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FF- Love Will Find A Way- 13th UPDATE page 74 (Page 21)

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .:.MONA.:.

hey really nice update..cant wait to read more...love the funny and angry dress secen at the end lol..cant wait to read more..thankx 4 the pm.
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hey Mona..thanks allot hunEmbarrassed..glad you loved itEmbarrassed..and you're welcomeHug

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Re: 4th Update.
 
Wow, Kaheela. This update had elements of both aggressiveness and passion. I don't know who I feel more bad for  Abhay or Piya as both are right in their own positions. Him tearing up her dress like that was totally unexpected but, I guess she was so stubborn that it was probably the only thing he could think of doing at the time to make her understand how serious he is. Glad that he didn't let her wear that revealing dress which shows that to him, his wife's image, dignity and self-respect is important.
                                                        SmileClapAwaiting to see what happens next. Wink
                                                                                          
 
                   

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Re: 4th Update.
 
Wow, Kaheela. This update had elements of both aggressiveness and passion. I don't know who I feel more bad for  Abhay or Piya as both are right in their own positions. Him tearing up her dress like that was totally unexpected but, I guess she was so stubborn that it was probably the only thing he could think of doing at the time to make her understand how serious he is. Glad that he didn't let her wear that revealing dress which shows that to him, his wife's image, dignity and self-respect is important.
                                                        SmileClapAwaiting to see what happens next. Wink
                                                                                          
 
                   

payal thanks allot sweet sisHugyeah both are right in their own ways! him tearing the dress was a bit over broad but she was being very childish, so you are right it was his last resolution 
i feel a man being possessive is way better  then a man who let his woman flaunt her body for everyone to see

@ bold i liked how you explained itSmile

btw i am trying to make Piya and Abhay in this FF a bit different then the other FF, as here their circumstances are different

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Plish update atleast one of your ff.. Every time i come online.. I look forward for your update... :( but find none.. Plish kaheela.. Update karo na... Plish

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged

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sory, i just do 2 thngs for ths lovely update.Smile

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ka7eela

Originally posted by lighteningbuzz

Re: 4th Update.
 
Wow, Kaheela. This update had elements of both aggressiveness and passion. I don't know who I feel more bad for  Abhay or Piya as both are right in their own positions. Him tearing up her dress like that was totally unexpected but, I guess she was so stubborn that it was probably the only thing he could think of doing at the time to make her understand how serious he is. Glad that he didn't let her wear that revealing dress which shows that to him, his wife's image, dignity and self-respect is important.
                                                        SmileClapAwaiting to see what happens next. Wink
                                                                                          
 
                   

payal thanks allot sweet sisHugyeah both are right in their own ways! him tearing the dress was a bit over broad but she was being very childish, so you are right it was his last resolution 
i feel a man being possessive is way better  then a man who let his woman flaunt her body for everyone to see

@ bold i liked how you explained itSmile

btw i am trying to make Piya and Abhay in this FF a bit different then the other FF, as here their circumstances are different
@bold: I totally agree with this line. But, I couldn't put it in words and you said it perfectly well! Wink
 
@sky blue: Yeah, I noticed that too. I think you did a great job making it different from the other one-shot. The circumstances, behaviors, and actions are different from the one-shot. Abhay and Piya are a little different too in this update from how they behave and think.

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:05pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SimplyAparajita

Plish update atleast one of your ff.. Every time i come online.. I look forward for your update... :( but find none.. Plish kaheela.. Update karo na... Plish
 
AparajitaHugsorry yaar i try to write whenever i have time, but my semester started and am kinda busy, i will try to update soon promise Embarrassed



Originally posted by moully

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sory, i just do 2 thngs for ths lovely update.Smile

aww thanks allot sweetsBig smile
 


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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ka7eela


Originally posted by SimplyAparajita

Plish update atleast one of your ff.. Every time i come online.. I look forward for your update... :( but find none.. Plish kaheela.. Update karo na... Plish
<font color="#FF00FF" size="3">AparajitaHugsorry yaar i try to write whenever i have time, but mysemesterstarted and am kinda busy, i will try toupdatesoon promiseEmbarrassed</font>



Originally posted by moully

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sory, i just do 2 thngs for ths lovely update.Smile

<font size="3" color="#FF00FF">aww thanks allot sweetsBig smile</font>



thanku.. Update soon.. :) :) :) :)

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