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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 72)

sejal1986 Senior Member
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
today you made me happy with both of your updates, it is sad that home coming ended but all good things have to end someday, and now at least ek paal is turning positive, it is a nice satisfying update for now, of course I want to see Dev strangled, but for now you make me happy. 

I still have one concern that why do you like to keep Geet and Maan in hospital in both of your updates? You never answer me but I think that you definitely belong to Medical field some ways. 

If you ever think reading any other FF, then you can try mine:

Sejal

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jnawaz

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
glad maan came on time
loved da security guards and nurse
loved das ending
hope da divorce comes fast
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged

Dev just leave geet alone. AngryHe is so sick. I am so glad that maan arrives there, beats dev and gets security to throw him out.

 

I hope someone runs him over. Good that nancy slaps dev and love threatened Dev that if he ever harmed geet, he will kill him with his own bare hands.

 

Love how the security guards pretended that maan did not threaten Dev.

 

I love how maan comforts geet and kisses her bruise. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingI am sure maan will make dev sign the papers.

 

Me so happy that they confess their love to each other and kiss. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

 
Lovely update and love the song

 

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
AWESOME

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Awe maan is always there to protect his geet so no dev can touch her again and haha loved the snide remarks the nurse and security guards made and awe maan thought if divorce but wonder how he will get dev to sign the divorce papers and awe loved maaneets special moment and yeh I understand why geet gave her reasons but now maan is here so she will be safe and loved the answers the gave espcialy geets to when they realsied they fell in love with each other anyways a great update andcsnt wait to read more Smile

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
That was wonderful....i loved it...it was amazing well because you an amazing writer....

I loved the whole thing...the way Maan beat of Dev and the cops and the nurses made me laugh tremendously....and thank goodness that the restraining order and a divorce will be filed and Geet will finally be away from Dev....

and love...they finally, in words honestly and wholeheartedly proclaimed their love for each and where and when it all started...i was so happy and i loved geets answer and the soft kiss Maan gave at the end made it just perfect...i loved it...

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
loved your ff...pls add in your pm list....

tc

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
lovely update jaz....
there are lot of women like geet who think by marrying you need to abide by your husband for all the physical torture they do.............you need to be by your husband through thick and thin but not encourage whatever he does

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