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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 26)

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

Yayyyiieee !! I thankyou for updating soooo fast !! u are great !! hehe
I loved this part !!Danish really got what he deserved Dancing hehehehe hope Maaya will make him suffer for eternity buhuhahahahaha
Kabir & Angad are hilarious !!
and hahaha what's wrong with the Raichands ?LOL
 
 
LOLLOLLOL Lol..Thanks! Like I told Sana a few posts earlier, I like to post short and frequent updates that can be read in less than 10 minutes - longer posts are nice too, but then both the readers and the writer need loads of time to sit and read/write....I don't have that much. ROFL
 
LOLLOL Mean Daanish - bad deeds do get punished! Tongue
 
Raichands...is anything right with them? LOLLOLLOL
 
 

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 16
 
 
 
Abhay looks up at Haseena in shock.
 
Abhay: Mom! You are okay? Dekho na, Dad drank all the dye I had prepared!
 
Haseena: Dye? What kind of dye?
 
Abhay: Oh...you know...the kind we colour clothes with. I wanted to dye my shirt.
 
Haseena (menacingly): Red?
 
Abhay: Uh..yeah. Red.
 
Chaand (still unable to speak much): Dye? It was dye? Why?
 
Haseena (tilting her head) : Yes. Why? 
 
Abhay: Er..umm..because I am in love?
 
[Chaand faints.]
 
 
*
 
Finished all the sandwiches.
 
Have to punish Pia.
 
Have to eat chips.
 
 
Daanish went off to look for chips.
 
 
*
 
Why isn't he answering his phone?
 
Is he angry with me? But I told him main Misha ke saath hoon.
 
God! Abhayy! Answer the phone!
 
Oh thank God!
 
Pia: Hello? Abhay...
 
 
*
 
Abhay rushes to pick Chaand up, but Haseena stops him.
 
Haseena: In love? With whom?
 
Do I know her?
 
Is it...that..Pia?
 
Abhay: Mom I...
 
[His phone rings. He sees that it is Pia calling. Since Haseena is watching, he takes a deep breath and answers the phone.]
 
Hey...Kabir!!
 
(at the other end..obviously!LOL)
 
Pia: Abhay? It's me...Pia.
 
Abhay (smiling): Yes dude...I am coming.
 
Pia: Dude? Abhay..
 
Abhay: Haan...just had some work at home. I am coming. *sees that Haseena has moved away* And I am bringing all the stuff we need to make our evening perfect...
 
Pia (understanding what he is saying): Oh! Thanks Abhay!
 
Abhay: Just wait for me darling....I will be right there....
 
 
*
 
[Pia stands frozen for a few minutes, but is shaken out of her reverie by an impatient Misha.]
 
Misha: What?
 
Pia: He is getting the stuff. *looks lost*
 
Misha (teasingly): You are looking like usne tumhein I love you bola.
 
Pia (waking up suddenly): Hawwwwwwwwwwww!
 
[Misha starts teasing her.]
 
 
*
 
Satisfied that Haseena would not ask any more questions right now,Abhay prepares to leave.
 
As he goes out of the room, he does not see Chaand sitting up, looking as if Haseena has just run away with another vampire...
 
***
 
 
 
__edit__
 
typo-ed. OuchLOL
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 29 January 2011 at 3:05pm

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged

EDIT

Abhay and Red and...love! ShockedLOLLOLLOLLOL
Chaand fainted! Poor guy he needs medical attention....Is there a doctor in the house!? ROFL
 
And Abhiya are together already!? *sweet shock* Whoa! that was fast. But happy. Big smile
 
Danish and his never ending bhook always makes me go ROFL
I guess he is one of the living deads now. Kyunke unki pyaas nahi bhujti, aur uski bhook! ROFL
 
looking as if Haseena has just run away with another vampire... ROFL
That would be a sight to watch! WinkLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
Good going Adi. Ab tu im even looking forward to reading Dan's part. *shocked at herself for saying this.* But you make even Dan fun! LOLLOL


Edited by sugaryanu - 30 January 2011 at 2:28am

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
yaar jaldi aur bara update karo
loved did one and do pm me plzzzzzzz
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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
awesum updates...........ROFLROFLROFL
abhay called piya DARLING???????ROFLROFL how cuteeeeeeeee......plzz pm me whenever u post ur next update.....

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
hei,
u forgot 2 pm with d update..
but its ok..
FF is getting funny..
but its nice to laugh out reading..
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

EDIT

Abhay and Red and...love! ShockedLOLLOLLOLLOL
Chaand fainted! Poor guy he needs medical attention....Is there a doctor in the house!? ROFL
 
And Abhiya are together already!? *sweet shock* Whoa! that was fast. But happy. Big smile
 
Danish and his never ending bhook always makes me go ROFL
I guess he is one of the living deads now. Kyunke unki pyaas nahi bhujti, aur uski bhook! ROFL
 
looking as if Haseena has just run away with another vampire... ROFL
That would be a sight to watch! WinkLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
Good going Adi. Ab tu im even looking forward to reading Dan's part. *shocked at herself for saying this.* But you make even Dan fun! LOLLOL
 
ROFLROFLROFL
 
I know!!!!!!!!!! I was thinking of making Abhay ask for more lipsticks when he said he wants to wear red...God knows how that happened. ROFLROFLROFL
 
@doctor in the house...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL!!!!!
 
@abhiya...well, depends on how you define 'together'! Wink
 
@daanish....ROFLROFLROFLROFL aur kuch nahin hai karne ko toh he has started eating..wela kahin ka. ROFLROFL
 
 
ROFLROFLROFL
 
Thanks....glad you enjoyed it!! Wink
 
 
Oh God..just seeing you makes me ROFLROFLROFL. ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
 

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanaghaffar1997

yaar jaldi aur bara update karo
loved did one and do pm me plzzzzzzz
 
thanks. Smile
 
I'll try to write a longer update - it's just that I don't get enough time at a stretch for one of those. this one too I wrote at 3:30 am!!!!!OuchTongue that's why couldn't pm anyone either. Embarrassed

 

Originally posted by chakku

awesum updates...........ROFLROFLROFL
abhay called piya DARLING???????ROFLROFL how cuteeeeeeeee......plzz pm me whenever u post ur next update.....

 
LOLLOLthank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
sure will do!!!!!!!!!!!Smile

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