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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 107)

cyum321 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Awesome just Awesome Hug

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jnawaz

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
part 14
nice part...........finally they are married and one......................lovely...............

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Wow JAAZ..tht was just awesome..really...
for this beautiful FF just few lines

na jaane kaun sa pal kya dikha jaaye,

kaun sap pal kaun se kahani suna jaye,

har pal jo bte chod jaaye nishaan,

kabhi apne toh kabhi apni parchaayeyon ke nishaan,

na jaane us pal mein kya likha tha,

jab humne unhe us mod par dekha tha,

badal di us ek pal ne zindagi humari,

na hum rahein na yaadein humaari,

ek pal mein he le liya zindagi ne ek aisa rah,

jise chodna ne paaye nah apnana tha chah,

ek pal he laga tha bhuj ko hilne mein,

ek pal he laga tha samudar ko lakkhon ko le jaane mein,

phir kyon us ek pal ke keemat koi na samajh paaya,

jab ek pal ne badal  diya humari kismet ka saaya…....

I think tht says it all..

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged
beautiful ending!
loved it
can't wait for your next story!!

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
epilogue
awesome ending dear................
just fantastic......................

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Awh that was a beautiful ending. 
I couldn't believe how Adi and Marco were that scared of Geet. It was hilarious. Poor Maan though I'm sure he made up somehow.
And I'm sure they have their hands full with three wonderful kids. I totally loved this FF concept with the whole pier/beach thing. It was amazing. Continue writing!

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
I TOO HAD A BLAST READING IT
loved it to the core
very well written
thank u for sharing this with us
hope u start another one asap..

thank u dear

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Fantastic Ending

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