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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 19)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Destiny-

awesome h jii
 
thanks!

 

Originally posted by sugaryanu

Oho! I lost my first spot today! Dayem! LOLLOL

Great update. :))
 
And im officially becoming a Chaandeena fan! Hahaha!
But only your FF's Chaandeena. :P
ROFLROFL @ Necking and more fluttery bat!
 
And Mish and Co were again fun. Hm spooky Danish track continues huh!? LOL
 
 
 
Aww...should have run faster na. Bet you went off to sleep like the hare in the story. LOLLOLLOL
 
Thank you! Wink *ahem* new Chaandeena fan huh?? There is a lot more in store for you then. LOLLOLLOL
 
Daanish.....hmm.....you're in for a big surprise there. Wink
 
 
 

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 12
 
 
Kabir and Angad were walking back home from the Dobriyals' place.
 
Angad: Yaar...bura hua Panchhi ke saath.
 
Kabir (sighing): I know. (angrily) I can't believe Daanish itna bura ho sakta hai. Woh...he was my bro dude! Hum log ek saath bade hue. We shared everything. Kabhi ek doosre se kuch nahin chhupaaya. Aur pata nahin kaise he... I just don't have a brother anymore.[He stops, unable to speak.]
 
Angad (keeping a comforting hand on Kabir's shoulder): Main hoon na...tumhaara bro.
 
Kabir (holding his hand for a moment): Thanks bro. Par uski wajah se jo meri Pia...meri girlfriend...mera love...woh jo mujhse door ho gayi hai...
 
Angad (caught up in the flow): Main hoon na...tumhaara love.
 
Kabir : Yeah..
 
[They both smile, until they realise what has just been said. They jump apart.]
 
Kabir: Dude!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Angad: No no no no!!!
 
Kabir: Tu na...door hi reh mujhse.
 
Angad: Mujhe kaun sa tere paas aane ka shauk hai.
 
Kabir: Achha? Toh phir kis ke paas jaana pasand hai?
 
Angad (smiling shyly): Woh na...Ruhi..
 
Kabir (confused): Ruhi? Who's that?
 
[Angad just keeps on blushing and smiling so Kabir gives up.]
 
(in a sad tone) Pia.... I can't even face her now. Maine uski baat nahin suni. Use taunt kiya. Accuse kiya that she was cheating on me with Abhay, and aaj us stranger ke baare mein tak bakwas kar di... She will never forgive me!
 
Angad (a bit hesitantly): You know something....woh stranger...kuch jaana-pehchaana sa laga.
 
Kabir: Haan yaar. (realises something) Oh my God! Dude! Woh Sid tha!
 
Angad (happily): Sid is back!
 
Kabir (high-fiving with Angad): Yes! Sid is back! Aur gadhe, tu mujhe pehle nahin bataa sakta tha? Saari teri galti hai!
 
Angad: Lekin..
 
Kabir: Oho..chhod! Ab mujhe Pia se maafi maangni hai. I will have to do something really special.
 
Angad: Tu kya karega yaar?
 
Kabir (smugly): Just wait and watch!
 
*
 
Chaand: I flew downstairs and told them that I want to marry you, but they said I couldn't. Unhone ne kaha....Lavyadei badnaam ho jaayegi....what self-respecting vampire will marry her?
 
I told them ....my brother Tararara would.
 
They resisted.
 
I insisted.
 
And so we got married.
 
Haseena: And then we found Abhay and our family was complete.
 
Chaand: Why do you love him so much? Kyun?
 
Haseena: He is my son. I know rules ke according it is not something that I can reveal, but I AM his mother. Maa hoon main uski.
 
Chaand: My lovely Haseena.....
 
Haseena: My darling Chaand.......
 
[They are staring into each other's eyes when the doorbell rings. Chaand answers the door, and for once he is left speechless...................]
 
 
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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Yay! Im the first one to comment today! Party *gives a lil pat to herself* LOL
Ok coming to the update...Kabir-Angad dostana here too! LOL
And Angad blushing aww! :P Would love to read Trangad story in your words. Embarrassed 
And Kabir and Angad also know Sid!? How come?...But phele who is Sid??
 
And my fav part of the update....Chandeena!! LOL
Tararara!! ROFL What a name! It reminded me of a funny song! LOL
kya love ishtory thi! lol but liked it alot. :))
 
Nice update again. :)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Yay! Im the first one to comment today! Party *gives a lil pat to herself* LOL
Ok coming to the update...Kabir-Angad dostana here too! LOL
And Angad blushing aww! :P Would love to read Trangad story in your words. Embarrassed 
And Kabir and Angad also know Sid!? How come?...But phele who is Sid??
 
And my fav part of the update....Chandeena!! LOL
Tararara!! ROFL What a name! It reminded me of a funny song! LOL
kya love ishtory thi! lol but liked it alot. :))
 
Nice update again. :)
 
 
ROFL Congratulations!! *hugs*
 
*offers water to breathless Anu*
 
LOLLOL unka dostaana is all pervasive...har jagah aa hi jaata hai. LOLLOL
 
*ahem* thank you! let's see what happens between Tracker and Angad. Wink
 
Sid.........you will get to know really soon. Wink
 
ROFL Tararara reminds me of a song too. ROFL More than that, it reminds me of a story I love hearing from mum. WinkROFL But seriously, Chaand's bro would be Tara only na? Wink
 
Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for coming running to comment!!! ROFLEmbarrassed *hugs*
 
 

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

 
ROFL Congratulations!! *hugs*
 
*offers water to breathless Anu*
 
LOLLOL unka dostaana is all pervasive...har jagah aa hi jaata hai. LOLLOL
 
*ahem* thank you! let's see what happens between Tracker and Angad. Wink
 
Sid.........you will get to know really soon. Wink
 
ROFL Tararara reminds me of a song too. ROFL More than that, it reminds me of a story I love hearing from mum. WinkROFL But seriously, Chaand's bro would be Tara only na? Wink
 
Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for coming running to comment!!! ROFLEmbarrassed *hugs*
 
 
 
*gulps down the water* *Phew!* All that running sure makes you thirsty! LOLLOLLOL
 
Oho! Tara and Chaand! I didnt think of it like that but good going. Tongue
No thanks yaar! Hug
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Really nice and I hope Lavyadei and Tara are the ones at the door or it could be Danish or ..... hell why is it so hard to guess?LOL
Thanx for the pmHug
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

 
*gulps down the water* *Phew!* All that running sure makes you thirsty! LOLLOLLOL
 
Oho! Tara and Chaand! I didnt think of it like that but good going. Tongue
No thanks yaar! Hug
 
 
LOLLOLLOLHug
 
 

 

Originally posted by shaggyscooby

Really nice and I hope Lavyadei and Tara are the ones at the door or it could be Danish or ..... hell why is it so hard to guess?LOL

Thanx for the pmHug
 
Thank you! Embarrassed Ummm...I thought it IS rather easy to guess....but yeah..it's PKYEK so you never know. LOLLOL
 
You're most welcome! Hug
 
 
 
 
Hey btw guys, I need some feedback - are daily updates boring or is what I am writing getting boring? Confused
 
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
As usual, awesome update !!

"Main hoon na... tumhara love."LOL
"my brother Tararara" ROFL
U ARE TOO GOOD !!!



Edited by yoyolo - 26 January 2011 at 12:59pm

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