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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
let me tell u r like f*****ing amazing. excuse my language. sorry
but u are. thanks for uploading it. u made my day. it's mean so much to me. thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u . i could kiss u. thank u so much.
 
thank u thank u. thank u. i jumped in my dorm when the thing was uplaoded. i was jumping up and down when i saw the upload. thank u . u r like awesome. thanks for uploading in both. thank u so much again for fulfilling my wish.
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
A total OMG update! Really it was Amazing!! ClapClap
Sigh Abhiya becoming one! Day Dreaming Its like a beautiful dream....and the way you have written about their emotional struggle and the heated argument....building the whole scene....it was just Amazing!
Its always a pleasure reading ur updates! Embarrassed 
Continue soon. :))

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
this was just mind blowing kaheelaBig smile i dnt know what to say, im just lost for words. it was freakin amazing, from the beginning till the end.
u really have outdone urself this timeClapClap i felt pia's pain and abhay's helplesness, it was beautifully n brilliantly written.
i never imagined u wud make abhay wud confess so soon, i was like no way maybe he's dreaming the whole thing but thank god it wasnt. but gosh that moment of passion was so beautifully writtenBlushing Blushing
 
thank u so so much for the pm darling, it means a lot, i really admire ur talent and appreciate all the time u put in to give us this wonderful ff. i wish i cud hug u right nw.HugHugHugHugHug

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
ka7eela, this part was amazing! Hats off to you for capturing so many emotions together! 
Abhay is definitely right about Kabir feeling a certain something for Pia but if the Kabir in your OS is like the Kabir in the show, then Abhay is misunderstanding his intentions!Ouch
But oh well, I'm glad Pia finally poured her feelings out to Abhay. Gosh! Poor girl! Imagine living two months like this!! 
And Abhay! I feel so bad for him! He gave in in a moment of weakness but now he feels like he betrayed Pia's trust!Cry I hope everything gets sorted out soon!!

P.S. They didn't end up going to the trip after allLOL

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Wow Kaheela! Simply wonderful .. awesome!!!
You are awesome writter....Clap
Its great that Abhay and Piya admitted their love with each other.... Good for them ! Nice romantic one!  Embarrassed 
Keep writting.. God bless you Hug


Edited by purva_j - 21 January 2011 at 7:44pm

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ka7eela

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Originally posted by ka7eela

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Originally posted by Ritz93

Thank you so much Kaheela. This was really nice change in Abhay's mood. Both of them laughing and having eye-locks. I am eagerly waiting for the next one now. (No pressures to update soon but please please)

P.S. You lied, you are a professional writer. I know that after reading your FFs update again. How do you make your characters so live and lovable if you are not.
Ritz93,
 
I totally agree with you. In fact, I have also suspected many times if she is a professional writer. Like you said, the way she manages the story's sequences so well and is able to have her readers feel the characters' pain by describing their emotions and actions in such a realistic manner that even I am compelled to believe that this girl is a professional writer in disguise. Her way of telling a story is way better than the serial creatives! And she can just completely take the reader into her characters' world. I think only a professional writer is capable of displaying such a talent and creativity. Hats off to her!

awwwwwwwwwwwwHugpayal you just made my day brighterEmbarrassed Hugthank you soooooooooooooooooo much sweet sisEmbarrassed

this was the sweetest comment ever!!..i am really moved that you feel this way about my writings, thank you from the bottom of my heartHeart
 so should i start writing my first novel or notTongue WinkEmbarrassedLOL


No need to thank me sis. I just spoke the truth from what I honestly think. I am a fan of your one-shots and the way you present your characters and stories they tend to give me the same sense of bliss and escape from my everyday problems as I get from reading novels from professional writers like Jane Austen, Harper Lee, JK Rowling, Stephanie Meyers. etc. Embarrassed You are an extremely talented young lady with a beautiful heart and that shows in your thinking and writing.Smile With such beautiful moral values and qualities, creativity and intelligence, and exceptional talent that you have, you will go far in life. Wink
And you know you will always have a big YES! from my side to start your first novel!  Keep up the great work as always! Thumbs Up
                                                  Love you tons!
                                                                   -urs sis, Payal

my sweet sisHugmy bestest fanEmbarrassed..i am truly touched and feel honored that you compare my simple writings to those well known great writersEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

O God i cant stop blushing!Embarrassed i feel so high like i could flyEmbarrassedLOL seriously

thank you thank you thank thank you..i can never thank you enough for setting my morals so high and for boosting my self confidence..you are sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet and so kind, you are the best, and its because you have  beautiful heart your self you sense this in me,  LOVE YA SISHug

you are the bestHeart
Awwwwww now you made me blush.....Blushing and also made me speechless. LOL
You are sweet as always and I am happy to make your day anytime.Smile
Oh God! I am seriously blushing big time right now like a tomato......LOL
                       I am trying to find the words as words seem not enough right now.
                         Thank you for everything you do and thank you for making my day too.
                         It was a blessing meeting you and talking to you.
                         Lots of love to you too my sis! Muah!Hug
                                                                Urs sis, Payal Heart
                                                      

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
VERYY DETAILED PDATE THANK-YOU VERY MUCH :D and u should relli write more written updates :D
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

awesome update...........................................

thanks a bunch..Embarrassed



Originally posted by Tahani01

i am bloddy jelous why oh why dont i find someone like abhay or even abhay god lol very good Smile
 
i hope you willTongue



Originally posted by RB81

worth waiting for the update.
no words to say how it felt.
awesome.
loved the way pia let out her feelings & everything tat continued.
u r good in writing the romantic scenes making it decent.
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aww thanks allot for loving itEmbarrassed..@ bold, romantic scenes should be written and shown in a decent way, otherwise they should be age restricted LOLEmbarrassed



Originally posted by trishap

great part

thanks allotBig smile



Originally posted by heena_mehta

still drooling sweets........i mean it was just fantastic, fabulous....i just loved each n every line like nything......ur way f writing making me crazy!!......u r just perfect wid ur writing skills..ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap..every emotion, every move was just brilliant..u r aving such a gud command over every aspect of ur writing..while reading u cn feel d whole story like its actually gng on..u r just amazing......!! pls.....write nxt part asap..cn't wait.....dying dying to read nxt part!!TongueTongueTongue
n yes d way u define their love, their passion was so lovely n soft ..... it is just beyond words to xplain.... .how beautifully u av written it......
 
thanx 4 such a long part n 4 ur pm alsoSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

sweet heena thanks allot hunEmbarrassed glad you loved  this much Embarrassed thanks you for your sweet words and i am so happy that you sensed every detailEmbarrassed


Originally posted by Ritz93

Very nicely written Kahila. ClapClap

Abhay is too much guilt-conscious. But I feel so good that they finally were out with what they feel for each other, especially Abhay.

Ritz, thanks hun Smile Abhay cant help! but s9infe he was out with his feelings things will turn to better between them from now on, or will they!Wink



Originally posted by moully

Wonderful

thanksBig smile


Originally posted by shaggyscooby

It was beautiful and mesmerisingClap
 your ffs are always something I look forward toEmbarrassed
I wonder why that girl with Abhay was crying?
Thanx for pmHug

aww thanks allotEmbarrassed glad you loved it and found it enjoyable ,@  bold keep reading to find outWink..and you're welcomeHug


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