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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 20)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoyolo

As usual, awesome update !!

"Main hoon na... tumhara love."LOL
"my brother Tararara" ROFL
U ARE TOO GOOD !!!

 
 
hey thanks so much!!!! Smile
 
I thought all my readers have run away. CryOuch
 
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
 
 
hey thanks so much!!!! Smile
 
I thought all my readers have run away. CryOuch
 
Tongue
 


Hey don't think like that,
Well, there are many FF writers in this and many other forums too,
and many or most of them aren't that different from each other..
U know girl boy meet each other,fall in love,passionate encounters,blah blah blah..its too repetitive
And of course you know all this..Embarrassed 
(I really dont mean to offend anyoneSmile,but its as per my observation)

A few amongst all of these FF's are unique in their presentation and are definitely worth a read,
Your's is one of my Fav's!!Thumbs Up

So don't feel bad bout it,chill..you are awesomeStar...chaandeena rocks LOL

P.S - Kabir Angad part was really funnyLOL..reminded of that epi where both are paper dancing ROFL


Edited by cutemug - 26 January 2011 at 1:53pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
*Runs at a lightening speed to reach on time* Nahiiii! :P Adi dont think like that! We are here to read and enjoy your FF. =)
 
Agree with Cutemug. Most of the FF's are almost the same. But your's is different. And honestly the only one i actually look forward to reading. *hides to save from the coming joote and dandey of other writers* TongueLOL
 
So dont you stop updating. Especially now that i have become a Chaandeena fan! ROFL
 
Waiting for the next part. =)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemug


Hey don't think like that,
Well, there are many FF writers in this and many other forums too,
and many or most of them aren't that different from each other..
U know girl boy meet each other,fall in love,passionate encounters,blah blah blah..its too repetitive
And of course you know all this..Embarrassed 
(I really dont mean to offend anyoneSmile,but its as per my observation)

A few amongst all of these FF's are unique in their presentation and are definitely worth a read,
Your's is one of my Fav's!!Thumbs Up

So don't feel bad bout it,chill..you are awesomeStar...chaandeena rocks LOL

P.S - Kabir Angad part was really funnyLOL..reminded of that epi where both are paper dancing ROFL
 
Awww...thank you!! I'm feeling a bit better now. Hug
 
I get what you're saying, and I agree too, that's why I always try to write something different, because to be honest, I don't like romance much. LOL 
 
 
I guess I was just feeling bad because I am writing almost daily updates now, and PMing people as they requested, but there is hardly any response! Ouch If I am doing something wrong, or doing something right, like any other 'creator' I would like to get a proper feedback about it too!!
Sure, there are some really nice people who are actually silent members, but who come every time without PMs and at least 'like' the update......but the 5000+ views and yet very few comments/likes really scare me. OuchLOL
 
 
Glad that at least some of you are coming back for more. Embarrassed Will keep on writing until there's even 1 reader let. After that the mods will hang me for spamming. ROFL
 
 
Thanks soo much though!!!!!! Smile
 
 

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

*Runs at a lightening speed to reach on time* Nahiiii! :P Adi dont think like that! We are here to read and enjoy your FF. =)
 
Agree with Cutemug. Most of the FF's are almost the same. But your's is different. And honestly the only one i actually look forward to reading. *hides to save from the coming joote and dandey of other writers* TongueLOL
 
So dont you stop updating. Especially now that i have become a Chaandeena fan! ROFL
 
Waiting for the next part. =)
 
 
ROFL
 
*holds on to Anu to prevent her from falling on the dog*
 
Thanks yaar. Glad to know you are appreciating my work. SmileSmileSmileSmile
 
*builds a wall in front of Anu to save her*
 
Like I told Mugdha, I will keep writing until the mods hang me....I'm that chipkoo. LOLLOLLOL
 
*ahem* Chaandeena huh? *rubs hand gleefully* You'll love what's going to happen next. Wink
 
Thank you soooooooooooo much!! *hugs*
 
 

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Wow yaar! You have this awesome, brilliant sense of humor!! You always have me cracking up! LOL
 
These lines were out of this world hilarious!
 

Chaand: It was such a weird situation. I wanted you, but I had come to see your sister. I have fought so many times with these TV creatives to stop using our story, but they are adamant. They say it brings them TRPs...

Oh My dear God! LOLLOL I am sure it does!
 
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand.....unka naam mat lo. Unke naam se...I cannot control...... [Her eyes start glowing.]
 
ROFL!
 
