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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 18)

-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 June 2008
Posts: 22406

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 3:18am | IP Logged
I hate Dev
Geet's life is miserable
I wish they hadnt left each other n walked away
I really wish Maan gets the old Mishti back

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Dhara_s IF-Dazzler

Joined: 19 May 2007
Posts: 3366

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Oh god...Dev is bad....!!!! And with you, we should have known better than thinking that Dev was out of the scenario....!!!Wink

I can't wait for the next part....!!!!Embarrassed

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-Urvi- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 June 2009
Posts: 2552

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 4:49am | IP Logged

It's bad enough having him be that horrendous character onscreen, but now he's this! Thought I couldn't hate him anymore than I already do; but clearly I was so wrong!

You are such a good writer! Everything happening in your stories is depicted so well that I can literally see it happening, and that too very vividly.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this turns out; I wanna see Dev dead soon, and Maaneet together as well.

Also, I wonder if Maan ended up getting married? And why the hell does Dev not work when she has 3 jobs??

Anyways, I think the next chapter will be a little more Maaneetified, or maybe I'm just hoping so.

Brilliant job, and do update soon :)

Edited by -Urvi- - 30 December 2010 at 4:50am

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mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 April 2009
Posts: 11275

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Jaz that was awesome...i was toh so happy ki DEV gaya..but that man is here..ahhh i hate him how dare he touch her...wish i could write some abusive language for him here...ahhh and they meet..atleast she can cry to him..tht will be enogh for her to last a anothe 4 years..coz i am not gonna predct anything this time..last time all predictions went fr a toss..MISHTI...his mishti..his mishti will be wih him na...
chalo i will be waiting for the next update..take ur time...

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SaJan-SaJan Goldie

Joined: 24 April 2010
Posts: 1532

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 5:37am | IP Logged
awesome... superb..
loved it...
loved d twist..
feeling sorry 4 geet... hate dev...
m so waiting eagerly 2 know maaneet's reaction wen dey meet each odr or r u planning another twist???
thnx a lot 4 d pm... plz cont 2 pm me.. dnt wanna miss ds ff... its amazing..

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 30 October 2010
Posts: 25213

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 5:41am | IP Logged

nice concept.........

loved it 

add me to ur pm list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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zaqxsw Goldie

Joined: 20 April 2009
Posts: 1938

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Hey Jaz
Fantastic... Awesome... *standing ovation*
I just loved it... 
How do u write so beautifully??? ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
It was so beautifully written that I could actually feel the emotions both of them felt...
It was a pathetic feeling to imagine Geet's pain and Maan's lonliness...
They just needed to be together again as they were the solutions to each other's problems...
Its depressing to see the pain they feel... Please make them help each other... They should be together... And Geet should surely leave the *peeep* Dev and move on in life with her love Maan... 
Please update soon...

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kirannaryani Senior Member

Joined: 08 July 2010
Posts: 656

Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:50am | IP Logged
I must say you have very very good writing skills and that reflects in your FFClapClap
please add me to your pm list......

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