FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 - Page 35

gosh!!... hope nothing happens to geet.... 

hope this is just last  part where dev is shown

cannot bear him now...

I have been a silent reader to your story and have recently started reading these FFs(from Dec actually) ...n have to tell u I have stalked this thread and HomeComing one almost every 2nd day...finally, reading this one made me come out of my hiding!!!😊

OK 2 things... firstly, awesome writing talent...I am sure u do this as an interest and not a profession but seriously man you should consider taking up scripting job...we'd get to see amazingly strong characters and storyline - much better than the half baked plots... but then u wud leave us with cliff hangers which brings me to my second thought, Why, oh Why!?!?!? do you love cliffhangers... you literally have my heart in my mouth with that stretcher and Geet combi...

I know it makes for an interesting read and gripping story - a mark of a great writer...but its sheer torture to us poor unsuspecting readers who have no idea whats coming next to us :)

But all the same, love your writings...keep the story going.... asking for another update will amount to rude behaviour considering you have updated only about 5 mins ago :) ... but what do I do, I am hooked and addicted to your writings... btw, I have read comments that you soo love the sad endings... plzzzz I beg you dont do a sad ending to the current two FFs you are writing - both HomeComing and Ek Paal... I will forever be in love with these pieces that I have come across... please end them up happy no matter how many cliffhangers you give us in-between the beginning and end for these stories...

 

Finally, thanks for writing such an amazing story! You might want to consider getting your short story published in some magazines... they are sooo not the sitcom kinds but will make for an interesting watch were they to be adapted onscreen!!

btw, if I ask for updating HomeComing on this thread will you consider it as request and not command?? plzzz

-Harshita

 

 

love maan.... he'll do whatever she asked him to.... even if that means staying away from her for SOME time.... he loves her sooo much.... now i wanna see her love for him..... 😳😉

these media people need to get a life😡.... why do they have to intrude into others lives.... the entire description abt the mag artical was excelent👏..... you've got a way with words.....

i can see maan killing dev with his bare hands... there's no way he'd spare that @#$%^&* now.... i guess in the next part dev will get a good beating from maan... at least i hope so....

my reaction to the update in two emoticons.... maan😭 dev😡

ok you said if u get long comments u'll post the part soon so long LONG comment😆..... plz update soon....

thanks for the update....😃

do continue plz

thx.