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FF on Abhi Nikki"It's Only You"Part 21-22(Pg 45) (Page 46)

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
awesome yaar... where di you disappear to yaar?? missed this ff soo much ;)

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
wow awesome cont soon

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Naams ill coment later ...
But thanks a zillion for everything ...
ab main bahut lambi speach nahi de sakti Tongue

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namy_an

@Nehu, Still waiting..


Me too...lol..Thanks for reminding but I knw I still haven't unreserved that previous post of mine but I'll, I promise.

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Hey Namy
 
I am so glad you updated and the parts are so lovely , both of them . If we had a more sensible story line for AN in the show , I would have wanted it to be just like this Smile . So what you have out here is nothing short of an achievement. . Very very nice . I was not planning to login but then saw the PM alert and saw your name and the Message subject , had to login .
 
I hope you continue this FF and make it really longgg.
 
Super LIke Star

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
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Namy ji, what an update. Both the parts were superb. First one was really hot.Blushing Blushing I was getting all red reading it, you know my problem, right?

Nikki glared at him "Huh?" "Tum se kisine madad mangi?" She frowned.

"Nahi," Watchman shook his head, uncertainly.

"To jao apna kaam karo. Aaj tak to kabhi auto bula ke nahi di. Aur aaj achanak se ma'am aap ke liye taxi bula du." She mimicked his words in exasperation.

LOL LOL Did I ever mention how much I love her when she acts like that? I sometimes wonder how Abhi had fallen with such a character.
I loved the whole argument portion where Nikki tries to reason with him to make him stay at her place. Abhi always has answers to every problem, aterall he is The Abhimanyu Modi.Tongue
And everything after that was all so hot, I can't say much about that. Thank you for being besharam, that you are, and giving us such a hot scene.Wink

"Nikki, what are you up to?"Abhi probed.

Nikki shrugged her shoulders, her lips twitched flirteously. "Nothing, I just wanted you to know that I've crossed 18 years long back. If you wish I could show you my birth record." She spoke cheekily.

Ok, ahem, I mean she really said that? I mean literally she said that, tell me she was drunk...lol... And still Abhi didn't do anything. Why?Angry Yes, I'm complaining...lol... I can imagine, how much control he must have required when the temptation was no one but Nikki.Embarrassed

To his further puzzlement, then she smiled humorously. "You sound very confident about yourself!" She spoke with a tongue in cheek.

Her ability to joke him on such a subtle topic amused him. She was indeed a perfect match for him. A sparkler.

"Well, the answer is yes! Always.. Abhimanyu Modi is a perfectionist." Abhi winked and smirked.

And this,my girl, was the best and my most fav punch of the whole update. You know, I have lots of queries about this but then if I start here, IF might probably ban my account here.Embarrassed I loved it.

The next part was all good. I thought Abhi might be mad at Nikki once more and they might end up fighting all over again but thank God, I mean thank you, that didn't happen.
Once again you concluded the part in suspense. What is it all with Abhi and his family?Confused I'm confused. Kuch to clear karo. Me waiting for the suspense to get revealed. It's getting on my nerves now.LOL
All in all, a very nice update. I'll be waiting for the next update, like always, very (im)patiently.Wink
Update soon buddy.Hug


Edited by Nehu_1 - 02 February 2012 at 5:50am

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Glad for your update Namy.. 
Loved the way N is looking for making up with A :) Its so N for her to run around bush and not come straight to the point.. :)

Aaaha A's mom is coming into picture.. Looking forward :)

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 12:32am | IP Logged
namyyy
beautiful
hot hot hot n more hot
both parts r really very nice i enjoyed reading it
ek dum mast hai !!!!
waiting for next update
i know u want more comments from me will try to do it soon

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