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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 3:35am | IP Logged

wwelll im not exper tin writing os....as i write ss n ff's...but i'll try to write a gud one...plzzz do comment.....so here it starts...

a girl wearing a white anarkali..with open hair..n specs...is sitting inside the waiting room of the airport...waiting for the announcement of her flight...she wasnt looking nervous...or tensed. full confident...n strong...her eyes behind the specs...were not no more teary... the girl took her phone..n dialed a number.....another girl picked the call.
girl2=hello...
girl1=di....
girl2=tu???? itne salooke baad??? kaisi ha tu??? gunjan tu......
yes....the girl wearing the white anarkali is none other than gunjan bhushan..... or mrs gunjan samrat shergill...n the girl on the phone was her elder sister nupur bhushan sharma
nupur=gunjan tu kaisi ha???? itne salooke baad aj tune phone kia??? sab kaisa ha??? aur woh kaisi ha???
gunjan=di....ma wapas arahihu..
nupur=kya?? tu sach bol rahiha???
gunjan=ma aj raat mumbai me land karungi..aur mere sath woh bhi arahiha.....
nupur=gunjan..tu..
gunjan=di..meri flight ka time horaha ha..bye
nupur=hello.....
nupur after disconnecting the line called mayank...who was playing with his twins sons.... nupur came to him
nupur=mayank..
mayank=kya hua nupur??? tum cheek kyu rahiho???
nupur=mayank..woh wapas arahiha..
mayank=kaun????
nupur=gunjan.....
mayank=sach?? tum sach bolrahiho??? 5 saal baad woh wapas arahiha..jabki usne mumbaise..yahaki har yaad se humesha keliye chorke chali gayi thi..
nupur=ha mayank ma sach kehrahihu..woh..gunjan ne mujhe abhi phone kia tha. woh aj raat ko mumbai arahiha..aur woh bhi uske sath arahiha...
mayank=sach??
nupur=mayank ma bohot khush hu..meri behen...5 saal baad.....mujhse milegi...main usse gale lagaungiii.....usse baate karungi...apni bhanji ke sath khelungi.....oh godd!!!!
mayank could see how happy nupur was...but then nupurs smile disappeared..n she became sad...mayank kept his hand on her shoulder..nupur looked at him
mayank=kya hua nupur??? tum chup kyu hogayi??? tumhe to khush hona chahiye
nupur=ma khush hu mayank..bohot khush....par...aj bhi mane jab usse baat ki..to uski awaz me woh pehle wali baat nahi thi...jo ki 5 saal pehle...thi..ya ye kahu ke 5 saal pehle...usdin ke baad meri behen...uski har cheeze badal gayi......
mayank=nupur...
nupur=kahi na kahi..gunjan ki ye halat meri wajase hui ha....meri behen ke sare dukh aur gham ki waja...kahi na kahi mujhse juri ha..mane jane anjane apni behenki zindagi barbaad kardi...par usne apne apko itna pathar dil bana dia....ke....kuch kehti bhi na..na pehle jaise hasti ha.. na roti ha..na baat karti ha...bass uski yaadoko leke..
mayank=ab uski yaade gunjan ki zindagi baan  gayi ha.aur neha uski jeene ki waja... warna gunjan ne koi kasar nahi chodi thi apne apko khatam karneki....4 baar suicide karna...koi kaam bat nahi ha...doctor ne usse neha ka wasta nahi diya hota..to gunjan aj shayed humare beech hi na hoti..
nupur=janti hu......woh..din ma nahi bhul sakti..jab meri hasti khelti phool jaise behen ki zindagise har khushi chali gayii.....
mayank=nupur..tum ese kamzoor parogi to gunjan ko kaun sambhalega??????tumhe apne apko mazbut banana hoga..
nupur=tum sahi kehraheho......gunjan ko sambhalnekeliye mujhe apne apko sambhalna parega....
at night..mumbain airport....gunjan comes with her luggage....she sees nupur n mayank were there to receive her....she didnt smile to them...just said a formal hi..
gunjan=hi di...hi mayank..sorry jiju.....
