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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 15)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...

 
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...finally i am commenting lol
anddd before i move on special mention to thisROFLloved this part totallyy..

aww the abhiya hug..cud feel the intensity virtuallyEmbarrassed soo Heart
and darn i swear the way u have written the whole danish revelation scene is so real and funny than they showed on the showSleepy hmphhh...

Originally posted by amail1601

Are you even normal?
 
Daanish (suddenly snaps out of his disoriented state): What do you mean by 'normal'? Matlab kya hai tumhaara?
 
Reva: Matlab wohi hai jo tum samajh rahe ho. Loser!!!!
 
Daanish: I am NOT!!
 
Reva: Haah!!! See, I told you. You are not normal. I am leaving.

 
 


ROFLWacko dude danish ka toh band bajj gaya....RIP D!...
Wacko



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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

What an update! Abhiya were simple and sweet. Embarrassed
And Dan...Finally he is exposed! LOL
Me Like. Approve 
 
Update soon! Eagerly waiting to know more about Chaandeena story! WinkLOL
 
Thank you!! Just doing Chaand and Haseena a li'l favour so they'll talk about their love story quickly. Wink

 

Originally posted by Sshikhaa

Originally posted by amail1601

Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...

 
***
 
 


...finally i am commenting lol yeah...finally. lazyyyyy!! LOLLOLLOL
anddd before i move on special mention to thisROFLloved this part totallyy.. *ahem* thank you!

aww the abhiya hug..cud feel the intensity virtuallyEmbarrassed soo Heart 
and darn i swear the way u have written the whole danish revelation scene is so real and funny than they showed on the showSleepy hmphhh...
 
LOLLOLthank you thank you thank you!!! *curtsies*

Originally posted by amail1601

Are you even normal?
 
Daanish (suddenly snaps out of his disoriented state): What do you mean by 'normal'? Matlab kya hai tumhaara?
 
Reva: Matlab wohi hai jo tum samajh rahe ho. Loser!!!!
 
Daanish: I am NOT!!
 
Reva: Haah!!! See, I told you. You are not normal. I am leaving.

 
 


ROFLWacko dude danish ka toh band bajj gaya....RIP D!...
Wacko

ROFL yeh Daanish hai...don't think itni jaldi going to leave us. LOL

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
 
 
Part 9
 
 
Chaand stares at the flickering flames as he savours that rush of emotion that he always felt whenever he remembered that day......
 
 
Chaand: She was beautiful. Dressed demurely in all black, with tiny black stone bats glittering on her ears. Her body was slim, her neck long and beautiful, and her hair  a glorious red..... And a bat sat on her head, fluttering its wings whenever she moved. But her eyes......uski eyes sab se zyaada khoobsoorat thi...
 
Haseena (fondly): Chaaaaaaand......
 
Chaand: And then she sang
 
Suni rab ne meri fariyaad
Gali mein aaj chaand nikla
Jaane kitne dinon ke baad
Gali mein aaj chaand nikla
Tum aaye toh aaya mujhe yaad
Gali mein aaj chaand nikla...
 
 
And I started loving her even more.........
 
But then...
 
(Haseena leans forward and tilts her head.)
 
Ek awaaz aayi...a call...
 
"Haseena!!! Kahaan marr gayi?"
 
The beauty started stammering. I felt so sorry for her. I wanted to silence that voice forever.....
 
And then waddled in a fat old pimply woman, dressed in black and purple. Her dress was covered with food. She must have been attractive at one time, but now the charm was gone......
 
*
 
Daanish stares around at everyone in shock. There is complete silence for a minute, and then Panchhi steps forward. If looks could kill, Daanish was washed, skinned, roasted and carved into little chicken bits already.
 
Panchhi: Misha. Mujhe apne haath gande nahin karne.
 
Misha (steps forward and hands Panchhi a pair of boxing gloves): There you go.
 
Panchhi (puts them on): Thank you Mish.
 
[Turning to Daanish, she punches him on the jaw. Every time Daanish tries to speak, he gets one more, until he is lying on the floor, unable to get up. Kabir steps forward.]
 
