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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 15)

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
we want next part jaldi se

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunaha6

arey ramona......e kha bhey.....awi kho bilkul rude bana diya........nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii e nahi ho saktha..........hahahhahaha.....LOLZZZZZZZZROFL arrey.. yeh to sirf shuruvat hai... aage aage dekho hota hai kya...
but still loved this new awi so much........chalo bhey ,abh jaldi sey update kar diyo............LOL itni bhi ka jaldi hai ??? LOL
 
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$un@h@ lubb you too..

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danno

we want next part jaldi se


Next part... Oh.. I completely forgot about it... LOL

Dont worry.... jaldi se milega....


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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

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thank you honey..... for the lubbly surprise...

lubb ya...Smile


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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aleena1

Hey ramona.....Hug

Awsome updateStar  thank you dear...


woooohooooo Avita finally met...... yup...

cant wait ...... update soon hunThumbs Up  okay
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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
Love the story so farClap, can't wait to see how brash and aggressive this Avi is going to be, so unlike our shy Avi.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged

Chapter  5 - Before the Dance 

 
He was almost on the dance floor when suddenly the lights became dim. Taking this opportunity Arpi quickly moved away from his grasp while Avi was trying to decipher to happened. She quickly made her way towards the exit, not wanting to be caught again by him but suddenly someone caught her hand..

 

RV- "Arpi.. where are you goin?"

Arpi who was relieved on seeing him calmly replied..

"Err.. I was just searching for Manjari and Shikha.. Hey, why are you late ?" ( she changed the topic)

RV- " I was stuck in a traffic"

Arpi- "You Liar !! Search for another excuse."

RV- (scratching his head) " Jaane bhi do na.. Lets go"

 

Soon Manjari and Shikha also arrive.

Shikha- "Dude! What took you so long ?"

RV- "Hey Star! ( Shikha's pet name exclusively kept by RV) I was. . . ."

Manjari- (interrupting in between) " Stuck in Traffic, right?"

 All of them laugh. Suddenly there's an announcement.

 

Host- " okay everyone.. Lets have some fun on the dance floor. Lets play a game. All you young men will come up one by one. We will blindfolded You & then you can select you partner. Point out to the most beautiful girl and she'll be yours. Ready??"

 

One by one, all the young men kept coming forward. All hoping to get the best one. Avi's eyes were searching Arpita. Just then Shikha's father Mr. Gupta came up to him.

Mr.G- "Avi beta.. kaise ho ?? Tumhare Papa nahi aaye ?"

Avi- " hum theek hai uncle. Dad is not in town."

Mr.G- " Oh! I see.. Anyway, enjoy the party. By the way why don't you join them ?"

 Mr. Gupta insisted. Avi tried to refuse when suddenly his eyes caught her. He quickly agreed with a smirk playing on his lips. It was RV's turn. He walked towards the stage. But before leaving he looked at the trio and said-

" Be ready.. Im cuming."

On the stage he smiled at them. Before being blindfolded he carefully noticed Arpi's position. He pointed out towards them with his eyes closed. But when he opened his eyes he was shocked to see his partner. She walked up to him and asked-

" Shall we Dance ??"

He couldn't refuse and simply nodded yes.

 

Next it was Avi's chance. The Host blindfolded him. Avi stood quietly for a while, he slowly raised his fingers and pointed towards the corner of the hall. Arpi stood shell shocked.

'How on earth did he know where I am?' she thought to herself. She was even more surprised because she had moved to the corner of the hall, hoping that he would not see her... But Avi pointed out exactly in that direction. So lost she was in her thoughts that she failed to notice Avi coming towards her. He stood right in front of her and started staring at her. He was carefully watching each and every feature of hers. His touch was enough to snap her out of thoughts.

 
 
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NVBGKY

Love the story so farClap, thank you... can't wait to see how brash and aggressive this Avi is going to be, so unlike our shy Avi.

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