FF: Ek Paal Epi pg103 April 1 - Page 29

good oneeeeeee.

poor geet n that moron dev kill him😡

just read part 2

read all parts

Edited by NoorFatima - 13 years ago

Oh Jaz, how do you get to write so heartwrenchingly. I tell myself not to read your creations since I know it will give me nothing but pain. But I have read all your creations on Geet forum which means you are so intoxicating.

your FF is one of the best one I have ever read, seriously, you write really well, it is as perfect as reading a novel, continue and looking forward to next part, and of course you do make me feel crying , it is really touching story and I like the modernity of the story and I live in SF bay area but have been to pier you mentioned as I have been to LA many times and love that city.

Beautiful...and that's not even enough of a word to describe the emotions you depicted in this update. Amazing job 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

retalition time maan-make dev pay!

those are actually songs...i've added youtube clips in case you guys wanted to listen...the songs are all really great! hope you do check them out
JAZ

update it............waiting............