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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 2)

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 8:57am | IP Logged
yayyy pkyek ff!!!Dancing
awesome ...needless to say !!! perfectly written!!

but i want moreeeeeeee moreeeee!!! jaldii...! *greedy me*Cool

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 9:06am | IP Logged
^^^LOL sure babes....keep watching this space. ;)
 
 
thanks for commenting! :)
 
n good to be greedy...makes me feel so wanted. :">
 
erm...appreciated wanted...not police waala wanted. LOL
 
 

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Posted: 21 December 2010 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

@chaand-haseena....you know me na...crazy stuff mein expert. ;)


that title really had me laughing... i actually believed it too...Embarrassed judging it was coming from u.. i didn't expect anything less..LOLLOLLOL
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 10:59am | IP Logged
superb concept
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:26am | IP Logged
 
 
@Henna....ho sakta hai...someday........ WinkWinkWink
 
 
@MeetPremeer....thanks!!!!!!!! :)
 
 
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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 11:51am | IP Logged
 
 
Here we go with the next part...
 
 
 
Part 2
 
 
Tracker was standing in the corridoor checking her nailpaint when suddenly her phone rang...
 
Tracker: Hey Mishu!
 
As she listened, a host of expressions charged across her face - confusion, shock, anger, wonder, and finally amusement.
 
(giggling)
 
Ok Mish....I'll be there!
 
*
 
Meanwhile Chaand and Haseena are sitting in their drawing room, sipping from their goblets as usual...
 
Chaand: Haseen.....tumhaari yeh aankhein.......
 
Haseena (smiling teasingly): Meri aankhein....Chandu?
 
Chaand: Mujhe meri naani ki yaad dilaati hain.....
 
Haseena: Oh really? 40 thousand years pehle ki baat yaad hai tumhein?
 
Chaand: Yes darling. (leans towards her) Humaari pehli mulaqaat bhi yaad hai....
 
Haseena: (mockingly) Yeah? Prove it.. (she leans away)
 
Chaand: Baat kuch aisi thi..................
 
*
 
Pia was wandering along the corridoor, wondering about Abhay...
 
(in her mind)
 
Yeh Abhay ki problem kya hai? Kyun hai woh aisa? Kabhi meri jaan bachaata hai, kabhi door rehne ko kehta hai. Door rahoon bhi toh kaise, burger jaisa jo smell karta hai.
 
(stops)
 
Burger? Yeh burger kahaan se aaya? Shaayad mujhe bhook lagi hai. Canteen jaakar kuch kha leti hoon.
 
(She walks away, and doesn't see the handsome young guy watching her from behind a pillar with a smile on his lips and mischief in his beautiful grey eyes!!)
 
 
***
 
 
 

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Posted: 22 December 2010 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
So u have decided 2 keep us in suspense about mishas revenge n have even added more suspense about the guy with grey eyes?Thats ok im a patient person.
U r doing great thanx 4 updating
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ROFLROFLROFL

ROFL Raichands romancing lol @ the no. of years LOLLOL

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