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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 25)

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
great part..

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Fabulous detaling...... the experssion of every detail is so beautiful

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maankigeet4ever IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
ohhh..where is the love button on this page????? firstly, when i saw ur PM..i was wondering which one u updated..and when i saw u updated both..i did a little happy dance...i still have to read home coming but ek paal was fab !!!! u wrote their union beautifully and liked how they met at a place other than the pier..and major lol @ Mr.SUHA...ok..off i go to home coming...
thank u for updating both the FFs and giving us a new years gift
p.s happy new year :)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged

superbbbbbb update...

feeling sad on geet's plight...........

hope geet gets out of the clutches of dev soon and meets her maan soon

keep writing

reva 

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged

As promised, I am back. Great update as always. When I read that Maan was going to be staying at the restaurant/hotel where Geet worked- I was sure that he had hired some private detectives to trace out his Mishti. However, he was actually there for work. I was as surprised as Geet- if you can believe that. Talk about wishful thinking Smile

These two have quite an uphill battle- especially given Geet's currently unavailable status. I don't know whether this Maan will pursue a married Geet or this Geet will be willing to walk out of an abusive marriage and follow her heart. While I seem to know the characters superficially, I still don't know how they will react/respond to a situation or what they are thinking. They have an undeniable bond- but will they act on it, I am not so sure. I guess what I am trying to say is that I have no clue how this story is going to proceed from here.

If possible- could you let us know, (maybe in the next part) why despite clearly carrying a torch for Geet , Maan never looked her up in the 4 years since that one night these two spent together. I don't know- I just expected him to look for her. Why did he give up so easily or rather not fight for what they had? Similarly for Geet- why did she not make an effort to atleast find him.

I am really looking forward to see how this story unfolds- especially since you seem to give away so little in each update that I am always left wondering whether I even understood the characters or not.

Will try and not hound you for updates, I promise Smile. Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Lovely song selection i just love dat song Is pal..... Nd quite apt 4r d situation.......loved it.

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sejal1986 Senior Member
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
I am so impressed by your writing that I really want you to write a book or novel which you should publish, your writing did bring some tears in my eyes, not kidding, loved it, can't express more than that, it feels like I m promoting your FF to my friends also and I made them read it, they loved it too. 

I will never regret recommending your FF to someone to read.

Loved it from the bottom of my heart! continue writing! Having high and high expectations from you!

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
awsome yaar..loved it !!

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