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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 28)

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
hei
wats going on?
abhay r kabir who needs red lipstick?
y r dey doing these sort of things n making people think weird of dem.
as ur updates r short (not to complain.thanks 4 updating whenever possible) v couldn't grasp things out of it.
but in total it is fun filled.

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Phele socha kal karoon but rahan nahi gaya and besides i know wont have any time tomorrow so here we go,

Hilarious update yet again! Tongue 
Like I said before, Dan and his never ending bhook always make me go ROFL 
 
Abhay and Kabir!! And not only that they want 'lipstick' as well!? ShockedLOL Even im going to faint! LOLLOLLOL
But hey! Abhay, Kabir aur Angad ke beech kaise aaskta hai? So not fair. ROFL
 
And i feel the worst for Chaand. Ouch Haaye humara moony eyed Chaandu! :P LOL
Baar baar faint hota raha tu saach mein doctor ki zararoot pad jaegi. ROFL
 
But but im loving it! Thanks for writing such fun updates! Big smile 
 
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL (choried from you)........lol....ab Abhay ko Kabir pasand aa gaya toh main kya karoon. Ab samajh aaya na why he didn't come when we were calling him yesterday. OuchLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
 
Thanks so much!!! Smile
 
Really gonna miss you! *sighs*
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:36am | IP Logged
ROFL  

I fell of  the  bed   right  now 

and  your  update  s give  me  giggle   fits.Awesome  update


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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
ROFLClap It was really nice nd is danish hungry all d tym???bhookha kahin kaROFL nd luv d way chaand faints all d tymROFLROFL


Edited by chakku - 31 January 2011 at 2:41am
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei
wats going on?
abhay r kabir who needs red lipstick?
y r dey doing these sort of things n making people think weird of dem.
as ur updates r short (not to complain.thanks 4 updating whenever possible) v couldn't grasp things out of it.
but in total it is fun filled.
 
 
hey!! Smile
 
lol...God knows what's going on. It is nothing like what I had decided. ROFLROFL
 
As far as I know, both Abhay and Kabir need red lipsticks. Ouch 
 
They are doing weird things because this is MY Crossroads - it's a crazy place to be in! Wink
 
LOLLOL You are MEANT to be confused!! ROFL Try reading two parts together if this gets too confusing for you. If I write longer updates then they will be so infrequent that you will have to read through long updates over and over again anyway.Ouch The idea here is to give you 5 minutes of reading with some funny stuff as frequently as possible. Wink
 
Thanks!

 

Originally posted by -Destiny-

ROFL  


I fell of  the  bed   right  now 

and  your  update  s give  me  giggle   fits.Awesome  update


AHug
 
 
Thanks L. LOLLOLLOL Hope you didn't hurt yourself!! Shocked
 
 
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chakku

ROFLClap It was really nice nd is danish hungry all d tym???bhookha kahin kaROFL nd luv d way chaand faints all d tymROFLROFL
 
 
LOLLOLLOLLOL Thanks soo much!! Embarrassed
 
 
About Daanish's bhookh....let's see if you notice something in the upcoming parts. Wink
 
 
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Hey sweety !! awesome part as usual !! the lipstick confusion... BWAHAHAAHAH ROFL
Kabir and Abhay going for a date... Abhay wants to use lipstick...LOLROFLROFL

I laughed so hard that, as usual, Mom shouted at me ROFL
And I love ur FF the way it is Big smileSmile

hehe and yeah, I do have trouble with reading hindi, actually there were a lot of hindi dialogues in the 14th or 15th part, I dont remember which one so I couldn't really understand what was happening but there wasn't a lot of hindi dialogues in the 16th part so I edited my post EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
will try my best to improve my hindi Embarrassed hehe


Edited by yoyolo - 31 January 2011 at 8:11am
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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

Hey sweety !! awesome part as usual !! the lipstick confusion... BWAHAHAAHAH ROFL
Kabir and Abhay going for a date... Abhay wants to use lipstick...LOLROFLROFL

I laughed so hard that, as usual, Mom shouted at me ROFL
And I love ur FF the way it is Big smileSmile

hehe and yeah, I do have trouble with reading hindi, actually there were a lot of hindi dialogues in the 14th or 15th part, I dont remember which one so I couldn't really understand what was happening but there wasn't a lot of hindi dialogues in the 16th part so I edited my post EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
will try my best to improve my hindi Embarrassed hehe
 
Hey Ish!! SmileSmileSmile
 
Thanks soooooooooo much!!! Really needed the encouragement!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Ohhh!! Hmm...can't reduce the Hindi coz of the authenticity factor, though I have tried, and it is my natural tendency to write in English...but yeah...we can do one thing - scrap me (my inbox is always full) whatever parts you don't understand, and I'll translate them for you. Smile
 
 

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