mayur looked at eachother n slightly smiled...nupur forwaded to hug her..but gunjan stepped back..
gunjan=chale??????
mayank=gunjan woh kaha ha?????
gunjan puled out someone from behind her...a sweet little girl who was holding her dupatta.. seeing her gunjan smiled..n mayur smiled seeing gunjan smiling......gunjan bent down n picked her in her arms.....the girl kissed gunjan on her cheeks..
girl=mummy..ye log kaun ha???
gunjan=neha...beta..ye tumhari masi ha..aur ye tumhari masi ke pati..uncle...
the girl was neha...
neha=hello..masii.....
nupur smiled seeing neha..n calling her masi....nupur forwaded her hand to take neha in her arms..when gunjan turned around to take her luggage...
mayank=gunjan..
gunjan=chale??? neha ko bhook lagi ha..mujhe ghar jake khana banana ha....
nupur=gunjan...tujhe bananeki koi zarurat nahi ha...mane bana lia ha..
gunjan=ma mere ghar rehne jarahihu..apne ghar..apne pati ke ghar...
nupur=par gunjan..
gunjan=itne salome...mane khudko itna independent bana lia ha di...ke ma khudko aur neha ko sambhal pau.....plzz...mujhe force mat kijiye..aur wasebhi ma yaha sirf 3 din keliye ayi hu... kaal jo din ha.....ma woh yaha pura karna chahti hu......
nupur=par..
mayank=nupur..rehne do...gunjan ko jaise sahi lage wasehi usse karne doo...
gunjan took her luggage n went out of the airport......mayur also followed her..all the way gunjan didnt say anything to mayur...but neha talked to mayank n nupur...nupur was enjoying playing with her..she pulled nupurs hair..played with her mangalsutra....n kissed on her nose.. then they reached gunjans home...she took neha from nupur n without saying bye to them.. she went inside her home...
nupur=kitne badal gayi ha mere behen....kya thi..aur kya ho gayii...
mayank=itne salome..woh badal gayi ha nupur..apne ap jeena usne sikh liya ha.. aur humhe bhi..usse apne tarah jeene dena chahiyee....
gunjan enters the house.....they house was dark.......gunjan switched the lights on.... the house seemed to be very old the...furnitures were covered with sheets...there was everywhere dust... gunjan kept her luggaage....n took some steps forward..she touched the furnitures... n moved the clothes.... then gunjan went to the hall...n stood infront of a photo..... in a moment the eyes...which never cried since 5 years...was filled with tears....tears were not stopping flowing from her eyes.... her dupattta..dress all was soon wet.....neha came n huggged gunjan from her waist...gunjan looked down to neha..n sat on her knees..
neha=mumma..ye kiski tasveer ha??? ap ye kiske sath ho?????
gunjan looked at the photo..then at neha...
gunjan=ye tumhare papa ha neha....tumhara papa...
n gunjan burst into tears.....n hugged neha tightlyy..........yes the picture was of none other than samrat's picture..with gunjan hugging....tears were not stoppingg....gunjan was crying badlyy... n screaming SAMRATTTT!!!!...........
after a while...gunjan was sitting on the bed..n neha was sleeping in her lap....gunjan was holding a picture of samrats....n was caressing it...tears were falling on the screen...n gunjan was wiping itt........she could see the flashbacks..when she lost him....lost her life...when she became lifeless...heartless....
flashback
5 years backk.......when nupur came back into there lives...with dhruv......the truth of nuput was known only to samrat......n according to samrats plan....mayur were reunited at mayanks house....then everyone knew that she was their nupur.....
gunjan=di....mujhe pata tha..mera dil kehta tha..ke tum hi meri di ho.......
nupur=gunjan....mujhe maaf kardena...3 saal tak..ma tum sabse door rahi.. kyuki..dhruv mujhe dhamki deta tha..ke agar mane tum sabke pass wapas agayi.... to woh tum sabko mar dalega.....aur usne mayank ko marneki koshish bhi ki thi...woh accident... jab ma aur mayank us jarahethe.... woh accident dhruv ne karwaya tha.....
