
 
Abhay: Mom, aap so jaao.
 
Haseena: Okie! *faints*
 
Abhay: Okay Sid. You will pay for this.
 
Sid: Pay for what?
 
Abhay: For saying that jeans waali line. *pouts* Us pe mera copyright hai.
 
Sid (smiling): So kill me dude!
 
Abhay (angrily): Yeah. I will.
 
[Sid and Abhay prepare to fight. Pia watches them with her mouth wide open. Suddenly, a hand grabs her shoulder. She screams.]
 
 
*
 
Chaand dreams. This is weird, because as a rule vampires don't sleep, so they don't usually dream.
 
Chaand doesn't like it.
 
But he can't help it.
 
So he settles down to dream....
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Starts~~~
 
 
Music plays. A light instrumental music.........Clouds of haze part to reveal a beautiful valley full of flowers in all hues and shades. The green grass sparkles in the bright sunshine. Blue and purple mountains stand guard in the distance, preventing the outside world from intruding. There is joyful life everywhere, and love abounds........ Pairs of lovebirds in the trees, the humming bees flirting with the pretty flowers, the rabbits gambolling around........ Yes, it is all there, making the world a glorious place................................
 
Then, a beautiful voice ................
 
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa......................"
 
Abhay turns with a smile......
 
And the song starts...
 
Abhay : Tum paas aaye.......yun muskuraaye....tumne na jaane kya sapne dikhaaye...
Ab toh mera dil...jaage na sota hai
Kya karoon haaye
Kuch kuch hota hai........
 
Kabir (turning and running across the valley into Abhay's arms): Tum paas aaye.......yun muskuraaye....tumne na jaane kya sapne dikhaaye...
Ab toh mera dil...jaage na sota hai
Kya karoon haaye
Kuch kuch hota hai........
 
 
[They both romance, while Chaand watches from behind a distant tree. He turns his back towards them and leans against the tree.]
 
Chaand: Na jaane kaisa ehsaas hai
Bujhti nahin hai kya pyaas hai
 
Haseena (dancing towards him): Kya nasha is pyaar ka
Mujh pe sanam chhaane laga *disappears when Chaand tries to touch her*
 
 
Abhay: Koi na jaane kyun chain khota hai
 
Kabir: Kya karoon haaye...kuch kuch hota hai...
 
Abhay: Kuch kuch hota hai...
 
Kabir: Kuch kuch hota hai.......
 
[They both stare into each others' eyes. Chaand faints in the dream.]
 
 
~~~Dream Sequence Ends~~~
 
 
Chaand (thinking in his unconscious state): Noooooooooooo!!! Nooooooooooooooo!!! Abhayyyyyyyyyy!!!
 
[He starts thrashing around, and holds on to something. He squeezes hard. Pia screams. He wakes up.]
 
 
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
And this proves I have great timings! Cool 
 
Un-Reserrrvvveddddddddddd! ROFL
 
YAY!! Im the first one after a long time! Big smileLOL 
And i commented even before your PM so see i have the besssht timings. Hahahaha.
 
Ok back to the post,
Pia (happily): Yeah. You know Abhay, iske paas bhi woh waali jeans hain.
 
Haseena (waking up): Jeans? Mujhe bhi chaahiye.
 
Abhay: Mom, aap so jaao.
 
Haseena: Okie! *faints*
 
Abhay: Okay Sid. You will pay for this.
 
Sid: Pay for what?
 
Abhay: For saying that jeans waali line. *pouts* Us pe mera copyright hai.
 
This part was super hilarious! I was ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
And the dream seq, OMG!!!! ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
I had shaq that Chaand would think something like that but the way you showed was brilliant! Kuch kuch hota hai! ROFLROFLROFL
 
As always you a great read. Thanks for making me laugh. Need it right now. :)


Edited by sugaryanu - 11 April 2011 at 2:21pm

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