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FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan pt25 pg 144 dt 06.06 (Page 138)

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
wonderful ending Rakhi
Maaneet love was beautiful
Their romance was superb.
The way Maan called and fondled priya's baby was so cute.
Maaneet going to be parents yay
The whole update was filled with love Rakhi
It was awesome.
I am feeling so much better after reading it
Thank you Rakhi Hug

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sukklover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged


 4 comment sooo late...Ouch...
 ur update was  
, , ..WinkBig smile..
u done a
...Thumbs Up
 i really  ...,...
 ..Big smileEmbarrassed.
 4 PM me...
lots of  4 u.Hug..

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Janakivallav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged

Geet shouts maan
Maan who is doing some work said hmmm jaan.
Geet:- maan , I called u now, come here.
Maan murmur, mood swing madam ka aur meri jaan ja raha hain.
Geet:- see, see, u r not the same maan, here m taking all pain and u  r murmuring .hmmm. u don't love, u don't love me and start crying and maan almost runs and hugged her back and said shhh, shh, dekho mein toh humara beti ke liye kuch bana rehi thi.
Geet sob, and twist her lips and said kya
Maan :- iye
Geet see   a beautiful scarp book,
like when  baby said first word, when baby walk first when baby stand on his or her legs , when baby's first smile etc etc.
 geet has teasrs and said oh maan i love u i love u , , tum kitne acche ho aur mein hoon ki tumhe bahut pareshan karti hoon.
Maan:-nehi jaan, and jo bhi karte ho u have right na, and then bend on her stomach and said my darling, my princess,come soon and say ur mama, i love ur mama more than anything so if she said anything then don't feel sad cause she has the rights to say me.

Geet looking some books then said maan, come soon na i miss u.

Maan comeback from work and found their room is full decorated with rose,candles and a note , come to the next room, I have a surprise for u.

Maan smiles at geet and said geetu u r real child, ek dam choti si pari ho abhi bhi.

Geet turns and twist her lips and said makaj mat urao  aur mere baat dhayn se duno.

Dadi ma makes some pickle for geet and priya helps her,

Priya see some love bites in her shoulder and teases geet and she tunrs crimson red.
Maaneet in  mini HM and both have funs.
Maan remember about something and feel sad when geet make him feel good.
Rest of the family join them. every one enjoys there.
Abhishek  sleep with maaneet .
maan said geetu, thnks darling for come in life and make my life brighter.
Geet shyly smiles and huggs him tight.
maan nuzzle his nose on her neck, shoulder and kiss her collar bone and said love u jaan.
Pari's new boy friend.



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Janakivallav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged

Hi all

How r u all

I know I'm not updating regularly, sorry dearies.

But really busy with work and family.

I'm going to my home town for few days after long time.

Will not update till 2nd june .

So ,I'm posting a long promo.

Hope u all like it.

Pls pressed the liked button.

Pls read and do comments.




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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
again a awesome promo 
will wait to see who's pari's new bf :P 

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20tullip2000 Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Rakhi ji promo is really nice will be eagerly waiting for more

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
awesome diii
cnt wait for it 2 start
update soonnn

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zaara2212 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
loved the promBig smile

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