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PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD (Page 10)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

(Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust, but heaves a sigh of relief when she throws herself at Siddharth.)
 
ROFL Damn!
 
Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...
 
 
LOL Poor guy!
 
None of the guys are interested in T. Sometimes, I feel bad for her but, then again she does this to herself, no one told her to be stupid and dumb. But, I liked this description, "Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust" LOL 
 
 
 
 
LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
It's a pity though....if it had been any actress other than Madhura I would have hated T like anything, but she reminded me too much of a very dear senior in DMG, so I don't mind her much. LOL
 
Thanks for the feedback. Wink
 

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged

Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours... ROFL

 
Abhay would actually breath a sigh of relief if T gets hold of a new guy! lol
 
Chaand and his love story! Haha too cute! :P
 
Nice update Adi! :))
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours... ROFL

 
Abhay would actually breath a sigh of relief if T gets hold of a new guy! lol
 
Chaand and his love story! Haha too cute! :P
 
Nice update Adi! :))
 
 
Thank you soo much Anu!! Glad you liked it! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by amail1601

 
 
 
Part 6
 
 
 
Chaand continues his story........awwwww my fav. partEmbarrassed
 
Chaand: I did not want to meet the girl. Maine mana kar diya...
But mom. She said I have to meet this girl. I said no....but she said I have 5 days.......hawww poor chand ko dhamki mom ko mallom ni he will shw blue eyes agar ushko gussa ayaLOL
 
Haseena: Then?
 
Chaand: Then I went to the jungle.....prowled around andheri raat mein......twice I thought I saw something, but then I thought it was just an illusion......
For five days.....paanch din.............
 
(The fire crackles loudly in the silence while Chaand and Haseena think of the fun they have in the jungle.............The phone rings, but they ignore it.)Dey should have agar baby vampy ak phone hua toh..!!oopsie biggie vampyWink
 
Chaand: And then it was the sixth night. A stormy night. I had to meet that girl. I refused. But mom......she said she would ground me.....phir no jungle mein mangal.....
 
*sighs*
 
I wore my best black cloak, and we went out to her place.
 
What a place it was..........ek chhoti si pahaadi par ek bada sa palace.......huge trees all around.......aur bats....hundreds...thousands........................
 
Haseena (dreamily): How romantic.................
 
Chaand (holds her hand and smiles): Yeah...............it was beautiful.............
Tab tak mujhe sirf tumhaara khayaal tha...aur wahaan jaane ka bilkul mann nahin tha..I did not want to go.....but suddenly, I felt drawn to the place..............
 
2000 stairs chadh ke hum upar gaye........aur dheere dheere door khula... "Aaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" kar ke....
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand...........
 
Chaand: And then I saw her. Use dekh kar I was spell-bound.......................
 Dis one i loooooooooovvveddd ittt yaaaarrrr wowww how romantic storriee jungle mein mangall.!! LOLLOLLOL was wearing a huge smile whike reading dis partLOL
*
 
Daanish goes to the Dobriyal house, but Panchhi is not there. Puzzled, he thinks of going to his office, but remembers that he took the day off. He decides to go to the market to hang around and watch girls.
 
*errgghhh iss amoeba ki entry zaroori thi kyaa..! want to read more of chaand n haseenaEmbarrassedM their fan in ur FFLOL
 
In the cafe, Kabir and Angad are sitting in a corner, watching Abhay, Pia and Siddharth...
 
Kabir: Dekh use......ek ladka aur phasa liya. Aur dono uske liye ladne ko taiyaar hain.
 
*sings*
 
Maasoom chehra...nigaahein farebi
Labon pe hasi aur dil min daga hai....
 
Angad: Ek minute dude! Labon pe hasi nahin hai...dekh toh!
 
*both look*
 
Pia is sitting quietly, staring at her burger.
 
Siddharth (softly): Eat.
 
(She starts eating. Abhay tries to call her again, but she does not respond, so he turns on Siddharth..)
 
Abhay: Stop your tricks now!
 
Siddharth (innocently): What tricks?
 
Abhay: I know who you are. Mere saath drama mat karo.
 
Siddharth (still smiling): Really?
 
Abhay: Really.
 
Siddharth: In that case, you should try to stay out of my way instead of interfering in my life.
 
Abhay (menacingly): Maybe. But Pia meri haiShockedShocked. She's mine. Agar tumne use hurt karne ke baare mein socha bhi toh....
 
(Suddenly T cuts in.)
 
T: Baby!!!!!!!!!!!
 
(Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust, but heaves a sigh of relief when she throws herself at Siddharth.)
 
Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?
 
Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...
 
(He makes Pia stand up, and walks out with his arm around her waist...)
 hahahahhahahha yu must ahve written dat dialogue in black by keeping pathar on ur dil hainaa..LOL
 
 
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Heyy adii enjoyed reading ..!! well done..!!Clap waise y pia was staring at burger usmien bhi usko kuch fishy lga kyaLOL n don't forget to call Mr. khadooos on his b'daeWink
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jungli Billi

*res*

will be back  to comment properly- read it and loved it. LOL
aww..thankoo! Embarrassed

Edit!

