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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 36)

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
HissuROFLROFL suits her.
Wonder who the bhoot will be.And what is Chaand saying Piya Raichands bahu!!Shocked
Thanx 4 pm and hope u get tym to do the updates but I understand if u are busy.

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
OMG  !! I was waitng eagerly for this !! Thankyou thankyou thankyou for the double uptdate babe !!!
I'm so sorry I have exams going on so I don't have time to write a long comment but I just loved both parts !!! very entertaining and interesting as usual !! keep up the excellent work gal !!Hug
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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Update 22 & 23,
 
Adi!
 
Glad to have you back! Hug The update was hilarious as always! LOL What is this? Angad is jealous of a ghost??? ROFLROFL 
And this was out of this world funny, when Misha says that they are going to bring, Danish's ghost........the poor guy faints! ROFLROFL I think he couldn't tolerate the shock! ROFL
 
Awwwww Chand is turning into a good father-in-law already in your update as he is so protective of Piya. EmbarrassedSmile 
 
Payal!!!Hug
 
Thanks so much!!!!!!!Smile Well, you know Angad na...where Tracker...er...Ruhi is concerned... Wink
 
ROFL Daanish Daanish Daanish...bure haal hain uske.LOL
 
LOLLOLChaand is the best FIL EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed *sharma-oes*
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritz93

Originally posted by amail1601

 
LOLLOLnice question!!! ROFL you see, I keep making them do shocking stuff....ek toh usse they faint, and then they have to do so much work...exhaustion se they faint. Wink
 
lavyadei.....raaz hai ek. Wink

You are hilarious. simply hilarious. 

Aur yeh raaz kab khulega? I Spy CC mein?
 
LOLLOL *sigh* I know!!! Wink
 
raaz....umm...maybe someday I'll let you know.Wink

 

Originally posted by shaggyscooby

HissuROFLROFL suits her.

Wonder who the bhoot will be.And what is Chaand saying Piya Raichands bahu!!Shocked
Thanx 4 pm and hope u get tym to do the updates but I understand if u are busy.
 
LOLLOLLOL Yeah, but don't say it FF ke baahar, or Haseena mommy will hiss. ROFL
 
Thanks for understanding....down with stupid flu n assignments n exams dancing on my head. More than anything else, I just can't concentrate on writing anything long. Ouch
 

 

Originally posted by yoyolo

OMG  !! I was waitng eagerly for this !! Thankyou thankyou thankyou for the double uptdate babe !!!
I'm so sorry I have exams going on so I don't have time to write a long comment but I just loved both parts !!! very entertaining and interesting as usual !! keep up the excellent work gal !!Hug

 
Aww! It's ok sweetie!Hug Thanks soo much!
Hope your exams are going well. Take care, and all the best! Smile
 
 
 
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
 
Part 24
 
 
 
Haseena: Chaand!!!!!!!! Tum. Us. Ladki. Ki. Side. Le. Rahe. Ho?
 
Chaand: I am going to change her. She will be my Abhay's bride.
 
Haseena: Nooooooooooooooo! She cannot be Abhay'ssssss. She belongs to Sid.
 
Chaand: Chal hatt...jhoothi!
 
[Haseena faints.]
 
 
*
 
Tracker: Nooooo! Koi cute bhoot bulaao na! Daanish was so yuck!
 
Pia: Haan Mish. Chalo, Maithili ka bhoot bulaate hain.
 
[Two hisses echo around the room. The girls look around in surprise. Kabir and Angad whimper with fear.]
 
Angad: S.s.s.s....
 
Kabir: ....aamp!
 
Siddharth: Er...what?
 
Abhay: Snake.
 
[Siddharth and Abhay look at each other for long moments. Then Abhay turns and gestures to the girls to go ahead, though he shakes his head at Pia.]
 
Pia (in a determined voice): Maithili.
 
Misha (looking confused): Ok!
 
[Daanish wakes up and sees what they are doing. Misha switches off the lights. Tracker lights the candles.]
 
Misha (in a sonorous voice): Maaaiiiiiiiiiithiiiiiiiliiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!
 
[Abhay shifts uncomfortably. Angad whimpers.]
 
Maaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiithiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiliiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!
 
[Siddharth snickers.]
 
Myyyyyyyyyyyyyythooooooooooooloooooooooooooogyyyyyyy!!!
 
Pia (slapping Misha's arm): Oye! Yeh mythology kya hai?
 
Misha: What yaar. Aise puraaaaaane naam se toh mythology hi yaad aayegi na. Shut up now.
 
