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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 36)

kirannaryani Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
wow that was really nice update can u plz add me in pm list 

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-pixie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged

Hmmm…what can I say…I wept while reading this update…seeing Geet's pitiful condition and Maan's complete helplessness to improve anything for Geet. I wonder what action will he take? He doesn't strike me as some one who would sit around waiting for fate to intervene. He now has an idea of what is going on, I want to see what he does. (3rd update and running – still going to place my bets Maan)


Jaz, since you have chosen to write about such a sensitive topic, I want you to provide the reader a peek inside Geet's head. Why would someone as educated, confident, well placed like her (based on the prologue) still put up with the bas***d that she has been married to? Why has she not shown him the door or walked out of the marriage. I don't think she is financially dependent on him- she is clearly working herself to the bone trying to fund his drinking binges, she lives in a society that is far more open and accepting of single women- if this was set in India I would have still understood the reluctance. With each update I find it harder and harder to understand Geet's motivation to stay in this marriage.


This update just broke my heart. I don't know why but I am counting on Maan to save Geet not only from Dev but from Geet herself. She needs rescuing right about now!

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shalini28 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
awesome as always

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raman1921 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Amazing update dev is such a u know what............ I am glad Mann know the truth now that it is his Misthi husband who abused her or I can say almost killed her . Kya hall bana diya dev ne mann ki misthi ka bechari geet aur kitna sahegi geet mana ki geet dev ki patni hai par yeh kuch jiyada ho raha hai dev ko lesson toh milna hi chahiye kisi se need to kick this basterd jerk or if she cannot kick him least she can divorce his ass off which probably won't be easy knowing dev he might accuse her for that she wants divorce due to her relationship with another man since he accused her coming home after meeting her lover calling her bitch which I thinck she should call him an ass instead and slap his face instead of giving explanation that she is innocent feel so bad for geet. Mann has to get his Misthi justice and put this basterd behind the bar poor girl what has dev done to her pata nahin kya hoga Nancy seems to be very good friends with geet aur geet ki family kahan hai. I just hope she didn't get hurt a lot and she gets well soon i am sure after mann took her to nancy home she will take her to the hospital seems like geet still loves mann and ya mr. pier nice name for mann jaldi update karna lol...........:)

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bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
soo emotional very very very awesome

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-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged

Awesome part.... loved it

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
awesome update yaar...   plzz maneet ko jaldi mila do... man its too much pain to handle  ...
continue super soon

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Geet is in hell pain
I hate Dev to the core
How can he jus do that to her yaar
Maaneet's life is such a mess
Loved Nacny's care n love for Geet
I wish Maan punishes Dev for wat he is dng wit his Mishti

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