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FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan pt25 pg 144 dt 06.06 (Page 94)

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thank u all for lovely comments and loving this ff.
 love u all and loved ur comments.
I'll try to post next part today evening.
@ jyoti, again I loved ur post but cannot like it cause of IF not letting me liked button now, as per new rule.
sorry darling.

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its ok...even i cant like ur post....
bas ab jaldi se update kar do...

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 Next part:-

Maan mad at every one for not finding the person who hit his geet but yash assured him that they will find him.

At the evening , geet wake up and stretched her hand and found maan is looking at her lovingly. Geet smiles at her and then maan pull her more closely and said good evening jaan. Geet smiles and placed her head on his chest.

Maan pull her closely said so how r u feeling now, bhook lagi kuch le aau.

Geet just hugged his waist and said no, just be with me.

Maan kissed her head and of course jaan.

Both laid there then maan get up and said sty here and He will be back soon.

After some time dadi and Vicky come there to meet geet.

Geet sit in her bed and dadi said stay in the bed today, no work. And take rest, they come here to meet her but not to give stress her.

Dadi:- how r u feeling now?

Geet:- much better beta.

Vicky:- bhabi u give us really panic and to bro, he is too scared, the maan Singh khurana who never  be scare of anything or fear is just scare to see his wify like this.

Geet blushed and dadi ma said Vicky, don't tease my bahu,waise iye aaj nehi bachpan mein bhi maan aise hi akrta tha, jab  bhi geet ko chot lagti thi, usse pareshani suru ho jata , dard suru ho jata.

Geet:- nehi dadi ma aise kuch nehi, oh toh baas aapke daar se aise karte the.

Dadi ma:- nehi beta.oh tab se hi tumhara care karta  tha but express jada aajkal karne laga kyuon and winks at geet.

Seeing this geet again blushed.

Vicky:- mein kuch samjha nehi,

Maan heard all and said nothing bete, now go and join yash for some discussion, he is waiting for u.

Vicky:-  y r u coming in wrong time always, just have some time so spend with my bhabi nehi, jalne laga aur aagay bhagane ke liye.

Maan give his famous glare to Vicky and Vicky just leaves the room.

Dadi ma smiles and kissed both maaneet's forehead.

Dadi:- maan, take care of geet,

Geet:- dadi ma, aapne mdcn liya,

Dadi ma:-yes beta, pari is taking care of it.

Maan:- but y pari?

Geet:-oh, that's fine, then tell maan by her eyes to stop .

Maan looks not at her and said ok dadi ma.

After dadi ma leaving the room, maan just close the door and said u r happy with pari.

Geet take's maan arms and said I'm hungry now ,

Maan's attention instantly divert towards her and he smiles lovingly and kissed her cheeks and said lo, then fed her .

Maan said so u know how to divert my mind

Geet smiles and kissed his lips and said yes, I know it very well.

Then maan pinch her nose said wait one sec u blamed my intentions today.

Geet looks confused and asked matlab

Maan take her in his laps and said dadi ma ko kaha tumne mein dadi ma ke dar se tumhara khyaal rakhta tha, no care for u ha.

Geet giggles and said hmmm.

Maan:-oh really.

Geet rub his nose by hers and said hmmmmm.

Maan :- accha and then tickles her and geet laughs after some time both lay on the bed and maan kissed geet forehead , cheeks and said thanks for coming in my life thanks God to send this cute angel in my life. Don't leave me.

Geet pull him towards her and said never ,I'll never leave u for any life time. maan give her butter fly kisses in her face and she giggles .

Here, pari is passing by and heard it, she feels happy today cause now she want to see them happy , cause she realized it's just infatuation towards maan nothing more and maaneet loved each other .

 

At night maan takes food in their room and feed geet but geet now giving him irritation look and finally said  maan

Maan look at her and said ha jaan and still feeding her.

Geet hold his hand and said I'm fine maan now ,in fact  much better but u behaved like I'm ill.

Maan give her angry glare and said no , u r not fit, look ur health, u r looking too pale .look at ur face, it's looking pale and tired and u told me that u r fine, no .

Geet;-I'm Dcotor maan.

