seriously poor divs *i hope adi din mind me calin her divs*
Arey u can call her whetver u want to call, I'll take care of Adi
ohky enough of ma nonsense..
No u can carry on with it.. Am used to it
but i really love the way u described divs feelings..
n i so agree wid muski
" Tum na sare ke sare mard ek jaise hote ho. Heartless and hopeless."
jus missd her punches..
i mean this is the uniqness of ur ff..u neva underestimate ny character..all r equally imp u giv justice to all of them.. n specially lov the bonding u show between niki-armaa,niki-ridzi.. hatz off
Aww thak u thank u*taking a bow*.. Glad to know that u like it.. Tarif ke liye shukriya *in shinchain tone* Me too miss Muski n her punju punches..
the starting part waz cute..
n cabin scene waz truely superb..
i mean abhi is sooo...ummm abhi!
neva ready to sey sorry
i mean hez so difficult to handle but that iz abhi!
and most imp purrfect
but how can he jus sleep in midl of their convo
Bold: I don't think i need to comment on this..
tht waz so badd... poor gal!
but whole scene waz cute..
I wasn't really wrinting a funny kinda scene but then something came in my mind n I just went with the flow.. Glad to know that u found it cute...
love the way she waz waiting for him to come..
n him trying to ignore her .. naughty devil!
gal waz fishing for some complements man, stop being stubborn sadu!
go 4 it!
Arey no verabal communication rquired there sweetz.. waha ankho hi ankho mai ishar ho gaya tha
ohky till this point story waz fun, lithrtd..
but az she sang the song..
evrything got flipped by 180 degreez..
i mean thz so sweet of her to sing that song az she neva knew that it has to do something wid hiz past! her intentionz wer not to hurt him
instead of getin appreciatn got hiz anger..
i mean agen not abhiz fault too..
hez past had to b so bitter?
love the way u described hiz inner state.. awesome.. difficult to write.. (ofcourz not 4 u lady
I know dear.. But u too like sadist scene.. So this one was fr u Thanks again.. Glad that u liked the build up of emotions.. Hmmm.. Personally i don't like to write heartwrenching scene..u know that.. *sigh*
hmmm al that scene waz really painful, tensed.. but i love abhiz suddn change of attitude though its momentarily..
Abhi stepped forward and grabbed her shoulders again. She cried out in shocked alarm. In her panic, unthinking she put her hands on his chest. Abhi's gaze went on her hand and then it slowly lifted to her face. When his eyes met with hers, her eyes looked frightened and watery. Rigidity left his jaw and his gripped loosened. He felt a distinct change in his heart and his eyes softened a bit. But the change was momentarily
i mean he first lash out hiz anger n when she gt hurt , al hiz anger forgottn n he agen bcm so soft towrdz her.. i love this thing of him!! though for somtim but still by this smal smal actionz u can c how much this man iz crazyly in love wid her.. n most imp thing feelingz r mutual..
she loves him bak the same way..
but unfortunately this time situation iz very difficult.. weird..i hope they wil come around soon! *sigh*
Han ji.. Don't worry they'll come around.. Hum hai to kya gum hai
i hate this adi haan.. i mean i dnt like the way he talkd to nikki.. i mean only abhi n armaan haz this right on her.. abhi haz mor right though
Fury again blazed in Nikki's eyes and the simultaneous urge to slap the person standing in front of her.
i so wish she would have done this.. idiotic man!huh!
how dare he..
Whoaa chill angry lady! That man has got a heartache.. Uspe thoda taras khao
but when armaan came woaah it waz completely unexpected ..shitt!
but i realy felt ma own heart shrinked when she waz silently praying god.. n calling abhi 4 her rescue..
(abhi tum q nahi aye?
ofcz armaan waz very diffclt to handle at that time.. but apni nikki pehlwaan iz strong! *sigh*
Wohi to.. She is strong enough to handle this kinda situation.. Aur waise bhi Armaan se kya darna.. He is her cool bb
oww billyz accident waz unfortunate thank god our hero saved him!ye hero apni heroin ke paas kub ayega?
(sorry for ma cheeky statements n language
but i want them togethr u knw taht *sigh*)
now this iz the scene i waz takin about.. i love ridz-nikki relation so much! i mean she understandz niki really well! most of the time more than armaan!
Very true.. Me too adore Nikki-Ridz bonding.. Its my fav scene..
AN encouter waz
but i knw everything wil b fine soon (stop crying ma crezzy heart
i mean i alwaz lov ther fightz but not such kinda serious ones..
poor nikki crying .. i hate it!
n the bestesst scene i found in this update waz abhimaan scne..
(ma personal fav)
the way abhi told armaan about smal things related to nikki was so damn admirn!
"I don't think I need to answer any of your nave questions. But still i would answer it Dr. Mallik." Abhi cut him off harshly. He adjusted his specs and started. "Well Dr. Mallik, for the record, I know that there's matured and emotional girl behind this faade of childish Nikki. What I know is that she scares of the dark but never admits it. I know that she still mourns over her Brother's death but she is scared to share it with others. I know that she still craves for her parent's attention but she is terrified to voice her feelings. I know that she hates to cry in front of other soul, hence at times she opts for all kind of silly acts to hide her embarrassment. I know she fidgets with her hands when she is nervous. And I know she is crazy for chocolate chips cream ice cream and she hates to share it with anyone
specially icecream part waz really not so..abhi typz ! yet he couldnt control seyin it waz such sweet thing!
n truly cute...
n the last part
" the thing is that I don't like to see her crying over someone. Be that it may you or whoever. I'll not tolerate that. It hurts me here" Abhi put his finger on Armaan's heart and continued, "When I see her in tears".
itz so sweet para.. love it to the core..
m glad abhi sed these things to him.. it waz necessary..
i love when he do such things for niki.. specially putting his ego aside..
really awesome scene..
Tell u truth, I was really dreading posting this scene because It hadn't came out the way i wanted.. Actually this one is my personal fav scene so far.. AM so very happy u too like it..Thank u so much bb..
how i wish nikki haz seen abhi doin this for her..
glad armaan understood the truth! ANz love 4 eachother.. !!
n y not! after all The Abhimanyu Modi made him understand that!
abhi iz so good at convincing, sometimes wid his authorative nature n sometimes wid hiz charmz..
aww now m really eager to watch nikkiz reaction! shez so sweet doll n desarvz all the love in the world! ofcrz only one man can giv it to her.. her abhi..onlyy her..
Her eyes gleamed with anew admiration and endless love for Abhi. Now it's payback time, Nikki.. She made a determination as tears of joy and relief sprang in her eyes.
Han ji I understood what u meant.. I hope i'll meet up ur expectations in the next update
Well, I don't think i've said enough to u.. But thank u fr such a lovely comment.. It has just made my day!!! Thank u sweety