gunjan n mayank were shocked.....samrat smiled n closed his eyes.....with a relief of guilt that he didnt kill nupur..or separated her from mayank n gunjan
mayank=dhruv ne????
nupur=ha mayank...usse jab pata chala ke meri shadi tumse hui ha...tab usne tumhe khatam karna chaha...aur usne samrat ki gari ki brakes fail kardi... aur woh accident hua..jiski wajase ma tum sabse bichar gayii.par shayed kismaat ko humara milna manzur tha..isiliye usne mujhe tumse mila diyaa.....auur phirse tum logoki zindagime ma wapas agayiii..... lekin ma ghabraha rahithi..ke kahi..dhruv tum logoko kuch karna de...usne tumpe aur gunjan pe hamla kia tha..yaad ha mayank..tumharee gharpe shortcircut...aur gunjan pe woh shelve girna.. sab dhruv ne kia tha...par tabhi samrat ne meri aur dhruv ki sari baate sunli..aur usne kaha ke woh mujhe tum sabki life me phirse layega...aur dhruv ko nahi chodegaa.....
gunjan looked at samrat...
mayank=samrat....tujhe pata tha..to tune kaha kyu nahi??
nupur=mane mana kia tha......
samrat=guys...insab batose ye baat zyada maine rakhta ha...ke nupur aj wapas agayi ha..humare beech..humari nupur humare pass wapas agayi...mujhe meri dost milgayi.. chashmish ko uski behen..aur mayank ko uski zindagii......
nupur=par samrat dhruvv....woh hummese kisiko nahi chodegaa....
just then dhruv shooted on them...but the bullet went beside them...sajan n mayur went to different sides...gunjan was with samrat n mayank with nupur....
nupur=dhruv dekhoo...tumne wada kia tha ke tum kisiko kuch nahi karogee..
dhruv=tumne apna wada todh diya..to tum mujhse ye expect karti ho..ke ma tumhe chod dunga.. koi nahi bachegaa...sabke sab marogee.......par sabse pehle......
he pointed the gun to mayank n nupur.......
gunjan=di........jjijuu....
mayank=dhruv dekho..gun niche phek dooo......
nupur was trying to cover mayank..but mayank wasnt letting her....n dhruv's direction was on bothh.......gunjan was feeling scared..seeing her di's life in danger once again.....dhruv almost clicked the bullet....n the bullet was shot.....mayur closed there eyes....trying to save eachother....but when they heard the sound of shot...they opened there eyes..n found them safe.....n samrat standing infront of them...it was samrat who was shot by dhruv....
nupur=samrattt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mayank=sam!!!!!!!!!!!!
gunjan was almost fainted...but controllled herself......samrat was fainting...mayur holded him..n he fell down...dhruv again pointed the gun..but this time mayank punched him hard... n by the time police came n took him...gunjan n nupur who was trying to wake samrat.....gunjan was already shattered..seeing her life in danger....
nupur=samratttt!! samrat uthooo.......
mayank came n they took him to the hospitall........samrat was taken inside the operation theatre........
mayank was tensed...nupur was praying to the god..n gunjan was sitting like a dead body...nupur came n sat beside her..
nupur=gunjan..samrat ko kuch nahi hoga..woh bilkul theek hojayega...dekhna tu... jo humesha hum sabka bhala chahta tha.....humare lie sochta aur jeeta ha....tere liye jeeta ha.. usse kuch nahi hosakta..
gunjan=yehi to problem ha di..woih humesha mere lie jeeta ha..mujhpar jaan chirakta ha.. mere liee..duniyase larta ha..sabkuch kurbaan kardeta ha..aur aj apni zindagi aur maut se lar bhi raha ha mere liee..aur mane kya kia??? usse us baat ki saaza di..jo usne ki nahii.,... usse tumhari maut ka zimmedar thehraya..khudse alag kardiyaa...usse us waqt chod diyaa. jab usse meri sabse zyada zarurat thii.......mere lie uska pyaar kaam nahi hua..aur nahi uske lie mera pyaar..usse kabhi nahi bhula payyii..humesha usne mujhe dubara apnana chaha.. mujhe kitne mauke diyaa..samjhaya..par mahi bewakuf thii..jo apne pyaar ko khudse juda karrahithi.. shayed aj isiki saza derahe bhagwan mujhe.e...
