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FF on Abhi Nikki"It's Only You"Part 21-22(Pg 45) (Page 9)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Well Nammy, I'm reserving this post for my essay...and as I can see my spamming-buddy Sheenu beat me to it this time! Embarrassed
 
There's just one thing I've gotta say with the lil bit I managed to read...
 
it's that I never believed Abhi to be insensitive. From what I've observed, he was always extremely sensitive...in fact, so much so that he didn't need to hear her thoughts or her emotions, he could feel them. Very few people have that ability to understand the unsaid. I don't know but I just can't bring myself to agree with that little thing you've written. Soryy about that. Will go into further explanation and details later.
 
Till then,
 
*EDIT*
 
Yeah so...*rubs hands together*
 
The poor dear...my sweet dukhi Abhi being so dukhi makes me dukhi as well...Ouch okay so ignore it if you didn't understand it LOL
 
Why does he always have to jump to conclusions! Angry She flirts with others, yes...but the only person she kisses is him Embarrassed Ain't that enough for the gadha to understand?! But he's such a sexy gadha...*sigh*
 
And there he goes again...Ouch uff kya hoga iss bande ka iss life mein! *looks heavenwards for an answer but God doesn't oblige*
 
Why is he so hard on her? Truly I can't understand...one moment he's soft and the next he's so cold Shocked but that's his charm...Embarrassed I love him so so sooooooooo much...Big smile
 
Poor Nikster...got another scolding! LOL Why don't I feel the sympathy LOL
 
Nikki's past...hmmm...that's an interesting take. Till today we've always been digging up Abhi's past...it's a nice move, venturing into Nikki's past. Me wants to know Big smile Batao, batao!
 
Why is Adi so surprised? That's all Abhi does throughout any convo na...make eyes and go "hmmm..." ROFL Woh hi toh uska kaam hai. You talk to him for hours on end and all you get are "hmmm", "haan", and "ohh" LOL LOL LOL
 
Aaarghhhh why does that girl cry so muchhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Angry *rolls eyes* She needs to grab Abhi by the collar and give him a serious dose of what he needs...Wink
 
AHA!!! Dr.Moody melts at the very sight of those red eyes! I knew it...he's such a softie inside, na...he's a nut! Embarrassed Well he's a coconut, basically. LOL
 
And he needs to have some nuts...like, eat nuts I mean. Memory toh Ghajini ki tarah ban raha hai! Shocked Badaam khilao koi usse! LOL
 
Again. He hits that sensitive nerve. I wanna punch his beautiful face...but I can't...Cry he's too handsome! Ouch I wanna go and bang Adi's head to the wall...and then bang AN's heads against each other's. They all need a reality check. Hmph.
 
Oh nooooooooooo Shocked No no no girl, I don't care how angry or hurt you are, DONOT throw up on the guy before you...he wears the best shirts available in town and I will grieve for an entire week if you ruin any of them! Ouch
 
 
 

After a while, Abhi releases her wrist from his grip and turns on his back. He presses his thumb and forefinger to the bridge of his nose to hold back the tears stinging his eyes. He struggles hard to keep his emotions under control. He was now damn tired of being on a constant roller coaster of emotions. He closes his eyes and takes deep breaths to gain some strength.

Nikki, head down, was glued to her place.  She unconsciously held her breath while the seconds ticked by. After a long minute, she stole a look at Abhi, half expecting that he would have turned his face towards her. But still his back was facing her and she could sense his tension and apprehension

 
Aaah...there we go with the vulnerable AN...never ceases to move me, that. I just love how raw their emotions are...it exposes their hearts to the deepest, farthest cornners and that's the beauty of it. I love the way you put it, Nammy. Beautiful. Clap Clap Clap
 
And I see it's inspired from the riot scene. Nothing so beautiful has ever been portrayed on the small screen, in my opinion. Thankyou for bringing back the memories. You've done a wonderful job here:
 

He raises his left arm to stop her in her track and turns his face towards her. He was damn angry with himself for losing control over his emotions whenever she is around.

Nikki watched him carefully, his expression were unreadable, until it settled into one of steely.

Abhi stares hard at her, his expression resentful, "Dr. Nikita, you may leave now. I don't need you anymore. I can finish work for myself. Leave… right now." He emphasized each word deliberately.

Nikki's pulse caught in her throat and she was feeling a spike of pure panic. She had lost him again… and this time forever…. Her eyes shimmer with fresh pool of tears. Stepping back abruptly, she turns and rushes out of his cabin.

Abhi sits back in his chair…. He sits there motionless for God knows how many hours. Belatedly, he realizes what she had said.. Abhimanyu, I don't want to go... what should i… And what he had said … I don't need you anymore.… leave right now

I couldn't help but quote the entire thing, it's so beautifully put. Hats off to you, Nammy. Brilliant job...extremely complex feelings put so smoothly into words. The translation is truly touching. Clap
 
 
 
Aaaah...so finally SLD the clown is of some use. Thankyou for that, Nammy. Big smile
 
 
 
A wonderful, wonderful job. I love the way you're taking this story. It retains the essence of AN that we relished till the pool scene...something that was destroyed after SLD's entry. Thankyou for bringing that back. I'm loving this. Star
 
As I said before, I love the flow of your language...it's simple and you put everything very nicely together. I really enjoy it.
 
I'm loving this FF. Update soon! Hug


Edited by Khushboo_AN - 08 January 2011 at 11:55am

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Wow Jibreen...what an enormous comment!
 
Should I be feeling insecure? LOL

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushboo_AN

Wow Jibreen...what an enormous comment!
 
Should I be feeling insecure? LOL
thnx dear this is my first try LOLLOL but very difficult one LOL

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
namyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy update plz sweetie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
very nice.

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
I had no idea who Abhi and Nikki were, but took a chance on your FF.  Loved it!  Please add me to your pm list and update soon!

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saomom

I had no idea who Abhi and Nikki were, but took a chance on your FF.  Loved it!  Please add me to your pm list and update soon!
 
 
Forgive me, Nammy...for taking up the honour (or rather chheenofying it from you Wink LOL) of welcoming a new member to the AN world, but...
 
Oh sweetie we're all so glad you chanced upon this FF! Big smile Welcome to the wonderful world of AN Hug Glad to have you on board!!! Star
 
And thanks to Nammy for increasing a reader! Yayyyy!!! Big smile Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushboo_AN

Originally posted by saomom

I had no idea who Abhi and Nikki were, but took a chance on your FF.  Loved it!  Please add me to your pm list and update soon!
 
 
Forgive me, Nammy...for taking up the honour (or rather chheenofying it from you Wink LOL) of welcoming a new member to the AN world, but...
 
Oh sweetie we're all so glad you chanced upon this FF! Big smile Welcome to the wonderful world of AN Hug Glad to have you on board!!! Star
 
And thanks to Nammy for increasing a reader! Yayyyy!!! Big smile Big smile Big smile

Why, Thank You!  I came very late to the DMG part and didn't even know they were a part of it.  I must say I like A/N WAY better than A/R.  Please tell me that in the show they end up happy...

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