(continuing in a deep tone) Maiiiiiiiiiiiiiithiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! Aaja bey ab toh!
 
[A gust of wind rattles the windows.
 
Curtains billow.
 
The candles sputter and spit, and suddenly blow out, plunging the room into darkness.
 
Kabir and Angad hug each other in fear.
 
Siddharth stiffens. He looks at Abhay. Abhay is looking at Pia. Pia is filing her nails and whistling.
 
Tracker has fainted.
 
Misha is staring at the window beside Daanish's bed, her mouth wide open.
 
A few moments rush by slowly....]
 
Misha (angrily): Kameene, Daanish ke bacche!!! Mooli ka parantha kyun khaaya tune?!!!!!!!
 
 
*
 
Lavyadei tries to revive Haseena, but gives up after 1 hour.
 
LD: Too much yaar! I need a drink!
 
[She spies a glass on the table, picks it up, and drinks it all in one gulp. Chaand, standing behind a curtain, laughs]
 
 
*
 
An hour later, everyone has finally revived from Daanish's attack. They resume the seance.
 
Maithili appears.
 
Tracker (happily): Two Pia!!!
 
Misha: Wow! Are you into mountain climbing? Yeh Pia toh gir jaati hai.
 
Pia: Abhayyyyy!!
 
Maithili: Excuse me? Abhendra humaare hain. Aur hum Abhendra ke. Kyun Abhu darling?
 
Abhay: Er....
 
Siddharth (in a low voice): Haan bolega toh marega. Na bolega toh marega.
 
Abhay: Ab kya karoon?
 
Pia: Toh rakho na apne Abhendra ko! Mujhe bas Abhay chaahiye.
 
Maithili (thoughtfully): Hmmm...good idea. Waise bhi I don't like woh black black clothes. You can keep Abhay.
 
Pia (smiling): Thanks!
Hey by the way, yeh Abhay/Abhendra/Whatever ka secret kya hai?
 
Maithili: I don't know. Humein toh yeh kuch bataate nahin.
 
Siddharth: Wait. First thing, ask Abhay also na woh kiska hai. *grins* [Abhay hits him from behind.] Secondly, what about me?
 
Maithili: What about you?
 
Sidhharth: Main kiska hoon?
 
Panchhi (coming inside the room): Mere!
 
Siddharth (happily): Love!!!!!
 
Maithili: Okay. If that is all sorted out, main jaaun?
 
Tracker: Nooooooooooooo! (shyly) Mere liye kaun hai?
 
Maithili: Yeh itna bada Angad nahin dikh raha?
 
Tracker: Ummmmmm.... (happily) Okie!!
 
Angad: Yayyyy!
 
Kabir: Aur main?
 
Maithili: Hmmm....you don't know her yet. Pata chal jaayega.
 
Misha: Main? Waise I don't believe in love and all that crap..but chalo.....
 
Maithili: Oh! Tumhaara toh janam janam ka jeevan saathi ek hi hai!
 
Misha: Er..who?
 
Maithili: Pintoo!
 
[Misha faints.]
 
Maithili: Okay. Enough now. Humaare spa ka time ho gaya.
 
Daanish (sitting up and croaking): Aur main? Kaun hai mere sapnon ki raani?
 
Maaya (swinging in through the window, singing): Main hoon na.....main hoon na....
 
[Daanish faints. Maithili waves to everyone and vanishes. All the couples leave - Tracker and Angad ecstatically, Siddharth and Panchhi happily, and Abhay and Pia confusedly. Kabir tries to pick up Misha, and Reva supports him. Their eyes meet, and Kabir knows that she is the one. Reva looks away.]
 
Kabir: Um...so..Maaya.
 
Maaya (smiling): Don't worry. I'll take care of him.
 
Kabir: Are you sure?
 
Maaya: For better or for worse, I have loved him. Now....I'm not going to leave him.
 
Kabir: You are....nice.
 
Maaya: Thanks.
 
[Kabir and Reva leave with Misha.]
 
 
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
ROFL very refreshing one Adi. Was veey tired but mazaa aa gaya pad ke

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
hei adi,
after really a very very long time u hav updated..as ever u gav a fantastic update full of fun..but y r abhay-pia confused n all others happy?i forgot..does pia not know abhay is a vampire?if not there is possibility for confusion..

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

ROFL very refreshing one Adi. Was veey tired but mazaa aa gaya pad ke
 
 
lol..thank you ritzie!! glad you approve.  Wink

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