nupur=nahi gunjan...woh theek hojayegaa...tu dekhna..samrat humhe chodke kabhi nahi jayegaa.... kabhi nahii..
then the doctor came out....mayur n gunjan went to him..
mayank=doctor...samrat kaisa ha??
nupur=woh theek to hana??????
doctor=humne bullet nikal diya ha..
they smiled hearing this....but..
doctor=lekin..im sorry..par samrat ke pass ab zyada waqt nahi ha..zayadese zyada.... kuch minutee.......goli sidha dilpe laga ha..phirbi yahatak humne unhe bachaya ha..par agle kuch minute woh apni akhri saase lenge..ap log unse akhri bar millijiyee...
all of there faces turned into black.......gunjan started to backoff...all the memories of her spendded with samrat..first meeting...he saves her from the pool...there fights in the college.. stair scene.....my dil goes umm...talent parade.....new year partyy.... rj hunt.. radio show..first dance khuda jane....gunjan falling for samrat.....rose day.. there breakup... samrat supporting her infront of sheena....there confession...first date.....argue because of suhaani.... there first kiss n promises.....samrat kisses her infront of the colege..2nd date... gunjans heart broken.. n shot scene......her paralized....samrat supporting her..n helping her to walk..... her shona dance.... neil arguement...2nd confession..n the most beautiful night when they became together forever....there engagement...n then the accident....... after 3 years they meet again.. moments in the creation room..he tries to applogise...but gunjan doesnt listen.. n then he supports her in ashwinis problem..all the moments were running in her mind...... n also that the doctor said....gunjan was backing off..when her feet hit the chair..n she fell down.......
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samrat was lying on the bed...mayur comes....they didnt had anything to say.....both were crying...nupur couldnt control her tears..but mayank was trying to control them.. samrat slowly opens his eyes..n seeing mayur..he smiles
samrat=dude...tum kabse yu rone lage??
nupur=shut up samrat...tumne ye kyu kia?? ye sab..
samrat=itne salotak..meri wajase tum dono alag rahe..phirse ye galti nahi kar sakta tha..
mayank=samrat..tumne kuch nahi kia tha....
samrat=chashmish ki nazar me ma gunegar hu....ma bhi yehi maan chuka hu ke mane hi tum donoko juda kia ha..aur dekho..aj mujhe uska saza mila ha..
nupur=samrat..plzz mat jaoo......mujjhe meri behen aur mera pati milgaya..par mera dost?? woh dost jisne humesha mera sath dia..har dukh aur sukh me...aur ab jab mujhe itne saloke baad khushiyan mili ha...woh mujhe chodke jarahah ha?????
mayan=dude.......tum nahi jasakte.....
samrat=mere jeene aur marneka faisla mere hathme nahi ha..woh faisla  already hochuka ha.. aur shayed ab mera waqt abhi chuka ha...
he started to cough...mayur holded him....mayank gave him water.....samrat saw gunjan standing behind them...mayur seeing gunjan they went out....gunjan came n sat beside him.. samrat was looking at her....n smiling..gunjan who was crying...tears not stopping from her eyes...
samrat=tumhari akhopar asoo acche nahi lagte gunjan..
gunjan=abhibi mere bareme soch raheho?? kamsekaam abto mujhe daato....mujhpe chillaoo. mujhe maroo...samrat tum esa kaisa karsakte ho?? mane tumhare sath kya kuch nahi kia.. tumhe chod diyaa....tumhe hurt kia..jabki in sabke bawajud bhi tumne humesha mere lie sochaa.. mujhse bepanha pyaar kiaa....meri khushi keliye jeete rahe..mere lie intezaar karte rahe..aur mane kya kia?? tumhe khudse alag kardiyaa....tumse chashmish kehneka haqe chinliyaa....aur aj meri wajase..tum...tum...