"unke naam se...I cannot control!" ROFL CVs run for your lives!!! LOL
 
Now, if this show shuts down tomm becuz, somehow the CVs disappeared, I won't be surprised by what happened to them and how it happened to them. LOL
 

Chaand: Sorry darling. I will bring one for you tomorrow.

Haseena (putting her face close to his): Chaand.... that. is. why. I fell in love with you.......... you are so sweet!

Chaand: Oh Haseena...............

[They move apart and stare into each other's eyes, doing little twisting neck movements in that ancient ritual of love known as 'necking'... Of course, some misguided humans later started using the term for a very disgusting (from a Vampirical point of view) activity where people actually touched each other, but that is another story.]

LOL LOL
 
And then:
 

Maaya: Haan Daanish. Main. Main tumhaare liye hi aayi hoon.

Daanish: P-p-p-par ..tum toh...tum toh marr gayi ho na? You are dead!

Maaya (laughs bitterly): Toh maine kab mana kiya?

Oh God!
 
 
Daanish: Agar tum marr gayi ho, toh main tumhein kaise dekh sakta hoon?

Maaya: Socho Daanish. Saath jeene..aur saath marrne ke vaada kiya tha na..

ROFLROFL Poor Danish! ROFL
 
Daanish: No. It cannot be. *pushes her away* I am not dead.

Maaya: Yes. You are not dead.

Daanish: Toh phir?

Maaya: You are undead

LOL I wonder what is next in store for Danish......
 
 
Great work! Clap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Okay, I just got done reading your 12th update.
 
Kabir-Angag Dostana- LOL.................wait, what happened to Abhay??? LOL I think Abhay-Kabir are completely made for each other! LOL
 
Chand-Haseena ki love story........LOL As John Abraham says in Dostana, "What a wonderful story!" LOL Wink
 
Keep it up! Your updates are awesome.
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Wow yaar! You have this awesome, brilliant sense of humor!! You always have me cracking up! LOL
ShockedShockedShocked May I please quote you on that?? My best friend used to keep telling me I have a lame sense of humour. OuchLOLLOLLOLLOL 
Seriously, thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
 
These lines were out of this world hilarious!
LOLLOLLOL Glad you thought so!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 

Chaand: It was such a weird situation. I wanted you, but I had come to see your sister. I have fought so many times with these TV creatives to stop using our story, but they are adamant. They say it brings them TRPs...

Oh My dear God! LOLLOL I am sure it does!
ROFL Yeah...the number of times I have seen that particular twist... LOLLOLLOL
 
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand.....unka naam mat lo. Unke naam se...I cannot control...... [Her eyes start glowing.]
 
ROFL!
 
"unke naam se...I cannot control!" ROFL CVs run for your lives!!! LOL *CVs run*
 
Now, if this show shuts down tomm becuz, somehow the CVs disappeared, I won't be surprised by what happened to them and how it happened to them. LOL
 

Chaand: Sorry darling. I will bring one for you tomorrow.

Haseena (putting her face close to his): Chaand.... that. is. why. I fell in love with you.......... you are so sweet!

Chaand: Oh Haseena...............

[They move apart and stare into each other's eyes, doing little twisting neck movements in that ancient ritual of love known as 'necking'... Of course, some misguided humans later started using the term for a very disgusting (from a Vampirical point of view) activity where people actually touched each other, but that is another story.]

LOL LOL
 
And then:
 

Maaya: Haan Daanish. Main. Main tumhaare liye hi aayi hoon.

Daanish: P-p-p-par ..tum toh...tum toh marr gayi ho na? You are dead!

Maaya (laughs bitterly): Toh maine kab mana kiya?

Oh God!
 
 
Daanish: Agar tum marr gayi ho, toh main tumhein kaise dekh sakta hoon?

Maaya: Socho Daanish. Saath jeene..aur saath marrne ke vaada kiya tha na..

ROFLROFL Poor Danish! ROFL
 
Daanish: No. It cannot be. *pushes her away* I am not dead.

Maaya: Yes. You are not dead.

Daanish: Toh phir?

Maaya: You are undead

LOL I wonder what is next in store for Danish......
 
 
Great work! Clap
 
 
Thank you!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Okay, I just got done reading your 12th update.
 
Kabir-Angag Dostana- LOL.................wait, what happened to Abhay??? LOL I think Abhay-Kabir are completely made for each other! LOL
 
Chand-Haseena ki love story........LOL As John Abraham says in Dostana, "What a wonderful story!" LOL Wink
 
Keep it up! Your updates are awesome.
 
 
 
 
 
Abhay...well......actually, he is made just for me na...toh keeping him away from Kabir. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOLLOL
 
Thanks so much!!! *hugs*
 
 

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