FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 - Page 80

Limerance

@Limerance

Goldie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awh that was a beautiful ending.

I couldn't believe how Adi and Marco were that scared of Geet. It was hilarious. Poor Maan though I'm sure he made up somehow.

And I'm sure they have their hands full with three wonderful kids. I totally loved this FF concept with the whole pier/beach thing. It was amazing. Continue writing!

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

I TOO HAD A BLAST READING IT

loved it to the core

very well written

thank u for sharing this with us

hope u start another one asap..

thank u dear

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

one moment to change your life .you truly said .thank you for giving us such a beautiful fiction .a very warm hug for being a fabulous writer and bringing a smile and making us believe in the beautiful expression called "love' and giving us "the moment to cherish it ".

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaSourav

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 13 years ago

brilliant update. loved it.
maaneet is proud parents of daughter .loved it.

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sejal1986

@sejal1986

Senior Member

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Posted: 13 years ago

Absolutely beautiful! can't describe in words, and it is said that this journey has ended, the most amazing story of yours, my favorite one, I could still cherish its beginning, but all good things have to end someday, will wait for more of these kind of stories from you, but yes Ek Paal was the best creation ever, I will definitely read it again and again! Thanks for this wonderful story!

Sejal

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Shalve

@Shalve

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow....superb ending..... loved it....

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407124

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Posted: 13 years ago

maverlous ending
love it core
ur damn exellent
writer keep to good
work my dear
MUAH thank yu
thanks m

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

ok...atleast for this one...i didn't cry as much....lol...

what a end...i loved it...i like the fact that everything went back to the pier for them...and she told him that they were going to have a baby...the best part was when they found out the gender...LOL...i cracked up at Maan's reaction...and Geet's anger was even better to see....even Marco and Adi were afraid and ditched Maan...LOL...

and the last scene with everyone together at the BBQ, i could feel the togetherness... sighhssss...even Ek Paal came to an end.....i bonded with all the characters...especially the new ones such as Nancy and Marco...i am little upset that we have to part with them...

But like Home Coming, Ek Paal is going to have a reread after exams...

Thank you for writing such a story....U rock JAZ

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome ending!

glad to see that everyone is happy in their lives!

continue soon!

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

I luv dis epilogue.
d hopsital scene was d best. Maan was jst crazily possessive on his unborn daughter.
Glad tat eveyone had settled with their own life.
its sad tat 'ey r sharing limited times. but wat is more imp is tat.. 'ey still keep in touch.
tat is wat called true frenship. being wif ur frens not onie during hapi hrs but also at hard times.

I luv all ur FF. its jst mind-blowing. SO much of meaning.
Thanks for dis wonderful story.. Keep writing.

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