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FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan pt25 pg 144 dt 06.06 (Page 131)

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Thank You

for lovelyyy season 1 
of pyaar , dosti aur dooriyaaa

its simplyy

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loved d maaneet moment as usual

waitinggg for season 2 

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is alsooo 

sorryy for d late comment
ws in Goa for famly holiday 

cont sooon dear 

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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 06 June 2011 at 4:12am
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The Journey Called Pyar, Dosti Aur Duriyan


I was in love with you,

Even before I knew what it meant.

All I cared for was you,

Even though away you went!!


You were always there to help me out,

Looking back I want to shout,

It wasn't just friendship, it wasn't just care…

I was your love for me, eternally there!


I wanted to be in your arms,

While my heart was caged in your dreams,

The protection was always there,

It was just those arms that refused to be there!


You loved me all along, but never believed…

How else will your concern be associated with me…..

While you pushed me away, fate brought us closer,

To protect me from harm, you took me within your protective closure…


The love was there, but you still denied,

A thriving friendship was the disguise!

I never pushed you, coz for me you were always right,

But, oh, how do I say, I wanted to hug you tight!!


Time slipped away, my love only grew,

Through your various gestures, even yours shone through….

You were always my life; you proved I am yours,

Knowing your love now, It was YOU I was waiting for!


The denial mode persisted, I was going crazy,

Denying on one hand, caring on the other, you were driving me into a tizzy

How long will I run, I used to think,

Your love was now on the brink…


And then the dam broke…

In realization you soaked….

The way you put it made me choke….

Your confession gave me hope!!


Reveling in your love, life is now perfect!

With you by my side, no one can hurt it…

All my dreams are reality now,

Our DOSTI is now PYAAR, no DURIYAN now! J

 Poem Credit goes to swati (princess163)




Pyaar Dosti Aur Durriyan

Sesaon 2:-


Next Part:-

After 2months,geet is now 3months pregnant :-

 At KM , Maaneet's room:-

Geet is laying in the bed and said maan,

Maan:- bolo, geet.

Geet:-I'm missing every one.

Maan:- hmmm.

Geet:- what hmmm maan, I said ,I'm missing every one, u know na they already went to HP and after this all u took me here instead of HP.

Maan:- geet, kabhi kabhi tumhe nehi lagta tumhe aapne pati ke  baarein mein kam sochte ho aur.

Geet waked him in his arms and maan said ouch when geet said  I'm with u all time but this only 10days for holiday I want to stay with them, but , u. u know maan after we r moving from here, how much I missed them.

Maan looks at him ok then let's go to HP.

Geet turns and said sacchi and kissed his cheek.

Maan smiles and take her in his arms and said how r my babies?

Geet:-very naughty like u but now sleeping peacefully.

Maan smiles and said how r u feeling now, any tiredness.

Geet:-no, maan.

Maan kissed her forehead and eyes then her cheek and said come have some sleep now.

Geet:- no.

Maan:- geet,  u r

Geet put her palm on his lips and said I want to ask one thing.

Maan  take her hands on his hands and said kab se mere geetu ko mujhse punishment lene  par raha hain.

Geet smiles and hugged him by his waist and said r u not up sate?

Maan look at geet and then said up sate about what?

Geet:-I'm spoiling ur holiday plan and want to spend with every one.

Maan laughed at her and kissed her nose,  lips and said no jaan. M  not. I'm very happy  and have u in my life, yes u will spend little time with me but u r with me all times and I'll compensate it.                    For me ur happiness is first. samajhe my sweetu.

Geet giggled then said hmmm and both dose off too sleep


Next day morning , geet wake up and find maan is talking with some one.

 She smiles and knows maan might be again busy with his work.

Her workaholic husband  , but she is proud of his loved for his duty. maan turns and see his wify looking at him lovingly when maan come sit besides her and said kya hua jaan, itna jaldi uth gaye.

Geet hugged him and said baas aise hi.

Maan smiles at her and kissed her foreheads.

