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FF on Abhi Nikki"It's Only You"Part 21-22(Pg 45) (Page 19)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged

nammyyHug

me agen EmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL

prt 10
gala night party waz suddend twist of the scene yaa!Embarrassed
which made relaxd abhi agen tensed!WinkEmbarrassed
koi abhiko relax mood mai dekh hi nahi sakta kya1AngryOuchOuch..Embarrassed sorry
overrotectivness u knw!Embarrassed

hmesha duniya bharka tension rehta hai useyOuchOuch
Abhi panics as his mind envisages the image of Nikki and Adi smiling and dancing together at Gala night.
 He tightly closes his eyes to banish such disturbing thought. As tinge of jealousy clouds his mind,
he gets up in desperation and starts pacing back and forth "Oh God, what do I do now?".
Abhi quickly run checks in his mind and finds the solution.

ths dream of abhi reminded me nikkiz dream regarding abhi n susu dance!
waz hillariousssLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
jusss lov the way u hav written abt abiz mixd emotnzzClapStar
anger,lov,passion,pain...amazingg!Star

lov ths sentense
She should have hated him for that... He thinks...
But in her eyes he has never seen any such hatred towards him '. Distress, yes.. but Hatred, No' EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

She is the only one who has not just affected his heart but has touched his soul.EmbarrassedBig smileBig smileBig smile

omg n finnaly u made him to cum to the party?? **Shocked yupppiee Big smileDancing
oh i lov u nammyHug

Still that tall, outrageously handsome and wide shouldered frame was looming in the doorway andhe was watching her.. Nikki's heart rejoices.... Abhi.....BlushingBlushing

lov complt abhi-manav-nikki scn1LOLLOL

i cnt blame nikki 4 thinking ths cz ofcrse nyone wud hav thought lik that!
the way he waz behaving aftr wat had happn wid them waz totally unexpected!ShockedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
My Intern' something personal to discuss...Is he 'Abhimanyu Modi' or 'his Ghost?If Abhimanyu Modi, what is wrong with him?.... Why is he threatening poor soul?..And why has he held her waist as if he owns her.... and in first place what in the name of God is he doing here?...?
 But if he is 'Only Abhi' then it explains everything..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

nikkine to no ball pe b sixer maar diyaShockedBlushing
Oh no no no Dr. Modi, how can I forget that you are a Doctor..
that too a senior Doctor, who is expertise in all damn activities except what a Doctor is expected to perform." EmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL

lov their surcastic dhasoo argumentzzz to the core!StarStar


n on top of wvrything ,miss divyaz entry!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
so now ball iz in abhiz court1WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedBig smileBig smile
 
it wa hillarious-He never flirt or compliment.. Is he drunk?? LOLLOL

n nikki calling divya miss Long laggy Gynecologist ShockedROFL

He should have been tagged 'handle with care'LOLLOLtruee1

1ohhh n finallyyyEmbarrassed
abhi n nikki in pool side lawn under moonlightBlushingBlushing
nammy ki bachhi mar dala yaar tuney1BlushingBlushing

n two button of his shirt was undone *faintzz,diezz*BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
hayee dil khush kar ditta yaar tune..Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

jhappiyaaaaan  paley aajaaHugHug
 

prt 11
ahhh AN momentBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
jus lov when he pullz her cloz to him n speakz in such a husky voice that mkz her shiver..BlushingBlushing
 
n then wat they did i cnt evn quote coz m too shy to do thatBlushingBlushing
 
gall dukh rahe hai blush kr krkey!!!!BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
 
n nikkiz conclusion waz too damn hillariousShockedLOLLOLLOL
It was far tempting than her most desired Chocolate Choco Chip Ice cream... And much Yummy.. EmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL
ladki to kaam se gayiiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed totally!Embarrassed
 
good goin nammy ! Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileu hav writtn the scene vrrry b'fully...well doneStarClapClap

n thank god that atlst this tim kiss  waz completed Embarrassedunlik othr timz n in dmg when armaan tapkofyzzAngryAngryAngryAngry
 
 gautam rustana charactr iz soo good!SmileSmile
aahh so abhiz past iz somhow related to hez fathr! ohrite!!Smile

awwwww n finally abhi sang a song n played guitar!BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
aww must b grt day!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedStarStarStarStar
lov the song u selected!Big smileBig smileStar
 
bt dint lik end of the part.Ouch..kidin..i mean agen abhiz mood got completely flippedOuchOuchOuchOuch
n poor nikki iz compltly unaware of it!!OuchOuch
ab hard tim 4 nikki dear!
al the best ma pehlwaan1OuchHug

grt grt grt part sweetyStarClapClapClapClap
i lov ths whol part specciall the kissBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
thank u soooo muchHugHug

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
chaitu, my sweetest frnd thanks a ton fr ur deatiled comments on each part.. Am speechless yaar, u've noticed n commented on each small details tht i'd capture in d parts.. Hats off to u dear. i'll reply to ur comments later on coz rite nw am out of words. u deserve ennumber of appllauds frm me sweety:) lods of Jappiiiizzzzzzz dear.. u made my day more special today.. thank u thank u thanku *res*

Edited by namy_an - 28 January 2011 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
*gasp*
 
OMG Cherry woh comment hai ya mahabharat! *faints*

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
Gosh I love this story....  Please update soon!  Now I need to go watch some AN videos...EmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
cherry tu ne ye thesis kitne days ma likha ha LOLLOL

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namy_an

chaitu, my sweetest frnd thanks a ton fr ur deatiled comments on each part.. Am speechless yaar, u've noticed n commented on each small details tht i'd capture in d parts.. Hats off to u dear. i'll reply to ur comments later on coz rite nw am out of words. u deserve ennumber of appllauds frm me sweety:) lods of Jappiiiizzzzzzz dear.. u made my day more special today.. thank u thank u thanku *res*
m happy that u likd it soo much
 i jus gave u feedbackz of ur ff nahing els dearSmile
awww m happy that i made ur day that too when u wer alreadyy sooo happy!Big smile
u r ma swweeetyyyy
n grt goinn!
alwaz tak cr
lotz of jhapppizz..muaaaaaaahhh!Hug

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushboo_AN

*gasp*
 
OMG Cherry woh comment hai ya mahabharat! *faints*
LOLLOLLOLLOL
hottie tu toh meri maa hai sabme
u dnt hav nyrite to commnt on ma commnt n itz lenghhTongueLOLLOLHug


Edited by chaitali_an - 31 January 2011 at 2:33am

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namy me waiting..................

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