Daanish (looking up): Et tu, Kabir?
 
Kabir: Shut up! Humne Romeo and Juliet perform kiya tha, Julius Caesar nahin.
 
Daanish: Sorry!
 
Kabir: Huh! Loser!
 
Daanish: Oh please!
 
Kabir: Bhaad mein ja tu. Teri punishment yehi hai ki tujhse koi baat nahin karega. Hum sab ke liye tu marr gaya hai.
 
[They all leave him lying on the floor.]
 
Daanish (angrily): Pia....main tumhein nahin chhodoonga!!!!!!!!
 
[He faints.]
 
*
 
Chaand: She took us to the drawing room. The sofas were nice, but the candles...they were cheap. That woman kept talking and talking and talking. It was her daughter that we had come to see.
 
Lavyadei....yehi tha uska naam.
 
She was pretty, I suppose, but her voice grated on my nerves and her tinkling laughter made me think that some window had been broken.
 
She sat next to me and touched my arm, but I was not interested.
 
She put her hand on mine, but it was not her touch that I wanted.
 
You. [leaning towards Haseena] You were the one I had been looking for. The only one I wanted. You. My Haseena...............
 
 
***
 
 
And a li'l surprise for the Chaand&Haseena fans.. Wink
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 22 January 2011 at 2:11pm

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
ROFL 
Chaand is too much! And that song!! LOL
And the Chaandeena Sig woohoo! Like the text on it. =)
 
Danish...tsk tsk kab sudhare ga!?
 
Nice update hon. =)
 
PS. Really like that first sig in your dabba. Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

 

ROFLROFL,This is so funny,Specially these lines:
 
 
"And a bat sat on her head, fluttering its wings whenever she moved" LOL

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"
Panchhi: Misha. Mujhe apne haath gande nahin karne.
 
Misha (steps forward and hands Panchhi a pair of boxing gloves): There you go.
 
Panchhi (puts them on): Thank you Mish"ROFLROFL

--

Daanish (looking up): Et tu, Kabir?
 
Kabir: Shut up! Humne Romeo and Juliet perform kiya tha, Julius Caesar nahin.ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 

 
 


Thanks Adi for the PM,Big smile
still have to read previous parts,
Will read it aaramse and then comment,Smile
Till then,

Please don't stop writing such stuff,its awesome!!!LOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

ROFL 
Chaand is too much! And that song!! LOL
And the Chaandeena Sig woohoo! Like the text on it. =)
 
Danish...tsk tsk kab sudhare ga!?
 
Nice update hon. =)
 
PS. Really like that first sig in your dabba. Embarrassed
 
 
ROFL now I'm finding it very funny too. ROFL
 
*ahem* thank you @sig, update and sigLOL!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
I love yours, btw.....I looooooooooooove Sylvester!!!! <3
 
 

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemug

Originally posted by amail1601

 

ROFLROFL,This is so funny,Specially these lines:
 
 
"And a bat sat on her head, fluttering its wings whenever she moved" LOL

--

"
Panchhi: Misha. Mujhe apne haath gande nahin karne.
 
Misha (steps forward and hands Panchhi a pair of boxing gloves): There you go.
 
Panchhi (puts them on): Thank you Mish"ROFLROFL

--

Daanish (looking up): Et tu, Kabir?
 
Kabir: Shut up! Humne Romeo and Juliet perform kiya tha, Julius Caesar nahin.ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 

 
 


Thanks Adi for the PM,Big smile
still have to read previous parts,
Will read it aaramse and then comment,Smile
Till then,

Please don't stop writing such stuff,its awesome!!!LOLLOLLOL

 
 
LOLLOLLOL Glad you enjoyed it. LOLLOLLOL
You're welcome...and take your time.....the FF is not going anywhere itni jaldi. LOLLOLLOL
 
Thank you sooo much! Smile
 
 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged

Im loving the Chandeena lovestoryROFLROFL

I could imagine a bat sitting on Haseenas head
Thank u for pm

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