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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 11)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
 
 
Hellooooooooooo friends!!!!!!!!!!!
 
I know normally milestones are like the 5th or the 10th or the 20th or *forgets numbers* the nth post, but I'll take this 7th part as an extra-special milestone. LOL
 
Why? That's because this is the first post on page 11!
 
So why is that special??
 
Arey....serial nahin dekhte kya? January 11 is my Abhay's Embarrassed official birthdate, that's why!! LOLLOL 
 
And of course, India just won a thriller of a cricket match that had me behaving like a vampire with myself. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
And yeah, January 16 is the date represented by the numbers Yahoo! gave to me zabardasti when I tried to create an e-mail ID. ROFL
 
 
So, in this extra-special post on this extra-special day, I want to thank my readers for reading and actually appreciating my FF. HugHugHug Keep reading and keep posting your feedback - it IS invaluable!!!! Embarrassed
 
 
And for those who appreciate that hottest pair of lovebirds Chaand and his haseen Haseena, here is a li'l gift... Wink
 
 
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Feel free to use!! Tongue
 
 
Where's part 7?
 
Not so fast.....uske liye have to do thoda intezaar... Wink
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 15 January 2011 at 2:46pm

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@amail1601 I like sid but after how much abhay went through with T I cant want to let sid go that easily Wink
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaggyscooby

@amail1601 I like sid but after how much abhay went through with T I cant want to let sid go that easily Wink
 
lol...well, we'll just have to wait and watch. LOL
 
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
 
 
Part 7
 
 
Daanish was having a good time at last. He had had fun on his day off from both work and Panchhi. Sure, he loved her, but he could not have 'fun' with her. Maaya was dead, though he did not know if he felt good or bad about it. Her pregnancy had been troublesome, but she was someone a guy really could, unlike with someone like the staid Panchhi.
 
"Enough with the 'thinking'. I deserve to have some fun now", he scolds himself as he leads Reva, a girl he had met in the pub, towards his front door....
 
 
Reva: Wow D! This place is beautiful!
 
Daanish: Hmm..
 
Reva: Your wife will be very lucky.....such a beautiful house...sooo huge...
 
(Daanish lets her ramble on and on while he unlocks the door. When they finally step inside, the house is dark.)
 
Reva: Oooooooooo!!!!!! Didn't you pay your electricity bill, naughty boy?
 
(Daanish does not reply but starts lighting a few candles.)
 
Reva: This is soooooooooo romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
(She moves towards a table and picks up a picture of Daanish and Panchhi dancing at their engagement.)
 
Reva: Your fiancee is pretty D baby, but does not look like she can be much fun.
 
Daanish (moving to take her into his arms *writer pukes here*): Yeah? And can you be....fun?
 
Reva: Yes, of course!
 
Daanish (leering): Ok then. Prove it.
 
Reva (moves back a bit): I need to use your bathroom first.
 
Daanish (sighing): Upstairs...attached to the bedroom. (moves closer again) Want me to take you there?
 
Reva (moves back again): No no...I will find it myself. Why don't you get some champagne in the meantime. (looks at him suggestively) You wanted to celebrate, remember?
 
Daanish: Ok...come back quickly...I don't have much patience.
 
Reva: I won't take long baby, coz I cannot wait either......
 
(She goes up the stairs while Daanish pours cheap champagne into two flutes. As he is setting them on the table, a sudden gust of wind blows out the candles. He tries to light them again, but burns his hand. Suddenly Reva appears and lights a candle.)
 
Reva (whispering): We don't need so many. We just need one.....
 
(There is now a change in the atmosphere - a sudden tension, anticipation.. Daanish is spellbound..... He moves to draw Reva closer, who lays her head on his shoulder. Minutes pass by, when suddenly they hear a loud bang.)
 
Reva (frightened): What was that?!
 
Daanish: Just a window baby. Now let's just get on with it.
 
(There are more bangs and Reva threatens to leave.)
 
Daanish (angrily): Ok ok...I'll go close them. And when I get back, you'll do what I brought you here for.
 
Reva (in a small voice): Ok.
 
(Daanish goes off to close the windows. Upon his returns, he takes Reva into his arms again and is about to kiss her when light from the candle flame flickers across her face. Daanish faints in shock!!!!!!!)
 
 
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Edited by amail1601 - 16 January 2011 at 5:23am

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
hawwwwwww mwew chandeena ki romantic story ka kya huaShockedShocked was dis part dedicated to danishians??OuchOuch 

LOL but wondering how u wrote dis lovey dovey danish segment..WinkLOL

Anyways naaice write up ClapClapClapenjoyed reading it but itna ni jitna i loved previous partsOuch


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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Haww Danish is a wicked donkey

hurting panchi. :(. Poor thing.

Awesome ma'am A
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged

Sooo nice

Danish fainted!!ROFLLets call Abhay to revive himROFL
Thanx for the pm

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thanx for  d pm
nice part!

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