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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

brilliant part. loved it,
finally geet got justice , god divorce from that dev.
but where is maan now,
update soon.

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...

really loved it...

1st i was shocked 2 read d 1st line... they had nt met 4 six months... after reading further i relaxed a bit....

finally geet is free from all ds trouble....

how hard it must have been 4 maaneet...

They had already lost many years; they weren't going to waste another minute. They had spent so many years alone; they weren't going to be alone anymore.

loved ds line....

maan left geet n geet is crying... but i think maan is up to giving geet some surprise...

thnx 4 updating sooner...

n thnx 4 d pm..

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ansah

@SahSah

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Jaz that was superb update as always....

finally geet is free....waiting what maan has in store for her

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419448

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Posted: 13 years ago

JAZ awwwwwwwwwwwww..why did u make him walk away..it better be something happy..u have already made us cry enough in this FF i will kill u pakka..

and it was that DASTARD DEV..ewwwwwwwwww..sicko he got money from hima nd stil..yuck kill him ...he deserves that..

and lovely update cont soon..

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abina03

@abina03

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update

you stopped in the edge

can't wait

update soon please please.............................................

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Jaz

plz yaar update kero naa 😍

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Silver!

@silver.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

sorry for the late comment, but this part was absolutely amazing! You write terrificly and i'm so glad that scum bag dev is now in jail! If you ask me he should be sentenced to death 🤣 And what is maan upto? 😉 why do i have a feeling it's something... well... good for Maan and geet, as in a surrpise? I can be wrong 😆 well anyway, great update!

x.
Silver,

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

ooooooooooo loved the part this was just amazing defo maan is planning sumthing big
hope evrything get clear out soon
that maan ******* will rot on hell i hope maan really punches him
well waiting 4 the nxt part soon

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Hi jnawaz,

I really liked your ff. Very touching & beautiful concept. The character of geet went through a lot. Keep up the good work!👍🏼

Eagerly waiting😍

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

loved it n i think maan is planning something big for geet

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