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Ooh! Kaheelooo! You sure know how to raise our heartbeats! ;)
Great update! I always love this possessive side of Abhay 😍
And Pia is a stubborn kid.😆
But loving this married Abhiya!
Thanks for the PM hon. :)
Originally posted by: Naughtynatty
he likes ppl hatin him srsly !!!
y do tht he shuld hav stayed frnds poor piya !!!I am sure he cant keep himself away for long !!!Thankd for the pm hunloved the update !!! =D
Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
loved the update......
Originally posted by: shruthiR
It was a very nice chp.Woah!! I never expected him to tear her dress and stuff😲 but anyway,I wonder how it's going to continue like this with them pretending and all.Looking forward to the next chp😊
Originally posted by: shalini_s
poor piya.. dont play with her Abhay..
Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita
Omg kaheela.. Its awesome... So intense... Pia is not wrong at her side... Nor is abhay.. Omg.. Abhay is so possesive about her.. He couldnt tolerate her in that dress.. He tore it.. Go ahead abhay... Haha.. Naughty me... Mindblowing update yar.. Every word of praise falls short when i read your update:) you know i read it i dunn know how many times.. Every thing is so so intense.. I just feel goosebumps in my stomach for every next line... Plish kaheela continue soon...
oooooooooooooooooohhhh. Simply loved it, Kahila. Awesome update. Abhay is so possesive, he can't see Pia wearing that dress for everybody. He is struggling so hard to keep his emotions under control.
Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
just loved the update dear
feel so sad for piya
thanks for the pm
do continue to pm me
Originally posted by: heena_mehta
speechless!!..........such a powerful update packed wid loads types f emotions.....love, jealousy, pain..!!!!!!!!!u r a gifted writer dear!.....u write so well...dat nyone cn feel it..
.i m feeling so bad 4 abhay n piya........coz both r rite at their own places.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...............n d way u av defined abhay's pain, agression, piya's anger..........mindblowing.....standing ovation!!!u knw i m very greedy😛😛 .......so plsss update soon!............cn't wait.!.....n thanx 4 d update n pm also😊
Originally posted by: sugaryanu
Ooh! Kaheelooo! You sure know how to raise our heartbeats! ;)
Great update! I always love this possessive side of Abhay 😍And Pia is a stubborn kid.😆But loving this married Abhiya!Thanks for the PM hon. :)awww thanks sweet Anu🤗glad i made your heart beat raise high😛😳actually both are stubborn and both are getting on each others nerves😉
Originally posted by: shaggyscooby
I feel so bad for both of them please no misunderstandings between them
Wonderful update and thanx for the pm
Originally posted by: Tahani01
hy kaheela i said i liked it but thats a lie i dont like it i love it its sooooooooooooooooooo good and i love abhay getting jelous its like the scene was happening in front of me god i just love abhay😍and i feel so sorry for pia poor bachi she has to endure whatever is in her life like abhay being awkward and noone around to talk in the big house god i felt like crying but i did not and abhay whatever he is doing is for pias sake and safety hes the best hubby in the world really fantastic update keep updating
xxx
Originally posted by: mandy1024
Know what? I logged in hoping to see a PM from you for one of your updates and got my wish right away 😃. This is 4 u 🤗. U made my day! Thanks a ton 😊
Coming to the update, really enjoyed it. Eagerly awaiting the next update 😳
i feel so bad for pia😭 poor darling is all alone in that huge mansion. abhay cud atleast sit wid her when she's having breakfast. i love his jealousy tho😆 he needs to feel like that more often maybe then he wil open up wid her. i loved that sari scene😳 it was so intense.
thanks for the pm kaheela darling, as always ur updates are just brilliant🤗
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