At 1.30 pm. KM:-

Geet shouts maan
Maan who is doing some work said hmmm jaan.
Geet:- maan , I called u now, come here.
Maan murmur, mood swing madam ka aur meri jaan ja raha hain.
Geet:- see, see, u r not the same maan, here m taking all pain and u  r murmuring .hmmm. u don't love, u don't love me and start crying and maan almost runs and hugged her back and said shhh, shh, dekho mein toh humara beti ke liye kuch bana rehi thi.
Geet sob, and twist her lips and said kya
Maan :- iye
Geet see   a beautiful scarp book,
like when  baby said first word, when baby walk first when baby stand on his or her legs , when baby's first smile etc etc.
 geet has teasrs and said oh maan i love u i love u , , tum kitne acche ho aur mein hoon ki tumhe bahut pareshan karti hoon.
Maan:-nehi jaan, and jo bhi karte ho u have right na, and then bend on her stomach and said my darling, my princess, come soon and say ur mama, i love ur mama more than anything so if she said anything then don't feel sad cause u have  the rights to say me anything.

Geet smiles and hugged him and kissed his chest and said maan.

Maan:-hmm jaan.

Geet:- u told me that I can say anything to u ,I have the right and then look at maan and smiles mischievously and maan seen some naughty glints in her eyes.

Maan bend down and said kya hua , kya chal raha hain tumhara mind mein my naughty geetu.

Geet giggled and said come here.

Maan bend down more when geet hold his neck and then slowly touch his lips and gently peck there and then slowly nibble his lower lips.Maan surprised then slowly respond her .after some moments geet freed him and said maan, thanks for giving me world best gift. I'm out of word maan.

Maan pull her to his lap and said shhh, wrong u r giving me best gift, in fact u already come in my life and brighten my life with ur smile, talk, presence, touch , loved, care, respect, everything. Thanks geet. U makes feel good, u make me understand anger is not only solution for everything. U makes me understand don't look away from everything and try to fight, don't think destiny always be cruel , if it's takes exam some times. Yes this  destiny  gave me u r my angel , my sweet heart my wify, my friend, my guide , my lover, my soul, my heart beat, my life.

Geet has tears in her eyes kissed his heart and said maan, it's u who gave me the strength, power, love, respect, care everything.

 U made my life with love with happiness, everything u gave me, u fulfill my every dream.

Maaneet both look at each other then laughs gently and said we can't live with out each other, we will be stay together.

Then maan slowly caressed her stomach and then kissed it and said yes, now my two princesses will come and geet shyly said then my son also come.

Maan look at geet and said jaan, no , if again any one will come then the baby or babies will be girl,

Geet :- maan , u never heard my plea, always doing ur man maani.

Maan looking at her and said jaan when I'm doing my man maani.

Geet twisted her lips and said I want to sleep some time.

Maan :-ok jaan,


After geet dost off to sleep , maan just lovingly smiles at geet and said my geetu.

Next day 1.30p.m.KM:-

Geet looking some books then said maan, come soon na i miss u.

Dadi ma called her and informed her that they will come back tonight.

Geet is very much delighted to hear it and want to give some surprise to maan here.


At6.30 p.m. K.M:-

Maan comeback from Head Office and found their room is full decorated with rose, candles and a note , come to the next room, I have a surprise for u.

Maan enters the next room and see geet is sitting with toys and doll of their childhood , cards of their childhood.

Geet :- maan, aagaye tum.

Maan sit besides her and said yes jaan, and what is this all?

Geet:-our childhood toys , dolls.

Maan:-oh toh dikh raha hain mujhe par achanak tum iye sab.

Geet slapped his arms and said maan, hum iye sab toys and dolls ke sath kya karte the bachpan mein.

Maan:- kya karte the geet, khelte the.toh then look at geet who smiles innocently and said toh ohi karenge phir se.

Maan look at geet and murmur unbelievable .

Geet:- kuch kaha tumne .

Maan :-no.

Geet hold his hand and said I want to revive those memories again and our child also know how we spend our  childhood together.

Maan gently smiles at geet's innocent  and said geetu u r real child, ek dam choti si pari ho abhi bhi.

Geet giggles when maan said waise I have full idea I'll handle three children .

Geet:- matlab.

Maan caressed her stomach and kissed there and said my two princess and my geetu.
Geet turns and twist her lips and said majak  mat urao  aur mere baat dhayn se duno.

Maan:- kahiye my darling wify

Geet:- I write routine for me and u 'll check it and when ever u get little free time play with me, but don't stress ur self. As u also need relax time.

Maan hugged her and said my relax time is spending time with u.

Geet hugged back hmmm.


9.30p.m. KM:-

Dadi ma and every one return from HP.

Every one happy to see maaneet there after long time.

But as every one tired due to journey, they take rest to their respective room soon.


Next day morning, at KM:-

Geet moaned maan, aahh, choro na.

Maan who kissing geet's face, neck, shoulder, collar bone, throat continuously.

