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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 40)


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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
u r fabouluos superb

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Heyyy Cherryyy Hug

Just loved Avi obsessive behaviour Blushing

loved the way you portrayed every emotions very well Clap  Clap Star Clap Clap

AST is tensed and concern about his love Blushing Blushing

PP urf Pappu Prasad is back ROFL ROFL 

love ya Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 18 June 2011 at 4:21am

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Ramona, this update is so awesome. Where did Pappu come from and now go away? He is defintely a mayavi. Avita is together finally and thank god Avi took out the bullet. I was thinking Arpi will be stubborn all the way.

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged

amazing updatSmileloved arpi avi sceneAngrypappu... hopes avi teaches him a good lesson

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piyarapiyari IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
sweetu first of all thanks for the pm and second my mindblowing writer fantastic kya likhti ho bey Thumbs Upmuah muahhhHug each one is different and unique well i don,t know about them very much bt frm the chp it seems arpi is very naughty and avi so loving chp ended on a romantic noteEmbarrassed heheheheh LOLwill b waiting for next my sweetuDay Dreaming

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Cuty16 Goldie

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Hye ramona,
the bullet had directed its effect on avitas heart i think.

Just readed last three updates,this part was realy sweet dear and good to see the loving caring avi back nai toh i was realy scared.
Sorry for late rply dear.

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
this update is dedicated to my Siddu.. love you darling..Hug

Ch- 14

Jungle All the way

Arpi quickly opened her eyes. She looked into his eyes that had only her picture in them. He looked at her lovingly. At this moment, Arpita forgot everything.. she felt only his presence around her. She felt as if time had come to halt.

 "Get him, I want him at any cost.."

 They were interuppted by Pappu. *Stupid Fellow.. I could have continued with their Romance*

 Avi looked through the bushes. Arpi was puzzled,
 "What's going on & why are they after us?"

Avi - "Dnt make a sound or else we're dead."

Arpi obeyed without further questions. He grabbed Arpi's wrist and pulled her along. Pappu's men were scattered all over. One of them was just a few meters away from AviTa. Avi immediately pushed Arpi against the tree & stood beside her. He carefully watched Pappu's men. Meanwhile, Arpi just gazed at Avi. She was taken aback by his angry, still handsome face... Gosh, she didnt know why but she felt like touching his face and kissing him. She unknowingly raised her hands but quickly them down realising what she was about to do.. Avi hadnt noticed all this as his eyes were focussed ahead.

Pappu growled- "Where did he go? "

One of his men- "I dont know Sir."

 Pappu- "Oh dont tell me U dnt know. I want Avdhesh Singh Thakur as soon as possible. Go get him."

 The man who was near AviTa moved closer towards the tree. Avi snaked his arm around Arpi's waist & pulled her closer to him oblivious of the distance.
Arpita couldnt resist herself & he hugged him. She felt secured in his arms. She hugged him tight & enjoyed herself. Avi was surprised by this gesture of hers but quickly hugged her back. He was very happy to see her being so frank with him. He realised that she too loved him & now very soon Avdhesh & Arpita would be one. Both of them were lost in each other that they failed to notice that they were alone. Pappu & his men had left long ago.

Arpi slowly opened her eyes & moved back. She was really embarrased.

'Geez.. Arpi..cant you control yourself? What were you doing?'

Avi smiled at her embarrasment..
"I think they've gone. Lets go."

Arpi- "Who were they and why were they after you?"

Avi- "I'll tell you later. Now lets move."

Arpi was adamant- "No. I want to know everything. What are you hiding Avdhesh?"

Avdhesh looked at her- "Trust me.. I will tell you everything.. but now.. we have to leave."

Both of them drove home in Avdhesh's car. On they way, Arpi was tensed. She knew Avi was hiding something.
"Do You Trust Me?"

Arpi- "What?"

Avi- "Do you trust me Arpita?"

Arpi was puzzled- "Yes.. Of course I trust you. Coz I.."

Avi- "Coz what??"

She didnt want him to know about her feelings, so she changed the topic.

Arpi- "I wanna go home. Mom will be waiting."

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Edited by KriYa_life - 06 June 2011 at 1:25am

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Heyyy Cherrryyy Hug

Loved Avita Moments Day Dreaming

Arpiii is sooo much head over heels on Avi Blushing

Stupid PP urf Pappu Prasad destroyed the sweet AviTa Moments Angry

Their hug Blushing Hug Blushing Hug

Avi is sooo sweet and cute he is concern about Arpi Embarrassed

love you Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 18 June 2011 at 12:14pm

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