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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 27)

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei,
u forgot 2 pm with d update..
but its ok..
FF is getting funny..
but its nice to laugh out reading..
 
 
sorry!! didn't forget actually. I updated at around 3:30 am....was sooooooo tired that I couldn't even see properly. LOLLOLLOL
 
glad you liked it. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed that's what my FF is all about - you have the show the way it is, plus all those romantic FFs.....I just wanted to write something that could make people smile a bit. Wink I am seriously very happy that you guys like the concept. thank you soooo much! SmileSmile

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

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ROFLROFLROFL
 
I know!!!!!!!!!! I was thinking of making Abhay ask for more lipsticks when he said he wants to wear red...God knows how that happened. ROFLROFLROFL
More Lipstick! Shocked Oh soo waiting to read that!ROFLROFLROFL
 
@doctor in the house...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL!!!!!
 
@abhiya...well, depends on how you define 'together'! Wink
 Ah! i should have known....Itni jaldi kahan. Chalo koi gal nahi. Im enjoying what you write!
 
@daanish....ROFLROFLROFLROFL aur kuch nahin hai karne ko toh he has started eating..wela kahin ka. ROFLROFL
ROFLROFL He can join the Wela Docs group! ROFLROFL
 
 
ROFLROFLROFL
 
Thanks....glad you enjoyed it!! Wink
 
 
Oh God..just seeing you makes me ROFLROFLROFL. ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
And here we go again  ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
And can you please add me to your PM list from now on. Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wow its really nice but plz more of abhiya , just a request.
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ridwana1234

wow its really nice but plz more of abhiya , just a request.
 
 
thanks!! oh...a request! will keep it in mind, but you see, it is a story, so it will develop at its own pace and with its own scenes and twists and turns. can't force a particular thing na? Embarrassed
 
thanks for the feedback though. Smile
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Abhay wants to dye his shirt red HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Chaand faints HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
LMAO
LOLROFL
two things I would love to see in the show bwahahahha ROFL
AMAZING PART !! LOVED IT !! It was sooo funny LOL
and Abhay-Pia's conversation on the phoneLOL
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

Abhay wants to dye his shirt red HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Chaand faints HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
LMAO
LOLROFL
two things I would love to see in the show bwahahahha ROFL
AMAZING PART !! LOVED IT !! It was sooo funny LOL
and Abhay-Pia's conversation on the phoneLOL
 
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Thanks soooooooooooooo much!!!
 
I wonder if I should write at 3:30 am more often? Er...no!!!!!!!!!!!! ROFLROFLROFL
 
 
Thanks soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
Hey, btw, do you have trouble with reading Hindi? I thought you've written that, but when I checked again, your post was edited.
 
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 17
 
 
Chaand walks down the stairs in a daze. He goes and sits near Haseena, who is sitting and staring into the fire. He tries to speak, to tell her about Abhay and Kabir, but his voice is gone.....
 
*
 
Daanish finishes the chips...
 
 
I am feeling so full.
 
Missing Panchhi. Kabir hota toh uske saath walk kar aata.
 
Sab Pia ki wajah se hai.
 
Biscuits. I want biscuits.
 
[He goes off to eat.]
 
*
 
The doorbell rings, and Chaand goes to answer it.
 
Angad (rushing in): Abhay? Abhay!!!
 
Haseena: Yes?
 
Angad (agitatedly): Aunty, Abhay kahaan hai?
 
Haseena: I don't know beta. He just went out.
 
Angad: Damn!
 
Haseena: What's wrong?
 
Angad: Kuch nahin aunty. Woh...he had to bring red lipstick.
 
Haseena: Lipstick? *tilts head* Why?
 
Angad (uncomfortably): Woh...aunty.. (brightly) Kabir ke liye. They are going out tonight na.
 
Haseena: Oh really? Toh unhein red lipstick kyun chaahiye?
 
(She sees Chaand swaying.)
 
I don't have any more red lipsticks. Abhay sab le gaya. Call him.
 
(She goes to help Chaand, who is very pale now. His eyes glow a deep blue..)
 
*
 
Angad: Kabir!
 
Kabir: Yeah?
 
Angad: Abhay nahin tha. Aur uski mom boli red lipstick nahin hai.
 
Kabir: Damn! Wait...I will ask Pia.
 
(He calls Pia.)
 
Pia: Haan Kabir?
 
Kabir: Pia.. (He feels that familiar thrill as he takes her name.)
 
Pia: Bolo Kabir.
 
Kabir: Um...tumhaare paas red lipstick hai?
 
Pia: Red? No! Kyun?
 
Kabir: Woh..uh...woh....Abhay ko chaahiye.
 
Pia (confused): Abhay ko? Kyun?
 
Kabir: He wants to use it.
 
Pia (shocked): What!!
 
*
 
Haseena: Chaand. I am missing something......
 
Chaand (croaks): Your red lipsticks?
 
Haseena: No! (pacing in front of the fireplace) Something...that...boy....sssaid....
 
(Chaand starts shaking again.)
 
Yessssssssssss! Kabirrrrrrrr... He said....Abhay and Kabir were going out tonight.. Going out. Uska matlab....it's a date, right?
 
(Chaand's eyes turn blue.)
 
Hmmmm....Abhayyy.....you. cannot. do. thisssssssssssss!!!
 
[The doorbell rings again. Chaand opens the door, and faints again!!]
 
 
***
 
 
 
For all those who want to complain about the short length of the update, it's 3 am hereOuch, and I am in the middle of assignmentsOuch, so please put up with this style for sometime. I update whenever I get a few minutes. Will write longer stuff as soon as I get some more time.
 
For all those who wish to complain that I am not focussing on Abhiya much, I don't have any dealings with RomanceSleepy, and I do not wish to write about something that I have no idea aboutConfused. Plus, the main purpose of this FF is to make you all laughLOL. Romance is just a tiny part of the story - it will happen when it will. Smile
 
 
Thanks for reading!!!Embarrassed
 
 
 
  

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged

Phele socha kal karoon but rahan nahi gaya and besides i know wont have any time tomorrow so here we go,

Hilarious update yet again! Tongue 
Like I said before, Dan and his never ending bhook always make me go ROFL 
 
Abhay and Kabir!! And not only that they want 'lipstick' as well!? ShockedLOL Even im going to faint! LOLLOLLOL
But hey! Abhay, Kabir aur Angad ke beech kaise aaskta hai? So not fair. ROFL
 
And i feel the worst for Chaand. Ouch Haaye humara moony eyed Chaandu! :P LOL
Baar baar faint hota raha tu saach mein doctor ki zararoot pad jaegi. ROFL
 
But but im loving it! Thanks for writing such fun updates! Big smile 


Edited by sugaryanu - 30 January 2011 at 3:28pm

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