Maan gently bite her shoulder and said no, way and then licked the place.

Geet :-aahhh maan, tum bahut badmash ho rehe ho, aab choro , subha ho gayi hain.

Maan bend to her stomach and said dekha beti, u mom scolding me without any reason, baas aab toh no chorna ur mom, till I'll give her punishment.

Geet giggle then twist her lips and said hmmm father –daughter want to make team against me,

Maan look at her then smiles and said well yes and then continue his teasing torture and love further more times.

At 8.30 a.m.Geet get up from the bed and cover herself with a spread and said badmash then she headed towards the washroom when maan said I'm coming jaan.

Before geet could say anything maan just enter there with geet and said well I'll just help u, nothing more,

Geet shyly smiles and hugged him.

Maan help geet to take bath then after both of them come out maan help her to dress up and said he plan to tell them about their plan.

Geet excited and said that's grt.

Maan slowly carrassing her stomach and said how many days left ?

Geet:- maan, don't behave like little child u asked me everyday, still we have 6month.

Maan :-oh God 6months more to see my princess.

 Come soon princess. Ur daddy miss u.jaldi se aapne daddy ke pass aajao.


Later at breakfast time , maan told every one that he is planning to take them all to GOA for outing.

But yash and adi refused and said they (Maaneet) should go there alone.

But maaneet said they will  become bore ,  and now geet is pregnant , she needs some one also with her. Then slowly waise bhi iska mood kab badal jaye  mein ekele kaise handle kar sakta hoon.

Geet heard it and gets angry and said koi jarurat nehi hain .

Then geet turn to dadi ma and said pata hain aapko mujhe maan kitna pareshan karta hain, mein toh sirf unhe kabhi kabhi thora time spend karo aur mere maan pasand khaana iya unka maan pasand khan eke liye bolti hoon, baas.

Dadi  patted her head lovingly and said ignore him , m here na , spend time with me and us. Hmm, chalo hum sab GOA chalte  hain and ignore him.

Geet:-hmm then said na, dadi ma waise bhi jada pareshan nehi kya phir meine agar na rahu unke sath toh oh bhi toh aapna khyala nehi rakhte.

Yash and vicky burst out a loud laugh and said bhabi , aap bhi na, sach mein bara unique jodi hain hain aapki aur bro ki.,

Geet look at them angrily and complained to maan, dekha kaise majak ura rehe hain mere.

Maan give them angry glare and said geet, shhh, don't cry and wipes her tears and said see ur fav aloo ka paratha, and see abhi look at u and think his choti ma also small kid like him and crying .

Geet:no I'm now and then take abhi in her arms and said aap sab mujhe kyuon dekh rehe ho khana khao and koi bhi mere maan ko kuch nehi bolega.

Dadi and Priya smiles at her then every one busy to eat food.  

Later ,in kitchen in KM:-

Dadi ma makes some pickle for geet and priya helps her,

Priya:-geet is really craving for it.

Dadi ma smiles and said yes and I heard maan try to make .

Priya laughs poor bhaiya  but I loved this gesture. Geet is world for bhaiya.

Dadi smiles and said yes geet is like light for him.

Geet come and said who is light?

Priya smiles and said  bhabi jee, hum aapke aur bhaiya ke pyaar ke baarein mein baat kar rehe hain.

Geet blushed then see pickle and said mere liye dadi.

Dadi side hugged her and said yes my bahu rani.

Geet hugged her and said thnku .

After dadi ma left from there.

Geet start her chatting with Priya.

Priya see some love bites in her shoulder and teases geet and she turns crimson red.


After 2days they all r ready to go in GOA but as per dadi ma  first maaneet will go there after 1 or 2 days they will join them there.




Maaneet in  mini HM and both have funs.
Maan remember about something and feel sad when geet make him feel good.
Rest of the family join them. every one enjoys there.
Abhishek  sleep with maaneet .
maan said geetu, thnks darling for come in life and make my life brighter.
Geet shyly smiles and huggs him tight.
maan nuzzle his nose on her neck, shoulder and kiss her collar bone and said love u jaan.
Pari's new boy friend.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 06 June 2011 at 4:34am

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hi all
how r u all?

sorry for late updating as I just back from my home town couple of days ago.

sorry for any mis take.
 updated next part. pls read it and comment it
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Sorry for same some parts of precap same as it's very long update.and that promo is for two uds
 in next ud will add rest precap

pls comments friends , ur comments inspired me lots.


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