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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 33)

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

abhay and piya r so adorable...............kabir and angad together r a riot.............love them but what did they find to move away in disgust?
 
 
hey!! you're commenting for the first time na? have seen your 'likes' before though. Smile
thank you soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed
 
lol...you'll find out soon. Wink

 

Originally posted by chakku

ur post was ROFL nd Clap nd Thumbs Up like always............

Awww!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

 

Originally posted by shaggyscooby

This time its Sid to the rescue Wink
Plz update soon need to know what those crazy twosome have found

LOLLOLLOLYeah...will try to do that. Wink
 
 
 

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Part-18
Danish itna khaega tu neend hi aagey na bhookey! ROFL
 
Ahem so you wrote an Abhiya part. Nice. But more than AP im worried Kangad. Lol ab itni baar saath ate hain tu i thought of giving them a name. :P LOLLOLLOL
 
Part-19
What is Lav doing here?? Poor Chaand. Ek tension jaati nahi ke doosri aajati hai. :((
And this 'beedi jala ke'!? ROFL
And Kangad ke beech yeh teesra i mean yeh paanchwan kaun?!? ShockedROFL
 
Part-20
Pia feels herself falling.
 
She sees Abhay's face in her mind and relaxes. He will save her.
 
But she continues to fall. ROFL 
Ok for some reason i found it really funny. :P
 
And omg! Kangad and their convo about finding something! ROFLROFLROFL
 
And Sid and Pia! Yeh kya horaha hai?? LOL
 
Great updates! Was so missing reading them. But ek saath bhi fun hai. Wink
Eagerly waiting for the next part! :))
 
ShockedShockedROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Oh God! That Daanish line... ROFLROFLROFL
 
Lol..yeah...wrote an Abhiya scene...but not quite as per demand. Wink
 
Kangad huh?? Sounds cool!! ROFLROFL
 
LOLPoor Chaand....his life is just going to get even more complicated.  LOL
 
 
Awww....I sooooooo missed your comments too!!!!!!!!!!! And see, you commented toh got sooo many comments this time. SmileSmile
 
HugCome back soon!!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Destiny-

had a  right royal laugh ROFL

Good  job adiLOL  Beedi jala ke ROFL
chand is so  posessive  of haseenaLOL

LD is  ROFLMAO

KABIR  ANGAD  ABHAY tiro is supremeLOL
 
 
LOLLOLLOLThank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
 
Thank you
 
 
for 'liking'!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smile
 
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Hey adi..!! m back..!! yay yaya..!! Dancing..!! misshed ur dis FF Ouch

Part 8: hahaha how long it took for yu to ryt pia n abhay's part..??LOL n was abhay's car black or white??Wink finally daanish ki sachai bahar.. it must b misha's plan haina..??Wink Naaaice part.. missed my heroes {chandeena}Confused.. now off to read part 9 Tongue

Part 9: oyeee my chandeena back.1! aww such a romantic haunted story..LOLLOL evry time u ryt dere part i enjoy it to fullest  reading..!! even i can imagine how dey will talk .. like in whispersLOLLOL... n Julius ceaser me ne bhi padha hai in 10th :P :D ... loved dis part more dan 8th n see i predicted its mish's plan.LOLWink keeep going gurll.!! me will b back reading 10th part :D

part 10: ahem ahem..!1 love birds..!! soo now got to knw ur secret of waking up late nights talking to ur vampyWinkLOLLOL loved the dialogues yaar..!! great writing ..!! keep going..!!Big smile

Part 11: hahahahhahahaLOLLOL daanish and his undead story..!! n wahan chandeena n their romantic haunted ride..! loving dis FF to the core..!! soo different yet soo strong..!!StarStarClap

part12: tararara kon hai?? mereko bhi milaoooo..!!LOLLOL i think u use ur evry possible crazzy part of ur akhrot in the making of chandeena's love story to make it memorable one in vampires history haina..!!LOLLOLLOL i wish ekta mata isko use karle so dat it will b fun to watch too..!!:P :D ...and pooor K ... nai nai angad haina uske liyeWinkawesum job adi.!!Star

