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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 34)

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Awesome work Ramona!!!!!!!! Avi is rocking!!!!!!

thank you Siddu... Hug

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged

this update is dedicated to my Sweetheart Prashuu...

Chapter 11- 


Fear filled Arpi's eyes. His every stride told her that he intended to do sumthing terrible. Arpi managed to stand on the bed.  "Dont come close to me." She tried getting off, but he anticipated her move and caught her by her waist.

"Leave me", she yelled. He placed her on the bed while she kicked & struggled to free herself from his grasp. He climbed on her & held her hands at the sides. His bare body on hers made her feel uncomfortable.

Arpi- "What are u doing?"

Avi- "Sshh.. Relax Arpita", he said sensually. His eyes admired every feature of her beautiful face. Avi bent forward & tried to kiss her luscious lips. But Arpi turned her face just in time thus revealing her slender neck. He softly kissed her on her cheek & nuzzled her neck. Arpi felt really uncomfortable.

"Please don't do this. Please let me go." she pleaded. But her pleas fell on a deaf ear. His kisses gained passion. His thirst for her grew rapidly. He enjoyed her soft skin under his lips. Poor Arpi couldnt do anything apart from crying & yelling. Avi kissed her on both sides of her neck. Slowly slowly he moved downwards. He loosend his grip on her hand & tugged at her clothes. Knowing that her one hand was free, she took her chance & hit him on his head with the vase kept on the table. "Aahh.." He yelped in pain & got off her holding his head. Arpi jumped off the bed, took her dupatta & ran towards the door. He desperately tried to open the door but it was locked from inside & Avi had the keys. "Damn it!!" Arpi was furious.

 Meanwhile, Avi came searching for her. He knew she cudnt escape because the keys were with him. "I know where you are Arpita. So come out from hiding place." He knew she was somewhere in the house only.

On the hand, Arpi was hiding behind the cupboard. She kept praying that he doesnt see her. Avi had moved to the other side of the room. Luckily she wasn't spotted by him.


Arpita looked around if she could find any means of escape. She saw a window in the kitchen. A wave of happiness spread on her face & she without looking around she ran towards the window. But unfortunately, Avi had seen her running.

Just before Arpita could reach the window, Avi grabbed her & hugged her from the back.. "Where do you think you're going?"


Arpita cursed her fate for being caught.

dont forget to hit like...

Edited by KriYa_life - 11 May 2011 at 7:04am

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joliefille Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Ok Ramona dear i have to thank you again for sch mind blowing update,
as after such sad epi i read it again n now i m feeling betterEmbarrassed

now about update,
wow yaar Avi ko kya hua hai, omgShockedShockedShocked

poor Arpi ye love haiShockedShocked bechari

aage kyaOuch ek shot kha ke bhi Avi caught her again ,
n your sl avi is quiet interesting haan, but yaar yahan to hero hi villain ki kami puri kar raha hai,

he almost killed Arpi by his action or i should say his expression of loveWink

waiting for next update dear TongueTongueTongue

Edited by joliefille - 11 May 2011 at 10:49am

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Heyyy Cheryyy Hug

Look who is editing posts ROFL

Mini SR is Blushing Blushing Blushing

Avi is very naughty and obsessive streak also poor Arpi got Zor ka jhatka from him...Ouch 

she don't know that No can escape from him ROFL

love ya Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 17 June 2011 at 9:28am

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jasveensokhi Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged

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-Prashu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Ramona DarlingHugHug

U dedicated to meEmbarrassed

awww my sweetheartEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Btw..Im loving his expression of love...WinkLOL 

I hope he dsnt do anything bad than thisOuch

Btw.. I m in live with ur FF's AviBlushing

Loooved itEmbarrassed                    

Edited by prash_t - 14 May 2011 at 9:14am

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shumi. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 7:48pm | IP Logged

short and sweet update. enjoyed reading don't kill arpi...Ouch

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Sidda8 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Ramona, thanks for the intriguing update. Avi is being overly aggressive, she may be his girlfriend but he does not have the right to force her to sleep with him. I'm scared for Arpi is she going to start hating Avi for this? Don't tell me that she will seek RV's comfort and advice for this. Avi, learn that all girls are not easy to get and learn to treat them decently. I'm disappointed that he did not stop when hearing her screams and cries.

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