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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 30)

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
DEEWANGEE begins now... 

Chapter- 10

As she got in the car, Avdhesh locked the doors & drove away.

Arpi- "So.. tell me."

Avi didn't reply. He just kept driving. Arpi was perplexed.

"Okay, atleast tell me where we're going?"

Avi- "You need not know that."

Arpi was furious.

"Avdhesh, first you bring me along & then you don't even tell me anything."

Avi found his temper rising.

"Will you just shut up? One more sound & you'll regret it."

Arpi was slightly scared. She didn't know why he was behaving like that. He was different today. The Avdhesh she met last night was a completely different person. She kept thinking about the reason as to why he behaved so rudely.


He thoughts were interrupted when Avi stopped the car in front of a small cottage. It was a secluded place. Not a soul could be seen around. He got off the car & signaled Arpita to do the same.

Arpi- "Where are we? Why have we come here?"


But Avi didn't answer her. He just grasped her wrist & pulled her along.

Arpi- "Hey.. you're hurting me."


She tried to free herself but his grasp was too strong. He didn't answer her & just kept moving towards the cottage.

Once they entered, Avi pushed Arpi inside & bolted the door. Arpi fell straight on the ground. She was furious.

"What the hell do you think you're doing?"

Avi- "What were YOU doing Arpita?"

Arpita was confused. "I don't know what you're talking about."

Avi just seized her wrist & pulled her in his arms.

"You don't know what I'm talking about?"

Arpi nodded her head sideways indicating NO. She was afraid to speak.

Avi- "Really?"

Before Arpi could say anything, Avi pushed her on the Bed. Arpi's dupatta slipped down. Avi slowly made his way towards Arpita. Arpi was terrified. Tears rolled down her pink cheeks.

Arpi- "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?"

Avi- "How dare you touch someone else when I'm here?"

Arpi realized that Avi must have seen her with her RV.

"Avdhesh, there's nothing like that. He is just my friend."

Avi roughly pulled her hair in such a way that her head tilted back thus revealing her slender neck.

"Friend? Don't you know that I cannot tolerate anyone even talking you & still you had the audacity to touch him? Listen Arpita, I hate anyone looking you. I'll kill that person who tries to touch you. You are meant for me. Only I have a right to touch what belongs to me."



He walked towards Arpita. He had a look that scared her. His lips curved into a smile. 'No. not a smile, a smirk.' Arpi was very scared. She knew there was something going on in his mind. Avdhesh took off his shirt & threw it on the floor.


pls dont forget to hit like & comment..

Edited by KriYa_life - 11 May 2011 at 5:34am

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
hey Ramona Darling Hug

OMG!!!!!! what's with Avi now? he is soooooooooooooooo Jealous same as Green eyed Monster... Shocked Shocked ShockedPoor Arpi what's gonna happen with her ? Cry Cry

ur Avi is juuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuusssssssssssssssssssssst AwesomeDay Dreaming Day Dreaming

Darling knowing you this is just a trailer we have to wait for the picture and btw enjoy ur trip Embarrassed

but u r making us to wait for long time  Cry but no worries i am wait Wink

love you Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 April 2011 at 11:00am

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-Prashu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged


Wht an updateClapClap

Loved all the lines said by Avi...!SmileWink

but wht is he upto????OuchOuchOuch  I hope there wont be any misunderstandingsOuch

Update was...............


Update it Soon Darling.....Smile

Cant wait fr the twistWink


Edited by prash_t - 14 April 2011 at 1:04pm

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rainurubal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
omg, avi kya karne wala hai
jaldi jaldi batao

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joliefille Goldie

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:24am | IP Logged
this one for chapter-10,
Hey ramona sorry dear,but i read this part first Wink
Wooooooo what a dialouge ''i will kill that person who tries to touch you'' wow
Wow yaar, avi is going crazy she just put her hand on rv's back and avi reacted this way phuuuu,
God what he is going to do? Ouch
Oh one more thing, shirtless n totaly uncontrolable avi,
Huun dear sr ka irada hai kya Wink
Well i feel he is going to show her what can he do for her.either by thretning her or hurting himself Embarrassed n for ur writing Clap

Edited by joliefille - 14 April 2011 at 10:02am

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joliefille Goldie

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
oh ramona dear ,
Just one word,awesome,
Even i m out of words after reading it but awesome,
Muuuuuuuuuuuha, lots of kiisseeee n hugs,
Oh how gental he is,he let her sleep in his arms n later leave on her bed, bada gentalman ho gaye yaar,
Jelous jelous avi hehehe.

Edited by joliefille - 14 April 2011 at 12:15pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
right jaldi batao avi kya karega

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aminakhan Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
OMG....i m really scared....whats he gonna do??????
Plz continue soon.....

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