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FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 (Page 12)

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prash_t

Ramona..
 
nice one!! thanks a lot
By the way, is he avi?? I dont know??LOL
 
 
waiting fr another part!!! wait wait..

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Hiya RamonaHug  hiee
how r u?Big smile fine dear
its beautiful writtenSmile thanks alot
when avi will comeWink paitence.. my frnd




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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danno

hiiiiiiiiiii ramonaaaaaaaa
  



just wait for a few more mins..
next chapter cuming up.
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
hiee every one... this is the next chapter.. hope you are satisfied with the length..
Chapter 4- AviTa FIRST MEETING

after a few mins, the phone rang again.. Arpi attended the call.

Arpi- "what is it?? Kya hai??"

RV- "Im Sorry? pls forgive me?"

Arpi- (sighs) "Ok.. "

RV- "Thank God Arpi- (giggles) " Toh kal milte hai. Are you coming tomorrow?"

RV- "Of course.. Shikha ne itne pyaar se invite kiya hai."

Arpi- "toh Bye"

Next Day:

Aparna- "Arpi Chalo Beta.. time for lunch.Come down"

Arpi- (from her room) "Maa.. Im not hungry"

Aparna- (going towards her room) "Arpi.. Aisa nahi chalega beta? The party is in the evening, you have so much time to get ready.."

Arpi- " yeah Maa.. But I have to be prepared. Look I don't even know what to wear."

She makes a sad face and sits on the bed which was totally messed up with clothes scattered everywhere.

Aparna- " Don't worry. I'll help you. But first, go and have your lunch."

Arpi- "Er.. Ok fine"

After Lunch:

Arpi went back to her room only to be surprised. On the bed, lay a beautiful dress. It was red in colour and had a black lace design on it. It reached her knees and had a deep neck.

Her joy knew no bounds. She happily went and took it in her hands, held it up and twirled it around. She was very happy.

Back in office:

Chulbul enters, his boss is busy on the laptop.

Chulbul- "Sir, Mr. Rao wants to meet you"

Man- "Not now. Listen, Cancel all my appointments for tonight. I have some important work"

Chulbul-" Yes Sir.."

Outside the party hall, Manjari was waiting for Arpita and RanVijay to arrive.

Manjari- "yeh Arpi bhi na.. kitna time laga rahi hai."

Arpita arrives in Jagats car.

Arpi- " Sorry Manjari, I was late because of Bhaiyya.."

Manjari- (interrupted) " Oh My God. Arpi, you are looking so beautiful. Just like a Princess."

Arpi- "Really ?? thanks a lot dear.. waise even you are looking nice"

Both of them were so engrossed in their conversation thet they failed to notice a pair of eyes watching them. Actually they were fixed on.. Arpita.

Manjari- "Chalo, Lets go in"

Arpi- "Okay. wait (she paused) where's RV .. Letme guess, He's late again.."

Manjari- (giggling) "As usual. Whats new?"

Both make their way towards the hall. They were awed at its beauty.

Arpi- " Gosh!! It looks so beautiful. "

Manjari-"hmm.. Afterall Shikha is very particular about such things. "

Shikha comes.

Shikha- " Hiee my darlings.. what took you so long?? I was waiting for you. Im actually bored. Papa Ki Business Parties are so boring" (she made a sad face)

Arpi- " Don't worry. Hum hai na. We'll Rock this party.. Oh yeah, Shikha, Very well decorated Hall."

Manjari-" Right Afterall all the arrangements were done under your supervision"

Shikha- " Ekdum sahi kaha. Where's RV?"

Manjari- " Is he ever on time? Don't worry, he's on his way."

After a while, a young, Dashing and Handsome guy enters the hall. All the girls, except for Arpi, Manjari & Shikha fixed their attention on Him. The trio had gone to freshen up.

His eyes were searching someone very desperately. He was getting restless as he was unable to find her. Soon anger started building up in him. He was just about to smash the glass which he was holding when suddenly something hit his elbow lightly. He turned around to see what it was & the sight cooled him. His anger vanished completely. He saw a girl wearing a beautiful dress, with hair left loose. Few strands on her shoulder. Make-up very lightly done. Lips were perfectly sculpted. Long Eyelashes. She was wearing a Diamond bracelet in her right hand. He stood there just staring at her while she was busy chatting with her friends. She didn't even notice him. He quickly but confidently made his way towards her.

Manjari- "Shikha, Do you have a charger? My phone's running out of battery."

Shikha- "Yes Why not. Come with me upstairs."

Arpi- " you two go ahead, I'll be here"

Both of them leave. Now Arpi is alone. The guy approaches her.

Guy- " hi.. you look beautiful"

Arpi- "thanks"

Guy- "Shall we Dance?"

Arpita was surprised, but she politely refused as she wasn't comfortable dancing with an unknown person. She was about to go when he caught her wrist and pulled her towards him in a corner.

Arpi- "Hey.. Let Go.."

Guy- "No one says NO to AVDHESH SINGH THAKUR."

She struggled to be free, but his grasp was strong for her.

Arpi- " Listen, I don't know who you are But I don't care."

Avi- "But I care Listen Honey, I just wanna dance with you."

Arpi- " But I don't."

He was now furious as well as amazed because for the first time a girl refused to dance with him. Now he was adamant on dancing with her. He moved closer to her and said-

" you Better say yes or I'll have to force you."

She was little scared.

Arpi- (angry)"Why do you want me? There are so many other girls in this party. Catch hold of them."

Avi- " you don't have to tell me what to do."

And with that he dragged her towards the dancefloor.

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Edited by KriYa_life - 13 January 2011 at 7:25am

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Yaaayyyyy
 
Im the first one to comment...
 
Ramona...
 
wooooowwwwww
 
Luuuuubd it..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
He is totally different frm Avi..
but still loved him....SmileSmileSmile
 

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shefads

Sorry for the late reply RamonaEmbarrassed....am little busy these days.... its okay... well it was a nice chapter...very well written but too shortLOLLOLLOL thanks a lot.. i guess i am too greedy and obsessed with you ff hehehe Winkbut plz increase the length of your chapter next time okay...LOL and update as fast as can! thank you Ramona!
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zash_LubUKriYa

wowwww!!!!!!!ramona dr......
jz read the first chap.......eventho i dont watch the serial,ur ff is simply goodthanks a lot dear ......!!!wil read the rest soon n comment.....
lub
azi lubb ya too honey..

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