n she bursts into tears.....samrat forwads his hand to touch her..gunjan bents down... he wipes her tears...
samrat=chashmish..mane tumse ek baat kaha tha...."tum meri zindagiko jeene layak banati ho...tum meri beete hue kalka sapna..ajki haqeeqat aur anewale kalki umeed ho chashmish.." aur humesha rahoge...mere marneke baad bhi......ma tumse hi pyaar kartta rahunga..mere marneke baad....meri yehi dua rahegi...ke tum khush raho..jaha raho..jiske sath raho..bass tum khush raho..tumhare khush rehnemehi meri atmako shanti milegiii......
gunjan holded his hand
gunjan=itna pyaar tum kaise mujhse karsakte ho samrat.....
samrat=mera jeena tumhare beena kuch nahi ha.....chashmish..humesha khush rehna..aur mane tumhe jitne bhi dukh diye ha...uske lie mujhe maafff...
gunjan covered his mouth with her hand
gunjan=mujhe aur guilty feel math karwao...plzz.......samart.....meri ek iccha puri karoge???
samrat=kahoo....
gunjan took out something from her hand......n kept it infront of his hand...
samrat=ye.?????
gunjan=plzz...samrat mane tumhe jitni takleef di ha..agar tum sachme mujhe maaf kar diyaa ha..to plzz...meri mang bhar doo..
samrat=chashmish..apni zindagi barbad mat karoo..ma..abhi...
gunjan=apni zindagi mane ussi din barbad ki thi..jis din mane tumhe khudse juda kia tha..plzz aj akhri waqt me hi sahi..ye galti sudharne doooo..plzz..janese pehle..mujhe apna lo..plzz samart...........
samrat=tumhari life ko barbad nahi karna chahta.par agar tumhari khushi yehi ha....
samrat managed to put his hand on the sindoor.gunjan bent down..n he put the sindoor in her mang...gunjan closed her eyes.......samrat brought her face closer...n kissed on her forehead... gunjan at once hugged him...n started to cry....samrat hugged her backkkk....to console her..but she wasnt stopping..samrat was patting her backk...then slowly samrat closed his eyes.s.........gunjan then felt his grip lossing..she looked up...
gunjan=SAMRATTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flashback ends.....
gunjans eyes weree red..tears were continuosly flowing from her eyes....she saw neha sleeping in her lap..she caressed her hair....n then kissed on her forehead....
g=tum chahe aj mere samne nahi ho..par humesha mere dilme rahoge samratt.... neha humari pyaar ki nishani mujhe kabhi tumhe bhulna nahi degiii......aj bhi ma khudko kosti ho.. ke kyu mane tumhe chod diya tha..aur shayed aj tum mere sath nahi ho...im sorry samrat.par ma itna janti hu..ke apni akhri saas tak tumsehi pyaar karungi.. i love u samrat.... aj mujhe samajh arahaha.... ke tumhe kaisa laga tha..jab mane tumhe choda tha.....tumha kaise mehsus huaa.......aj mujhe wasahi lagraha ha... BIN TERE.......
HOPE U GUYS ENJOYED IT........DO COMMENT....
 

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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 3:39am | IP Logged
OMGGG its really emotionalCry...i was literally teary reading it. very touching OS dear...n u wrote it brilliantly.Clap
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 3:46am | IP Logged
yaar u wre superb..this os ir rily awesum..
do write more os
i was liTERALLY  cCRYINCry bt this was awesumSmile


Edited by mohit_rockstar - 19 December 2010 at 3:59am
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Omg dear awsm os yar.poor gunjan.i almost cry swty.superb.
luv u
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 5:06am | IP Logged
omgggg honey awsome OS ..........really emotional yaar Cry
u wrote it realy well
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 5:15am | IP Logged
U penned it so well that i don't have any words left to say how I felt on reading it!
Hats off girl! Fab work!
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Wowwww a very nice and touching OS CryLoved it Clap
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Posted: 19 December 2010 at 5:28am | IP Logged
dear  first of all what a OS u made me cry with this superb OS very toucy and emotional ,loved it to the core do write more such a OS

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