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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 24)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

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Awww! Never mind....I'll make my computer stay on the ground next time so you can catch my post quickly. Smile

 
Well, that's what Maaya asked for, right? She loved him truly. Wink
 
Abhay ki Abhay hi jaane...even God keeps asking what Abhay is going to do next. LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
Yeah...poor Angad...gets abused all the time, bechaara. *sighs*
 
 
Thanks so much!!
 
I'm thinking I might update tonight only....just can't stop myself from writing!!! LOLLOL
 
*hides from eggs and chappals*
 
 
 
YAY for another update! Big smile
*comes infront of Adi to save her*
 
Dont worry chaahe ruke zaamana, chaahe ruke mummy, tujhe update karni pade gi! WinkLOLLOL
 
And this time i'll be the first to comment! Approve

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

 
YAY for another update! Big smile
*comes infront of Adi to save her*
 
Dont worry chaahe ruke zaamana, chaahe ruke mummy, tujhe update karni pade gi! WinkLOLLOL
 
And this time i'll be the first to comment! Approve
 
LOLLOLI dread the day even you get bored of me writing all day long. ROFL
 
My mum's going to love you...run for your life!! ROFL
 
 
Wink
 
 
 

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
wats going on with raichands?
is abhay doing some experiment in house?

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
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wats going on with raichands?
is abhay doing some experiment in house?

 
 
erm...dunno...lemme just check. Tongue
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
it was good but too short

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanaghaffar1997

it was good but too short
 
thanks. Smile
 
lol..I like to keep my updates short but frequent. something you can read in 5-10 minutes everyday, or maybe even twice or thrice a day. Smile
 
might start something longer later...Wink
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
Part 15
 
 
Daanish is confused. But he is also happy. He is alone in his house. There is no one telling him that he is undead. No one to take his furniture away.
 
He thinks of his parents, his beloved brother, his Panchhi....all are upset with him. Maaya is dead too.
 
Pia. It is all because of her.
 
But I am not alive either. Maaya ne toh yehi kaha tha. Aur yeh bhi that I did not get my wishes fulfilled because I was bad.
 
Kya main bura tha? Kya galat kiya maine?
 
Kuch galat nahin kiya.
 
Aur ab main is baare mein nahin sochoonga.
 
Now I will only think of sandwiches.
 
He goes down to the kitchen and makes himself all the sandwiches possible and starts eating.
 
*
 
There is astonishment on Chaand's face, followed by puzzlement, trailed by disgust. He sprays out whatever amount of the liquid he has not swallowed and gasps for breath. Impatient with the amount of time Chaand is taking to get the restorative blue liquid he had asked for, Abhay comes into his room. He stops when he sees Chaand choking.
 
Abhay: Dad? What's wrong?
 
(He sees the overturned goblet.)
 
(angrily) What the hell have you done Dad!!! Aapko kaha kisne tha use peene ko??
 
Chaand (choking): Sorry...maine gaaya bhi "Pi loon"....but koi reply nahin mila toh main pi hi gaya...
 
Abhay: Huh!!! You know what it was?
 
Chaand (still coughing): I think I have a good idea of what it was...
 
Haseena (suddenly appearing at the doorway): Yahaan kya ho raha hai? What is going on?! Tell. Me. NOW!
 
*
 
Angad finally catches up with Kabir.
 
Angad: Look, dude, tum please jo bhi karo, dhyaan se. Tumne Pia ko already bahut hurt kiya hai. Ab gadbad mat karna.
 
Kabir: I know. Tabhi maine sab ek letter mein likh diya hai. Kal use doonga. I hope ise padh ke mujhe woh maaf kar de.
 
Angad: Aur agar nahin kiya?
 
Kabir: Nahin kiya toh.......I don't know. I will wait for her.
 
[Angad's phone rings. He listens in amazement.]
 
Angad: Chal.
 
Kabir: Kahaan?
 
Angad: Tera mood theek karne!
 
[They both go off.]
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
(lots of typos coz I'm sleepy...but Chaand was about to explode so had to let the poor guy spit out the disgusting stuff.OuchLOL)
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 28 January 2011 at 2:08pm

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged

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Ok im not sure ke should i laugh or be angry at that insensitive beep Dan! but im still rofling at the sandwhiches part! ROFLROFL 
 
And you were planning to burst Chaand! Haww! Good he spitted that red what ever it was on right time! Poor him. LOLLOL
 
And 'pee loon' ROFL Now i can never listen to this song without laughing out load and people staring at me thinking im losing it. LOLLOL
 
And sachi yeh ho kya raha hai? Mujhe bhi koi bataoo? LOL
 
Kabir Kabir Kabir. *sigh* Piya is not meant for you. Actually feeling bad for him. Show mein bhi yahi haal hai. Ouch
Anyways now what is Angad upto? Ek aur fatak khaane ka iraada hai kya? LOL 
 
Nice update Adi! Enjoyed it even more than the last one! Big smile


Edited by sugaryanu - 28 January 2011 at 2:19pm

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