Part 13: LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
adiiii while writing dis part u were in very gud mood ryt...?? i mean i simply loved it..LOL but why chandeena were shockedOuchConfused kya abhay dressed up liek gurl wearing lipstik n olOuchConfused n theory of undead is too good.. awesum partClapClap

Part 14: awww pooor daanish . he soo conphoooosed..!! i think he need a RESTWinkLOL n wat is dis maya going out thru window??? n missha cleaning the house..??Ouch oder shaitani plan of mish kya..??Ouch

Part 15 : hahaah "maine gaya bhi tha pi loon"LOLLOL n uss wqt abhay must have thot that tracker is singing in her nose LOLWinkoooohh god waise ho kya rha hai mereko bhi bta do haseena k saath saath..!!
and adiii yu writting too  short updates yaaar..!! abhi start bhi ni kiya hota ki ek he scroll mein its over..!!Cry itni conjoosi don't do..!!LOLWink

Hey chalo abhi gtg...!! baaki k 5 parts will read morning mein n will comment den.!!
awesum parts wid lil confusing tit bits too..!! but great overall ..!! loved it.!!ClapClap

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inu-13

Hey adi..!! m back..!! yay yaya..!! Dancing..!! misshed ur dis FF Ouch
awwwww!!! I sooooo missed you Nehoo!!

 
Part 8: hahaha how long it took for yu to ryt pia n abhay's part..??LOL n was abhay's car black or white??Wink finally daanish ki sachai bahar.. it must b misha's plan haina..??Wink Naaaice part.. missed my heroes {chandeena}Confused.. now off to read part 9 Tongue
LOLLOLLOLtook some time yaar. *wipes forehead* lol...black only!!!!!!! Embarrassed

 
Part 9: oyeee my chandeena back.1! aww such a romantic haunted story..LOLLOL evry time u ryt dere part i enjoy it to fullest  reading..!! even i can imagine how dey will talk .. like in whispersLOLLOL... n Julius ceaser me ne bhi padha hai in 10th :P :D ... loved dis part more dan 8th n see i predicted its mish's plan.LOLWink keeep going gurll.!! me will b back reading 10th part :D
ROFLChaNa fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
part 10: ahem ahem..!1 love birds..!! soo now got to knw ur secret of waking up late nights talking to ur vampyWinkLOLLOL loved the dialogues yaar..!! great writing ..!! keep going..!!Big smile
Shocked nahinnnnn!!! yeh baat public nahin ho sakti!!!!!!! Tongue thank you!!!

 
Part 11: hahahahhahahaLOLLOL daanish and his undead story..!! n wahan chandeena n their romantic haunted ride..! loving dis FF to the core..!! soo different yet soo strong..!!StarStarClap
aww!! thank you!!!!!!!

 
part12: tararara kon hai?? mereko bhi milaoooo..!!LOLLOL i think u use ur evry possible crazzy part of ur akhrot in the making of chandeena's love story to make it memorable one in vampires history haina..!!LOLLOLLOL i wish ekta mata isko use karle so dat it will b fun to watch too..!!:P :D ...and pooor K ... nai nai angad haina uske liyeWinkawesum job adi.!!Star
Lol...my whole akhrot is crazy only. LOL thank you!!

 
Part 13: LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
adiiii while writing dis part u were in very gud mood ryt...?? i mean i simply loved it..LOL but why chandeena were shockedOuchConfused kya abhay dressed up liek gurl wearing lipstik n olOuchConfused n theory of undead is too good.. awesum partClapClap
honestly...I don't remember! ROFL thank you though!

 
Part 14: awww pooor daanish . he soo conphoooosed..!! i think he need a RESTWinkLOL n wat is dis maya going out thru window??? n missha cleaning the house..??Ouch oder shaitani plan of mish kya..??Ouch
LOLLOLkeep guessing!

 
Part 15 : hahaah "maine gaya bhi tha pi loon"LOLLOL n uss wqt abhay must have thot that tracker is singing in her nose LOLWinkoooohh god waise ho kya rha hai mereko bhi bta do haseena k saath saath..!!
and adiii yu writting too  short updates yaaar..!! abhi start bhi ni kiya hota ki ek he scroll mein its over..!!Cry itni conjoosi don't do..!!LOLWink
Shockedneha!!!! you should know better than anyone else what my schedule is like....I don't have time to write longer stuff yaar!Ouch
Hey chalo abhi gtg...!! baaki k 5 parts will read morning mein n will comment den.!!
awesum parts wid lil confusing tit bits too..!! but great overall ..!! loved it.!!ClapClap
 
lol....it's my mission to confuse everyone! Wink
 
 
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 21
 
 
Kabir: Oh God!!!!!!!!!!
 