OMG!! we got to hear more of the chandeena love story ROFL
loved how you've used phrases like 'the firewood crackles' really feels like u can hear it and see chandeena sitting around the fireplace...LOL does that make sense? Ermm
yeah....makes more sense than what I wrote. ROFL
wow...glad you noticed! Wink

ROFL @ cloak... really captured the 'good old' days for chand.
lol...got a bit dramatic there. *whistles*

me was thinking when reading chote se mountain pe bada ghar kaise ho sakta hai ROFL
jaise badi si Haseena ke paas chhota sa Chaand ho sakta hai. Wink

@Danish bit: grrrr no comments..
@T: hilarious! ROFL
Embarrassed

waiting to find out more about sid... got me curious now..
LOLLOLLOL suspense jaari hai. LOL

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Love chandeenas idea of romanceROFL
Sid will now get T and it will be worse than a pain in the neck Im loving this
Thanx for the pm and what a fabulous updateThumbs Up please make T torture sidEvil Smile
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
ROFL LMAO...... Gosh  Madam A  .....ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL'

u got me on a Laugh riotROFLROFL
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Inu-13

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Originally posted by amail1601

 
 
 
Part 6
 
 
 
Chaand continues his story........awwwww my fav. partEmbarrassed lol...glad you like it. Wink
 
Chaand: I did not want to meet the girl. Maine mana kar diya...
But mom. She said I have to meet this girl. I said no....but she said I have 5 days.......hawww poor chand ko dhamki mom ko mallom ni he will shw blue eyes agar ushko gussa ayaLOL ROFL lol!
 
Haseena: Then?
 
Chaand: Then I went to the jungle.....prowled around andheri raat mein......twice I thought I saw something, but then I thought it was just an illusion......
For five days.....paanch din.............
 
(The fire crackles loudly in the silence while Chaand and Haseena think of the fun they have in the jungle.............The phone rings, but they ignore it.)Dey should have agar baby vampy ak phone hua toh..!!oopsie biggie vampyWink
 
Chaand: And then it was the sixth night. A stormy night. I had to meet that girl. I refused. But mom......she said she would ground me.....phir no jungle mein mangal.....
 
*sighs*
 
I wore my best black cloak, and we went out to her place.
 
What a place it was..........ek chhoti si pahaadi par ek bada sa palace.......huge trees all around.......aur bats....hundreds...thousands........................
 
Haseena (dreamily): How romantic.................
 
Chaand (holds her hand and smiles): Yeah...............it was beautiful.............
Tab tak mujhe sirf tumhaara khayaal tha...aur wahaan jaane ka bilkul mann nahin tha..I did not want to go.....but suddenly, I felt drawn to the place..............
 
2000 stairs chadh ke hum upar gaye........aur dheere dheere door khula... "Aaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" kar ke....
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand...........
 
Chaand: And then I saw her. Use dekh kar I was spell-bound.......................
 Dis one i loooooooooovvveddd ittt yaaaarrrr wowww how romantic storriee jungle mein mangall.!! LOLLOLLOL was wearing a huge smile whike reading dis partLOL
thanks nehoo. Smile
*
 
Daanish goes to the Dobriyal house, but Panchhi is not there. Puzzled, he thinks of going to his office, but remembers that he took the day off. He decides to go to the market to hang around and watch girls.
 
*errgghhh iss amoeba ki entry zaroori thi kyaa..! want to read more of chaand n haseenaEmbarrassedM their fan in ur FFLOL
phir amoeba? told you na amoeba is pretty.LOL
 
Abhay (menacingly): Maybe. But Pia meri haiShockedShocked. She's mine. Agar tumne use hurt karne ke baare mein socha bhi toh....
 
 hahahahhahahha yu must ahve written dat dialogue in black by keeping pathar on ur dil hainaa..LOL
well, not really. I mean, my Abhay is mine. Wink
 
 
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Heyy adii enjoyed reading ..!! well done..!!Clap waise y pia was staring at burger usmien bhi usko kuch fishy lga kyaLOL n don't forget to call Mr. khadooos on his b'daeWink
 
thanks for the feedback nehoo. SmileSmileSmile 
umm...burger is a mystery thodi thodi....kuch weird nahin laga? WinkLOL
ahh...mr. khadoos is always welcome. Smile
 

Originally posted by shaggyscooby

Love chandeenas idea of romanceROFL

Sid will now get T and it will be worse than a pain in the neck Im loving this
Thanx for the pm and what a fabulous updateThumbs Up please make T torture sidEvil Smile
 
lol...I'm glad you liked it. LOLLOLLOL
You're welcome....thanks for reading. Wink
Shocked torture? you didn't like sid? LOL
 

Originally posted by -Destiny-

ROFL LMAO...... Gosh  Madam A  .....ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL'


u got me on a Laugh riotROFLROFL
 
Ahem...glad I could make you laugh Miss L. SmileSmileSmile
 
 
 

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