Maan:- for others and for u ,I'm ur doctor,

Geet rolled her eyes and said who give u the degree, After heard it maan chuckled and said my darling wife , may be u know her.

Geet:- oh really and pls give me ur wife's no, I should check her now.

Maaneet look at each and the burst out in loud laugh.

After some time maan said geet,

Geet look at him then said pls maan,I'm fine now, u r just pampering now me too much.

Maan :-I have full rights to pamper u jaan,

Geet shook her head then said hmmm

At night geet is reading some book when maan kissed her belly continuously and said I loved this place to much.

Geet shuddered and moaned and said what ..r ..u..do..in..ma ..aa…n.

Maan look at her then rubbed his nose in her belly button and said to love u.

Maan come close to her and said kya hua jaan.

Geet closed her eyes and breaths heavily.

Maan rubbed his nose in her ear and bit her ear lobe lightly   and said bolo na geet.

Geet just turns and hugged him tightly.

Maan smiles at her gestured, and said kya hua?are mein toh aapne honewale beti ke ghar ko pyaar kar raha tha…

Geet look at him and said matlab…

Maan :- matlab when u'll conceive my child she will stay in ur womb na so

Geet shied and hide her face in his chest then said but how do u know he or she ?

Maan:- well who wil be the father me and maan Singh khurana know everything and give her a smirk.

Geet:- hmm but don't u think I'll be the mother so no she only  he.

Maan:-no, she ,she…meine kaha na.

Geet turns and said good night.

Maan hold her shoulder and  pull her towards him and kissed her lips so gently and said ok if he then next time we will try for she or if she then we will try for he. Then both of our word will be keep.

Geet smiles and said ok.

Maan:-ok , let me think some name of our child.

Maan take a note book and write down some name for their child

For Girl:-

 

1.Mahi

2.Mahek

3.Muskan

4.Misti

5.Maaneet(for both boys and girls)

6. mannat

7. meher

 

Boys:-

boys-abir,mahesh,jay,chamdan,udit,rahul,aditya,kishen,karan,arjun, sambhav, 

 

geet looks and said itne saree names kya hoga. Hum toh 2 bacche ke plan kar rehe the.toh itna naam then she saw maan's naughty looks and bit her tongue and said oh mein .

Maan just said hmmm nice idea, so I have to think about it , well no thinking now u r right, no two child we will use this all names for our all child so total kitna hua

Girls 7 aur boys 11 are iye toh qual nehi hain hume 4 aur girls chaiye .

Geet is all red and embarrassed and said dhat and hided her face in  pillow when maan said geet, dekho na mere taraf.

Geet:- nehi, tum bahut badmash aur be shram ho agye ho aur mere khyal nehi akrte ho, itne saare bacche , mere kya haal hoga.

Maan take her in his arms and said tumhara do complain ki ans hain yes I'm besharam and badhmash with u but don't u ever think I'll not think about u and will give u any pain , are u crazy darling ke itne saare bacche ke liye sochunga , mein pagal hoon tumhara pyaar mein but itna bhi nehi.

Geet:- toh tum mere majak uda rehe the.

Man smirks and said well yes.

Geet :- mujhe neh baad karma tumse and pouted her lips but soon her lips captured by maan for little moments and then maan said this right only for me that I can tease u , han na.

Geet smiles and said yes only u have this right .

Both hugged each other and dose off to peaceful sleep and not aware of their future which will take some exam of them and their love.

Next day morning maan got up early and got a call from delhi and have to leave for some urgent work.

 

Precap:- geet missing maan and a big twist

 Name for boys and girls of maaneet child by roopali, hinal and jyoti

note :- no geet is not pregnant only they planning abt their child.


 



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 11 March 2011 at 4:29am

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waiting for u r update its 3 am at my place lol!! don't have school tommarrow nothing else to do beside sleeping tommarrow update soon befor i goto sleep i am such crazy maanet fan they had poisoned my mind with there nok jok, and romantic scenes well i wanted to be a victom of there poison and now i don't know how can i get the poison out so i started reading ff of maaneet but there more poisoness but still i love that poison it makes me feel aliveLOLLOLits super natural extraterriesterial...... i swear thats how i feel and u r ffs r amazing thanx

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