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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 30)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

I love ur FF... like seriously !! Hug
it's soooo funny and interesting and very entertainingDancing
omg.. what are they up to ? haha. I think I've understood what they're gonna do with the ropes, the candles & the lipsticks (haha it sounds so funny LOL) but as this FF is always full of surprises I might be wrong as wellBig smile
But OMGGGG I'm so excited can't wait for the next part !!!
You're too good, there's always a part of mystery & suspense in every update, and it always makes me want to read more and more !!EmbarrassedThumbs Up


 
 
Awwwwwwwwwww!!! Thanks soooooooo much!!!!!!!! Hug
 
I was in college getting bored and annoyed when I saw your comment....and I felt soooooooooooooo good!!!!!!!! SmileSmileSmile
 
LOLLOLLOL glad you have.....Wink lol...you just...I don't need to say anything, do I? WinkLOLLOLLOL
 
Thank you so so soooooo much for the lovely feedback!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

ROFLROFLROFLROFL
anyways update soon..
need 2 know wat d girls r upto n boys helping dem..
 
 
LOLLOLThank you!
lol...it's misha n company..you can guess. Wink
 
 
 
 
Thank you
 
 
for liking the update!! Smile
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 01 February 2011 at 4:55am

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
 
 
Part 19
 
 
 
Haseena: Oh my Masterji! What are you doing here Lav?? *rushes forward to hug her sister*
 
Chaand (groggily): Lavyadei!!!!! (angrily) What the heck are you doing here? Kyun aayi ho yahaan? Why?
 
Lavyadei (tittering nervously): Oh Chanda....Lavyadei is so .... 38000 years BC! My friends call me Lavya or LD, beedi jalaa ke.
 
Chaand (irritatedly): Well, you are not my friend, so I will call you Lavyadei only.
 
LD: Sure meri Chanda...(with a wicked look) haq banta hai tumhaara...beedi jala ke.
 
Chaand (angrily): Tere haq ki toh...!! (He moves towards her to kill her, but Haseena stops him.)
 
My throat is hurting Haseen...do you want a drink too?
 
LD (brightly): Mujhe bhi...but no ice okay? Beedi jala ke.
 
(Chaand gives her a dirty look and moves away.)
 
 
*
 
The girls spun around at the stranger's voice. It was Reva.
 
Misha : Hey!! Reva!!!!
 
(explaining to Pia..) Yeh Reva hai...meri childhood friend. She is the one who helped expose Daanish today.
 
Pia (smiling) : Hi!
 
Tracker (squealing) : Revaaaa!! Mera new nail colour dekho na!
 
Misha : You d-uh! Puraani dost mile toh nail colour dikhaate hain?
 
[Pia is enjoying their bickering, when suddenly she slips and falls off the roof!!]
 
 
*
 
Kabir: I don't want to be here. Is kameene Daanish ko dekh ke... (angrily) I just want to kill him!
 
Angad: Cool down bro! Bas kuch hi der aur. Waise bhi hum yahaan ladkiyon ke liye hain.
 
Kabir: Abey..tujhe yahaan bhi ladkiyaan soojh rahi hain?
 
Angad (annoyed): Teri problem kya hai, haan? Jaj dekho PJs maarta rehta hai.
*takes a deep breath* We came here to protect the girls. And that is it.
 
Kabir (sighing): Sorry yaar...I just..
 
Angad (quietly): I can feel your pain bro. It's ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Kabir: Dude?
 
Angad: Hmm?
 
Kabir: Tere paas kitne haath hain?
 
Angad: Do.
 
Kabir: Ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Angad: Dude?
 
Kabir: Hmm?
 
Angad: Kyun poochha?
 
Kabir: Do mere. Do tere. Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai.
 
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Ouuuuch ! 5th hand... whose is it ? ShockedLOL
haha Kabir and Angad are hilariousssssBig smile love them
Lavyadei's entry was hilarious also hahah "call me Lavya or LD, beedi jalake" ROFL
Best of luck to Chandu who will have to say her full name everytimeROFL
haha Lovelyyyyyyyyyy update as usualBig smileThumbs Up
Thanks for updating so fastHug



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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

Ouuuuch ! 5th hand... whose is it ? ShockedLOL
haha Kabir and Angad are hilariousssssBig smile love them
Lavyadei's entry was hilarious also hahah "call me Lavya or LD, beedi jalake" ROFL
Best of luck to Chandu who will have to say her full name everytimeROFL
haha Lovelyyyyyyyyyy update as usualBig smileThumbs Up
Thanks for updating so fastHug



 
 
ShockedShockedShockedThat was fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOLLOLLOL
 
Lol....Kabir and Angad surprised me too....that conversation just came out of nowhere. ROFL
 
*ahem* Now you wait and watch what LD does.....there is something special about her. Wink
 
Thank you soooooo much!! Hug I enjoy writing when someone enjoys reading and lets me know. WinkWink
 
 
 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Hey Adi,

Sorry for not replying instantly,Unhappy
but I hate to read in a hurry,and then reply in a hurry
Will reply in detail soon,
*hugs*

Mug

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemug

Hey Adi,

Sorry for not replying instantly,Unhappy
but I hate to read in a hurry,and then reply in a hurry
Will reply in detail soon,
*hugs*

Mug

 
 
Aww...you don't have to hurry!! Everyone reads at their own pace - don't need to race anyone. Wink
 
*hugs*
 
I am writing for you guys to enjoy, so take your time and have fun! Wink

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
LOL!!!
really its funny.
i was simply laughing reading it.

Kabir: Tere paas kitne haath hain?
 
Angad: Do.
 
Kabir: Ok.
 
[There is silence for a few moments.]
 
Angad: Dude?
 
Kabir: Hmm?
 
Angad: Kyun poochha?
 
Kabir: Do mere. Do tere. Soch raha hoon yeh 5th kiska hai.

if any1 was near me dey wud hav thot i hav gone mad..
very good yaar.ClapClapClap
u r somewat quick in updating.
thanks 4 tat.by reading ur FF i feel relaxed.


Edited by RB81 - 01 February 2011 at 6:29am

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