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FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 (Page 102)

annu_825 Groupbie

Joined: 30 June 2007
Posts: 89

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
awwww, what a beautiful ending!
so i finally managed to read it....i was waiting for you to update last night, but then i had to go to sleep cause i had a midterm today! and i was like dyingg at school while studying, cause i knew you had updated, but i had to wait till after my midterm!
which reminds me, i STILL have to read a bouquet of roses!

but anyways, i lavvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved the endingg
it was simply beautiful! :)
noww, on to the next onee :)

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muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 September 2010
Posts: 4748

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Hey dear loved the update it was really beautiful
the way u wrote it was just marvellous fantastic amazing
i just loved the every bit of it the way u explained their whole nyt at the beach
ooo that was just so sweet waking up every morning in this manner nuthing could b better than this 4 them 4 those love birds which can now fly together easily happily
wedding was really ravishing near that beach nd that pier so many memories attached to it
so the best memory of their life has also gt attached to it
nancy nd pinky part was really sweet the way they were fighting nd marco was just adorable he brought those orchids loved maanz restless ness nd the way they all were testing his patience
nd finallyy he gt his reward as his mishti
the moment he would love to lock in his mind forever nd ever nd ever
the part was completely enchanting dear really it was beautiful
u really drive me crazy by ur ff u wrote it so well
so du keep writing nd showering us with ur great writing skills nd such beautiful stories
du continue soon dear will b waiting eagerly
thnx 4 the pm
god bless u

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ammu5 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 December 2010
Posts: 10499

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
awesome ff read all in a go bring down the pain n emotions superbly ur choice of songs were superb love u for this beautiful yet painful FF

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 December 2010
Posts: 22061

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
loved it....loved it...loved it...

it was amazing....Clap

finally they became one...together joined for eternity.....

loved the way maan tied the payal on her ankles...he had kept it all those years...just like she did....

loved the eccentricLOLwedding planners...both pinky n nancy...too much...but at least the wedding happened without any mistake...

marco n maan gr8 friends...both want to kill dev ...Thumbs Up..nice...

those 3 really ripped off maan...$2000 each...but maan will do or give anything for his misti...Embarrassed...

now waiting for the epilogue...Day Dreaming

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mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 April 2009
Posts: 11275

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
madam ke nakhre tauba tauba...i meant that for ur last line...
waise laalacj buri bala should count the people who give u one liners too..haan..
mmm now the updte...woah..atlast they are married and loved the briber..poor MSK is gonna go bankrupt with his wedding bills itself...hehe..
now wht else u want me to write..i didnt cry..come on ffor the first time u dibt kill anyone..or made geet cry..or...make maan seem like a i smiled...
mmm bas i cant think of anyting more to write..i have sec one to read yet..
PS: the length of the updates when i just give it a scroll literally gives me heart attack..

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prab_rockinn Goldie

Joined: 01 July 2006
Posts: 1125

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
I simply loved it Jaz.. The marriage, him trying to meet her all is so so cute !!!!

Have to praise you again for your brilliant command on the story. I mean when one reads it, its like a classic.

It like this is the only way it is meant to be...

Keep up the great work !! 

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sweet scorpio IF-Sizzlerz
sweet scorpio
sweet scorpio

Joined: 06 December 2008
Posts: 11631

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
WOW!!!...finally maneet became one!....i m soooooo happy!!!!!!
superb ending!
waiting 4 an epilogue!
continue soon!

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-pixie- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 September 2009
Posts: 6571

Posted: 24 March 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged

Lovely update…perfect ending to the story…I loved the fact that they got married right where their story started….Glad to finally know that you believe in happy endings too!

Thanks for the super long update...LOL

This was really a beautiful story and you narrated it also very beautifully! Thanks, Jaz!

Waiting for the epilogue now…<Yeah, I am greedy like that>




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