Abhay: Chheeeeeee!!!
 
 
[They both try to get back, but are restricted by the tiny space.]
 
 
*
 
Abhay takes Pia to his car and makes her sit, while he himself stands by her door.
 
Pia: Abhay?
 
Abhay: Shhh! Chup raho thodi der.
 
Pia: But I want to go back. They need my help.
 
Abha (angrily): Bas karo Pia! Tumhein samajh kyun nahin aata hai? Har cheez mein involve hone ki zaroorat nahin hai tumhein. Why do you keep doing this to yourself? Why do you do this to me?
 
[He bends and takes hold of her shoulders.]
 
Ab bas Pia. Just. Stop. Getting. Involved.
 
Pia (defiantly): Maaya meri dost hai.
 
Abhay: So? Doesn't mean you will get yourself killed for her.
 
Pia: Why not?
 
[Abhay stares at her in shock as her voice bgins to crack.]
 
Who cares about my life? I don't have parents. I am an orphan.
 
Abhay (grimly) : And what about your friends?
 
Pia: What friends Abhay? Jab Daanish ne mujhe blame kiya, toh koi mere saath nahin tha. Misha, Kabir, Panchhi, Tracker......no one believed me.
 
Abhay: Misha loves you.
 
Pia (sadly): Woh ek alag complication hai.
 
Abhay: What do you mean?
 
Pia (suddenly business-like): Nothing. The point is, I am alone. I can do what I want. And Daanish cheated Maaya, and he was cheating Panchhi.
 
Abhay: One last time Pia. You. Are. Not. Alone.!!!!!!
 
Pia (looking up at him): Oh really?
 
Abhay (passionately) : Yes. Really. And you are an ungrateful little thing if you have forgotten every time I supported you, every time I saved your life.
 
Now let's go.
 
[He pulls Pia to her feet and they move towards the house.]
 
*
 
Haseena is shocked by Chaand's declaration.
 
Haseena (hissing): What. Are. You. Saying.?
 
Chaand: I mean it. I myself will convert her. But this ....Lavyadei I will not tolerate. No.
 
Haseena: Chaand! Tum us ladki ko.....no!!!!
 
Chaand: Yeahhh.....watch me!!
 
 
[He strides away.]
 
*
 
Angad: Kabir, dude! Tune mere saath aisa kyun kiya? Kyun mujhe itna majboor kiya ki main....chheee!!
 
Kabir: What the hell! Mujhe kya pata tha?
 
Angad: Ugh! Maine uski...yuck...nose ko touch kiya!!!!!!!!
 
(He wipes his fingers against Kabir's jacket, who shoves him.)
 
Siddharth (morosely): And press kiya. And twist kiya. (conversationally) It hurts. Sample show karoon?
 
(He starts pulling their noses.)
 
 
Ooooooh!!!!! Aaaaaaah!!!! Ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
Abhay (appearing suddenly): SHUT UP!! Woh uth jaayega!! (into his phone) Go Misha!
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 22 February 2011 at 12:58pm

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged

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Ok firstly welcome back updates! Haha. Saachi was missing them sooo much! So thank you for such funnytabulous update! Big smile
 
And please ab tu bata do ke what exactly were Kangad playing around with?? Confused Whatever it is, it sounds digustingly funny! ROFL
 
And what an ungrateful little thing Piya is! LOLLOL
 
Chaand, ladki and convert! Shocked OMG what is he gonna do!? Shocked
 
Update soooooooon! Hug


Edited by sugaryanu - 23 February 2011 at 4:15am

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
ressss

Edit!!!

OMG 
 chand  sure knows  how  to    Keep danger  at  bay 

By  danger I mean   LDLOL

And this  chapter had me  laughing  like madLOLROFL


Edited by -Destiny- - 23 February 2011 at 9:30am

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