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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 104)

heermeher IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Its ended Cry

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Jaz its really good story..that i believed what ever moment you get it, just spend it with good memories...

when you start new story let me know..

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
wow awsome awsome ...i dont have words to describe ....

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
loved the epilogue................
oh god maan getting into trouble when he talks abt the gal baby and him being possessive and protective and getting into trouble with geet.............
loved the way the gals twisted him with the guilt trip and made him to b with his misthi while delivering..........
loved each and every moment they shared together..............loved this ff.............
thanks for writing it.............i enjoyed reading it...........
send me a pm if u r writing a new ff on maaneet.........
i am not sure if u know abt this............there is some competition going on to publish the ff in magazine...........u can submit this ff............here is the link


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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
loved the much awaited epilogue...awesome...Clap

maan is sucha duh..D'oh...she wanted to him to know she is expecting n here he was talking abt business, pinky, ,nancy n what not...

loved the way they broke the news to every1....the italian dinner...it was nice...

loved marco's line to send them to sex-ed class....LOL

maan is seriously D'oh..i mean does he not know not to argue or say stupid things to his pregnant wife....but i liked his idea of shooting the boys who will try to date his daughter...LOL...defo an overprotective father...Embarrassed

bechara not even a single soul to save him from his wife...LOL

finally a baby girl...loved it...loved the way nancy n pinky threatened him to go inside...Big smile

so glad to know every1 settled in their lives with their kids...lovely...Clap

maan n geet...3 kids..Shocked...within 6 yrs..Shocked...well it only shows their love...Embarrassed

loved how the story began n ended at the pier only...n u r right it takes only moment to realize everything...

lovely FF...loved the journey...in the end..only 1 thing to say...


for giving us a lovely FF....

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
i had a blast reading . loved da FF it was very close to my heart. u put da feelings n emotions beautifully

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
its awesome jaz!.....Clap
this story was very close to me too.....Embarrassed
mesmerizing one!Day Dreaming
keep writing.. and never forget to pm me!Wink

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
hey happy ending!!
awesome....

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