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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 21)

amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Originally posted by amail1601

Originally posted by sugaryanu

ROFL
And it has to be one of the best updates till now!
ShockedShockedShocked really??!!! thank you!! Embarrassed *gets thoughtful*  
Yup! i mean the previous were good too but this one had a special touch! Wink
Lol...I didn't mean that...was just thinking about what you liked so could focus on improvement. Smile 
 
 
p.s. you're first again!!!!!!!! WinkClapWink
Arey haan! yeh tu mein bhool gai LOL
Yay for me! LOLLOL
Yayyy! ClapLOL 
p.p.s. do check your inbox!! Embarrassed
Checked and replied. Embarrassed 
Replied too. Smile 
 

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
hei,
it was very funny actually..
"melody itni choclatee kyun hoti hai" ROFL!!! to d core.ROFLROFLROFL
I couldn't stop thinking abt tat convo.
then haseena fainting seeing abhay ROFLROFLROFL
totally a fun filled update..

waiting 4 ur next update..
shaggyscooby Senior Member
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
It was crazily hilarious I mean  with Abhay and lipstickROFLROFL
Keep such updates coming they make my dayLOL
Thank u for pmSmile
lighteningbuzz Goldie
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Wow yaar! You have this awesome, brilliant sense of humor!! You always have me cracking up! LOL
ShockedShockedShocked May I please quote you on that?? My best friend used to keep telling me I have a lame sense of humour. OuchLOLLOLLOLLOL 
Seriously, thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
 
These lines were out of this world hilarious!
LOLLOLLOL Glad you thought so!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 

Chaand: It was such a weird situation. I wanted you, but I had come to see your sister. I have fought so many times with these TV creatives to stop using our story, but they are adamant. They say it brings them TRPs...

Oh My dear God! LOLLOL I am sure it does!
ROFL Yeah...the number of times I have seen that particular twist... LOLLOLLOL
 
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand.....unka naam mat lo. Unke naam se...I cannot control...... [Her eyes start glowing.]
 
ROFL!
 
"unke naam se...I cannot control!" ROFL CVs run for your lives!!! LOL *CVs run*
 
Now, if this show shuts down tomm becuz, somehow the CVs disappeared, I won't be surprised by what happened to them and how it happened to them. LOL
 

Chaand: Sorry darling. I will bring one for you tomorrow.

Haseena (putting her face close to his): Chaand.... that. is. why. I fell in love with you.......... you are so sweet!

Chaand: Oh Haseena...............

[They move apart and stare into each other's eyes, doing little twisting neck movements in that ancient ritual of love known as 'necking'... Of course, some misguided humans later started using the term for a very disgusting (from a Vampirical point of view) activity where people actually touched each other, but that is another story.]

LOL LOL
 
And then:
 

Maaya: Haan Daanish. Main. Main tumhaare liye hi aayi hoon.

Daanish: P-p-p-par ..tum toh...tum toh marr gayi ho na? You are dead!

Maaya (laughs bitterly): Toh maine kab mana kiya?

Oh God!
 
 
Daanish: Agar tum marr gayi ho, toh main tumhein kaise dekh sakta hoon?

Maaya: Socho Daanish. Saath jeene..aur saath marrne ke vaada kiya tha na..

ROFLROFL Poor Danish! ROFL
 
Daanish: No. It cannot be. *pushes her away* I am not dead.

Maaya: Yes. You are not dead.

Daanish: Toh phir?

Maaya: You are undead

LOL I wonder what is next in store for Danish......
 
 
Great work! Clap
 
 
Thank you!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Okay, I just got done reading your 12th update.
 
Kabir-Angag Dostana- LOL.................wait, what happened to Abhay??? LOL I think Abhay-Kabir are completely made for each other! LOL
 
Chand-Haseena ki love story........LOL As John Abraham says in Dostana, "What a wonderful story!" LOL Wink
 
Keep it up! Your updates are awesome.
 
 
 
 
 
Abhay...well......actually, he is made just for me na...toh keeping him away from Kabir. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOLLOL
 
Thanks so much!!! *hugs*
 
 
Your best friend told you have a "lame sense of humour." Wow, is she nuts? Maybe her definition of humour is different.
 
You are keeping Abhay away from Kabir..........lol LOL Nahin!!!!!!!! but, but, I liked their jodi..........even the SBS thought so. LOL 
 
Well, I can understand that you want Abhay for yourself. Wink But, you are going to have to wrestle with Piya for that.........but, I think that would be fairly easy becuz, Piya at times can be easy to fool as she has the capability to annoy Abhay to bits........LOL  LOL
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Oh My dear God! LOLLOL 
amail1601 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei,
it was very funny actually..
"melody itni choclatee kyun hoti hai" ROFL!!! to d core.ROFLROFLROFL
I couldn't stop thinking abt tat convo.
then haseena fainting seeing abhay ROFLROFLROFL
totally a fun filled update..

waiting 4 ur next update..
 
 
Hey!!
 
Thanks. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
LOLLOLLOL I used to love those Melody ads...and when my grandmum comes to visit she always gets me those Melody toffees.. I'm happy it appealed to you too!! EmbarrassedLOLLOL
 
Yeah...who would have thought?!!! Shocked I was so shocked too when I wrote that suddenly. ROFL
 

 

Originally posted by shaggyscooby

It was crazily hilarious I mean  with Abhay and lipstickROFLROFL

Keep such updates coming they make my dayLOL
Thank u for pmSmile
 
Come to think of it, I need to give credit to Henna (Jungli_Billi) here....it was something she said that must have stuck in my head.....because even I didn't know I was going to write about Abhay and lipstick in the same sentence!! EmbarrassedTongueLOLLOLLOL
 
Thanks so much!! And you're most welcome! Smile
 
 
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Your best friend told you have a "lame sense of humour." Wow, is she nuts? Maybe her definition of humour is different.
 
You are keeping Abhay away from Kabir..........lol LOL Nahin!!!!!!!! but, but, I liked their jodi..........even the SBS thought so. LOL 
 
Well, I can understand that you want Abhay for yourself. Wink But, you are going to have to wrestle with Piya for that.........but, I think that would be fairly easy becuz, Piya at times can be easy to fool as she has the capability to annoy Abhay to bits........LOL  LOL
 
 
ROFL Naah...I guess he was just being Abhay-ish then...remember na his reaction to Pia's straightened hair? LOLLOLLOL
 
Well, see....Abhay has me...and then Pia and T and Trackerare after him. Plus Maaya used to depend on him. And even Haseena is such a possessive mom! Bechaara akele akele kitna handle karega? OuchLOL 
 
Waise you can expect a really weird triangle/quadrilateral/pentagon/etc. in the upcoming parts! Wink That is, if these characters let ME write instead of doing their own thing. OuchLOL
 
*Ahem* Not going to comment on Pia because I have sworn to be nice and diplomatic... *innocent smile* Tongue
 
Thanks sooo much!! For reading, for replying, and for liking my crazy kinda humour. Wink
 
 

Originally posted by -Destiny-

Oh My dear God! LOLLOL 

Had fun? Wink
 
 

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
it was reaaly interesting plz pmm me when u write the next pr8 add me to ur pm list

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