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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 54)

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Hye Ramona, Tongue
avi is super Romantic,
Day Dreaming
Arpi is totaly confused
but i think avi is too much consious taking arpi.
Avitas first Date will be intresting to read.

And thanks dear for dedicating to me. Tongue

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Snigdha_Khanam IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
awww lovd it awsome
avi iz reli romantic n possessive
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

Edited by soni4eva - 28 June 2011 at 10:26am

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged

Finally im unresing my postsBig smileBig smile

Oh My My...Even If Avi darling is so possessive abt Arpi ,

still he makes me fall in love with himHeartHeart Angry young manWinkWinkWink

Chp16- Loved tht cute teasingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Arpi cant say anything to Avi when he so demandingLOLLOL

Im juz thinking what will happen in DinnerTongueWink

Chap 17- My cutie pie Arpi was confusedLOLLOL

I loved the way he made Jagat away from herWink

Loved his ultimatum...WinkTongue

M waiting for 8pmBig smileEmbarrassed

Want loads and loads of RomanceBlushing

Update sooon

Love ya...Heart


Edited by prash_t - 03 July 2011 at 6:46am

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danno IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
oyee shona
update bada achha tha
love avi's possesiveness
love arpi's jhoota gussa
update soon dear

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Aziya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Ramona babes. .Hug
LOLpoor jagat!LOL.avi is reasonably jealous. .finaly succeded in geting arpi wit him na?nw im eagerly waiting fr 8 o clockWink

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
this chapter is dedicated to my silent readers.. love you all for reading all my updates. Hug

Its time you comment..

Chapter 18

Its 8 p.m

Arpita had a tough time in college tackling Avdhesh & her curricular activites. He pestered her all day. Sometimes by texting her & calling her up. Arpita was seething with anger.

Manjari noticed her discomfort- Whats the prob honey?"

Arpi just shrugged it off- "Nothing at all. It just that Im a little fagged out"
She decided that it was best to ignore his calls. Avi grew impatient. He was furious as she didnt respond. He thought that it would be better to deal in his own way.

Shikha & Manjari were busy in the library whereas Arpita assisted RV in the project work.

RV- "Arpi, I forgot my files in the class. Could You get them for Me?"

Arpi agreed- "Sure."

The classroom was empty. The moment Arpita stepped in, she felt a pair of strong arms circling her slender waist. She was startled.

"Hello Princess.."

Arpita's mouth remained wide open.
'How could he get here?' she thought. She wanted to move away from his grasp-
"Avdhesh, what are you doing here?"

Avi held her tightly- "Nothing, I just came to check on my Princess."

Arpi- "Avi, I need to go. I've got.. I've got to complete an.. An important assignment"

She stated uncomfortably as he nuzzled her neck. However, Avi didnt hear a word of what she said as he was too lost. He kissed her shoulder & Arpi felt a tingling sensation. She quicky jerked off his hands as he had loosened his grip on her.

"Why dont you understand? You just cant go on having your way."

Avi grabbed her waist- "Im Avdhesh Singh Thakur & I get whatever I want & you are No Exception"

For a while Arpi just stood gazing at him. His eyes had a spark in them that could easily get one mesmerized. The slight twitch of his jaw which indicated that he was angry, gave him a handsome look. She couldnt resist herself, she moved closer to him & placed a soft kiss on his jaw. Avi was baffled by her gesture. Arpi blushed on realising what she just did so she quickly burried her face in his embrace.

The day went by & finally it was time for AviTa's special moment. Arpi was puzzled as to what she'd be wearing. While she searched her wardrobe, Arpi found a neatly wrapped golden package. She was surprised-
"How did You get here?"

There was a small card with the words-

An excited Arpi soon unwrapped the parcel. The pack contained a beautiful black dress & a box of diamond studs. Arpi was awed at it beauty & really happy as he had done so much for her, But at the same time a little worried as it was too revealing.
"How do I wear this?"

Arpita's dress

Meanwhile, Avdhesh waited paitently for a glimpse of Arpita. He waited in his SUV outside her house. He was looking no less than a handsome Prince in his Black Tuxedo.
He texted her- 'I'm waiting.'
To which Arpi replied back- 'Patience is a virtue.' Just then she received a call.

"How long are you gonna take?? Om dying to see you."

Arpi- "Ermm.. Avi.. Im completely fagged out. So, would.. would you mind if we cancel our plan??"

Avi calmly replied- "Fine, Let me come up there."

Arpi soon looked out of the window only to find Avi walking towards the door.
"You're not coming here."

Avi- "But you said you were not well. so I thought I'd come to see you."

Arpi- "Okay.. fine.. I'm coming."

Avi knew she was lying. He knew very well that Arpi would definitely try to make excuses. But she didnt know, that she was dealing with Avdhesh Singh Thakur who is a step ahead of her & that she just couldnt escape.

Edited by KriYa_life - 10 July 2011 at 8:18am

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Ramona, I love this new update. The party prep is very intriguing. ODB is very keen on having his lady love listen to his instruction. I love how Avi keeps bothering her, he wants to be on her mind every second like she is on his. The poor guy is so lost that he left his business just to follow his girl around. I love how he keeps giving her mysterious and sudden visits. The embrace was very cute. How on earth does Avi manage to get into her room without her knowledge. This guy have so many tricks and techniques under his sleeves. Her dress is gorgeous, Avi knows how to dress his lady. I love how you are making Avi wait while Arpi is trying to escape the date. This guy is too smart, he can read her motives and he wants he to come to the party. I just hope Avi doesn't get too much on her nerve. He should realize that a girl does not like to be controlled. Please update soon.

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