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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 31)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
OMG dat was hilariousROFL
will abhay catch piya?????????
nd 5th hand kiska hai???????
nd LD's beedhi jala ke isROFLROFLROFL
awesum..................simply superbROFLROFL

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Part 18 & 19
 
LOL @ Beedi jala ke! LOLLOLLOL
 
Hilarious post...............beedi jala ke! LOLWink
 
Kabir: Tere paas kitne haath hain?
 
Angad: Do.
 
Kabir: Ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Angad: Dude?
 
Kabir: Hmm?
 
Angad: Kyun poochha?
 
Kabir: Do mere. Do tere. Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai.

OMG! "Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai!" I loved how he is still thinking about it! Instead of reacting like how I would've if I was in his place! I wonder what the girls/guys up to........but, since their using candles probably to scare the crap out of Danish! LOL
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Nice update and LD was the icing on the cakeROFL
And what was dat Piya fellShocked
Thanks for the pmHug
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

LOL!!!
really its funny.
i was simply laughing reading it.

Kabir: Tere paas kitne haath hain?
 
Angad: Do.
 
Kabir: Ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Angad: Dude?
 
Kabir: Hmm?
 
Angad: Kyun poochha?
 
Kabir: Do mere. Do tere. Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai.

if any1 was near me dey wud hav thot i hav gone mad..
very good yaar.ClapClapClap
u r somewat quick in updating.
thanks 4 tat.by reading ur FF i feel relaxed.
 
 
LOLLOLthank you!! glad I could make you laugh! Wink
 
aww....feels good to know my mission is going well. *hugs* thank you soo much!!! Smile
 

 

Originally posted by chakku

OMG dat was hilariousROFL
will abhay catch piya?????????
nd 5th hand kiska hai???????
nd LD's beedhi jala ke isROFLROFLROFL
awesum..................simply superbROFLROFL

 
LOLLOLLOL thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think he should - that's what he always does na. Wink
5th hand ka dunno...was too dark to see. Ouch
LOLLOL *gets serious* Smoking is injurious to health.
*gets back to LOL mode* Thank you soo much!! Smile
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Part 18 & 19
 
LOL @ Beedi jala ke! LOLLOLLOL
 
Hilarious post...............beedi jala ke! LOLWink
 
Kabir: Tere paas kitne haath hain?
 
Angad: Do.
 
Kabir: Ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Angad: Dude?
 
Kabir: Hmm?
 
Angad: Kyun poochha?
 
Kabir: Do mere. Do tere. Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai.

OMG! "Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai!" I loved how he is still thinking about it! Instead of reacting like how I would've if I was in his place! I wonder what the girls/guys up to........but, since their using candles probably to scare the crap out of Danish! LOL
 
 
Thank you beedi jala ke!!!!!!!! ROFL
 
LOLLOLWell, that's Kabir.....does things in his own sweet time. Wink
 

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaggyscooby

Nice update and LD was the icing on the cakeROFL
And what was dat Piya fellShocked
Thanks for the pmHug
 
 
Thank you!! Embarrassed
 
Yeah...rather careless of her. Ouch
 
You're most welcome! Hug
 
 
 
 
*
Thank you
 
 
for 'liking' the update. Hope you're enjoying the story!!
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 20
 
 
 
Abhay stops.
 
Something is wrong.
 
He closes his eyes and sees Pia standing too close to the edge. Taking a step back. Missing the roof and falling.
 
He runs.
 
Fast.
 
Faster.
 
He is too late.
 
 
*
 
Pia feels herself falling.
 
She sees Abhay's face in her mind and relaxes. He will save her.
 
But she continues to fall.
 
 
*
 
Misha, Tracker and Reva run to stop Pia from falling, but cannot do it.
 
Even the trussed-up Maaya hops over.
 
But there is nothing that they can do.
 
 
*
 
Kabir gropes around in the dark.
 
Angad (whispering): Dude!! Mila?
 
Kabir (whispering): Yeah. Mil gaya.
 
Angad (whispering): Dekh...sirf haath hai ya body bhi hai.
 
Kabir (loudly): Body?!!
 
Angad (at a normal volume): Arey...matlab haath ke saath banda bhi free hoga na.
 
Kabir: Oh..haan. Wait.
 
[He pokes and feels around.]
 
Oye! Arm mil gayi!
 
Angad: Yay!
 
Kabir: Oye! Shoulder! (after a few moments) Neck! (a few more pass) Chin!
 
Dude!!
 
Angad: Haan?
 
Kabir: Yeh dekh kitni fun cheez mili!
 
Angad (excitedly): Kya hai? Dikha na.
 
[They both start playing around with something...]
 
 
*
 
Pia opens her eyes and looks into her saviour's face.
 
Pia (confused): Abhay?
 
Abhay (coming from behind her): Pia!
 
(Siddharth sets Pia down. Abhay reaches her and shaking badly, she turns to hug him. He holds her until the trembling stops, and then gently pushes her back to see her face.)
 
Are you ok?
 
(Pia nods. Still holding onto him, she turns partially to Siddharth.)
 
Pia: Thank you.
 
Siddharth (smiling): All in a day's work! *winks*
 
[He leaves. Pia turns to Abhay again and he holds her close. The girls come up, and Misha coughs lightly.]
 
Reva: Are you okay Pia?
 
Pia: Yeah. I am fine.
 
Misha (glancing at Abhay with a wicked grin): Haan bhai....fine toh hogi hi. Apne favourite spot mein jo hai.
 
[Pia blushes and tries to move away from Abhay, but falls again as her head spins. Abhay catches her.]
 
Abhay (grimly): You have just had a bad shock. You need to rest.
 
Pia: Main theek hoon. Seriously!
 
Abhay: Bas Pia. Argue mat karo.
 
Tracker: Haan Pia. Argue mat karo. (teasingly) After all, college ka hottest guy har kisi ko thodi bachaata aur hug karta hai!
 
Pia (shocked and embarrassed): Tracker!
 
[Seeing that Pia is getting rather agitated, Abhay leads her away from the house.]
 
 
*
 
Kabir and Angad are playing with their new toy.
 
Kabir: Yaar yeh mazedaar kaam hai.
 
Angad (happily): Haan. This is cool!
 
Siddharth: Hey guys! Need light?
 
Kabir: Umm...sure!
 
[Siddharth lights a candle. Kabir and Angad crawl backwards in disgust!]
 
 
*
 
Chaand turns to look at LD. He sees a tall, young woman on the plumpish side. Her clothes remind him of Tracker, if she wore black, and her attitude reminds him of T.
 
He sees her looking at him, and looks away.
 
When he looks at her again, he notices how her shoulders droop, how her smile falters, and how her hands shake.
 
Haseena comes over to him.
 
Haseena: Chaand.....come. Join us.
 
Chaand: Not now Haseena..I need...time.....
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand....40,000 years ho gaye us baat ko. Bhool jaao.
 
Chaand: No! (his eyes glow) She hurt you.
 
(stopping Haseena from speaking) No! Not now. Not ever. Make her leave at the earliest.. I would rather have Pia as my daughter-in-law!
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Amazingggggggggggg part as usualll !!!!!
Abhay & Piya are so adorableEmbarrassed
Angad & Kabir... hahahaha they're HILARIOUSROFL
it seems like only they can understand each other, like two loversROFL
hehe oh and glad to hear that Chandu is ready to have Pia as his daughter-in-law (well that's not exactly what he said but I'm glad he said that LOL)
Can't waittttt for the next part !Big smile and to discover what K & A found LOL

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