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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 110)

.Regal. Goldie

Joined: 04 January 2011
Posts: 1457

Posted: 09 April 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Another Story to end Jaz....but dont worry..I will b looking for the PM that will start another one....

Ek Paal was always was just amazing...They finally got married and they are together at last...A perfect couple i may say...that truly deserve each other...

I love that Geet endures Maan office life because of the though to see him...

ANd Maan is truly very gullible...Geet is just cute....they are perfect...and th way she told him that she is pregnant was once again a priceless words to describe it....

an Nancy and Pinky are friend that peopl would die for...the way they fight for Geet's happiness and to help her....

and in the delivery room was just hilarious...Maan was again cute... he couldnt see his Geet in pain..good thing that Nancy and Pinky knocked some sense into him...

and the end....i was in tears..and it wasnt even sad (PS...i sill need to read the two OS you wrote..if i cry....i cry)

Ek one momet. everything can change and that is what happned to Maan nd Geet....

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 2883

Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
There's not much words I can say except for that was a beautiful ending to a beautiful ff from where she told maan she was pregnant, the scene where they find out what gender the baby is, the labour and then their lives 6 years later you've captured all those moments perfectly and I liked the end what maan said as it's true you only need a moment anyways a great ff and congrats for completing it on such a beautiful note Clap

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mIsHeZ.x IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 October 2010
Posts: 6358

Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
hey jazzy das not fiar u alredy finishd dis ff n not evn updated LTL 1 wen u startd that a year ago....before u startd dis 1.................   

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Shimmerr IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 February 2011
Posts: 3231

Posted: 17 April 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Really great dear,

you can write soo gooooood honey!!!

I cryed during reading emotional scenes and laught wenn they was funny.

You are one of few people who can really write such emotional scenes!!!Thumbs UpClap

keep it up dear!!!

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Be.edgy Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2010
Posts: 1964

Posted: 27 April 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Beautiful FF!!
Loved it..

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mysteriousmilli IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 02 April 2010
Posts: 32151

Posted: 21 May 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
EK PAAL...mesmerizing one...awesome ...a beautiful story ,so well told...I loved the way u narrated each and every details ...I really enjoyed every part,moment of the parts were awesome...perfect ending to the  perfect love story.

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aangelis Goldie

Joined: 17 July 2007
Posts: 2047

Posted: 25 June 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
i have to say this may be one of the best ffs ive ever read. the way u showed maan and geet's relationship progress was absolutely amazing. although at times i felt like strangling some of the characters i loved the storyline. great job and i hope to read other ffs by you.

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maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 March 2011
Posts: 11870

Posted: 25 June 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
awesome ...

just came across ur ff ...

loved it ...

add me to ur pm list ...

pm me wenevr u write nxt ...

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