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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 39)

mansim Senior Member
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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged

OMG adi that was a wonderful partClapLOL

u seriously cracked me upLOLROFLROFL
by the way why was chand laughing ConfusedLOLLOL hope we will get to know it in the next partLOLLOL
i dont know which line to pick up everything was just too good EmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOL
please add me to your pm listWink
update sooooonLOL

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

OMG adi that was a wonderful partClapLOL

u seriously cracked me upLOLROFLROFL
by the way why was chand laughing ConfusedLOLLOL hope we will get to know it in the next partLOLLOL
i dont know which line to pick up everything was just too good EmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOL
please add me to your pm listWink
update sooooonLOL
 
Thanks soooo much mansim! SmileSmileSmile
 
Chaand is definitely up to something...wonder what. Wink
 
Sure, will add you. And going to update in a day or two. Smile
 
Thanks for commenting!Smile
 
 
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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 25
 
 
Abhay takes Pia to the jungle for a walk.
 
Abhay (thinking): We need to talk.
 
Pia (thinking): We need to talk.
 
Abhay (thinking): Kaise samjhaaun tumhein Pia....kaise?
 
Pia (thinking): Mujhe toh kuch samajh aa hi nahin raha.
 
Abhay (aloud): Pia.
 
Pia (aloud): Abhay.
 
Abhay: No Pia. Door raho mujh se.
 
Pia: Par Maithili......
 
Abhay: Tum Maithili nahin ho.
 
Pia: I know. Tum toh Abhay....
 
Abhay: Haan. Main Abhay hi hoon.
 
Pia: Okay. Mujh se door raho!
 
Abhay (grabbing her): Nahin reh sakta main tum se door. I love you!
 
Pia (crying): I love you too Abhay.
 
Together: Tum mujh se door raho!
 
 
*
 
Kabir and Reva take the unconscious Misha to the Dobriyal's place. Kabir takes Misha to her room and leaves. Reva comes to see him off.
 
Kabir: Um...thanks for everything.
 
Reva: It's not a big deal. Anything for a friend.
 
Kabir: For us, it is. So, thank you.
 
Reva: In that case, you are most welcome.
 
[There is silence for a few moments, and then Kabir moves as if to leave.]
 
Kabir: All right then, goodnight!
 
Reva (smiling): Goodnight!
 
[They both turn, Reva to go inside the house, and Kabir to get into his car. Suddenly they both stop, turn to face each other, and smile uncomfortably.]
 
Reva (shyly): Umm...
 
Kabir (shyly too) : Uhh...
 
Together: Take my number...
 
Kabir: ....uh...so you can call me when Misha wakes up...
 
Reva: Yeah..you too..call me if I don't call you.
 
[They exchange numbers.]
 
Kabir: Uh...I'll...go..
 
Reva: Right.
 
Kabir: I'll...you...call me.
 
Reva: Sure...
 
Kabir: Goodnight.
 
Reva: Goodnight.
 
[Kabir turns away, grinning. When he turns back, Reva is gone. He drives away, whistling cheerfully.]
 
 
*
 
 
Abhay picks up Pia in his arms and runs to her hostel.
 
Pia: Haww Abhay! Kitna fast bhaagte ho!
 
Abhay: It's in my genes.
 
Pia: Jeans? I want a pair too!
 
Abhay: Tum skirt hi pehno. You look nice.
 
Pia (looking at him lovingly): Abhayyy....
 
Abhay (looking away): Goodnight.
 
[He runs away. He comes to a stop in the middle of the road and flags down the approaching car.]
 
Kabir (rolling down the window): Hey Raichand! What's up?
 
Abhay: I need a lift.
 
Kabir: Sure! Hop in!
 
[Abhay gets into the car. While they are driving, Kabir starts singing.]
 
Kabir (singing) : Tu hi bataa...jaane kya mujhe hua hai..............
 
Abhay: Um...you are drunk?
 
Kabir (laughing):  No! Two more guesses!
 
Abhay: You took drugs?
 
Kabir: Hey Ram!! No!
 
Abhay: You had a big shock?
 
Kabir (dreamily): Kuch aisa hi samajh dude....what a shock! *sings* I am in love...I am in love.............
 
Abhay: Good. Pia?
 
Kabir (soberly): No. I love her, but tu hai na toh... *dreamy again* I am talking about Reva.....pretty...smart...............
 
Abhay: Mera ghar aa gaya. *peers out the window* Damn!
 
Kabir: Kya hua?
 
Abhay: Yaar...mere dad....itni late raat kisi ladke ke saath dekhenge...kahenge nalaayak hoon, abhi tak girlfriend nahin hai.
 
Kabir: Aww! I can understand... Ab?
 
Abhay (sadly): I don't know..............
 
[They both sit in silence for a while. Then suddenly both look at each other happily.]
 
Kabir: Dude!
 
Abhay: Will you?
 
Kabir: Why not!
 
Abhay: Thank you!
 
[Kabir puts on the reddest lipstick and kisses Abhay's cheek. Abhay gets out of the car and blows him a kiss. Kabir drives off. Abhay reaches the doorway, steps over the unconscious Chaand, and goes inside, whistling cheerfully. What he sees wipes his smile right off his face............]
 
 
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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
ROFLOMG, OMG, Adi yeh kya tha. Tumne toh achche bhale romantic scene ko comedy bana dia. Ab toh mein jitni baar I love you kehte hue sunungi, Abhay-Pia ko, I will ROFL.ROFLROFL

Genes Vs Jeans Vs Skirt - good one ROFL

Abhay needs a lift to go back? That's funny. Lagta hai energy drink ka asar khatam ho gaya, Pia ko uthane ke baad. ROFLROFL

Aur yahan bhi guesses game? I was almost going to hop in.ROFL And Abhay almost sounded like me - cluelessROFLROFL.

Yeh Abhay aur Kabir kitna understand karte hain ek doosre ko - Abhiya bhi nahi karte honge.ROFLROFL



Edited by Ritzie - 03 April 2011 at 8:27pm

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
OMG!! AP were halirious!! ROFL
 
And woh Reva insaan hai ya bhoot?....aise ghayab hojati hai, hmm mujhe tu shaq ho raha hai. Geek
 
And Abhay-Kabir! Oh God! What a convo and then....isi ki kaami thi...Kabir giving smoochy marks to Abhay, woh bhi itni khushi khushi! ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Poor poor Chand! Sigh. Im sure is ke peeche LV ka haath hai. Grrr. Stern Smile
Aur Abhay ki isshmile bhi disappear after going in!! Hawww! aisa kya kardiya!? :O
 
Hawlarious update yet again! Thumbs Up
I know you are busy in exams buts still im gonna say....Update Sooooon! :P


Edited by sugaryanu - 04 April 2011 at 4:47am

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 1:27am | IP Logged
hei adi,
u hav updated after a long time..still busy?anyway funny update..pia saying door raho mujhse..wat is this?after that both saying i love n then door raho mujhse..
then comes genes mein hai n she asking for a pair of jeans n he replying u look lovely in skirt..wat is this yaar..finally abhay needs lipstick marks?he could asked pia to do that..she could have done that..
one thing is guaranteed in ur FF..no stress..laugh always..
continue soon..
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
wow
nice...
pm me next time
 
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
I love you but mujhse door rahoROFL
I want a pair of jeansROFL
And take my number so u can call me when Misha wakes up.Oh really is that the reasonLOL
Superb update made my day

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